The World of Naruto That Started with Being Slapped

There seems to be a problem with the timing of the author's character. Earlier, the bandit said that Orochimaru was a traitor, but Minato has not yet become Hokage. So the question is, how could Orochimaru defect?

I have just read Chapter 28 of this book, and I found that there are several big bugs in the book, the logic is extremely loose, and there are big problems: 1. Chapter 27 or Chapter 28 of the Matt Dai Eight Gate Dungeon incident. This matter must be classified as an S-class secret. Otherwise, other villages have already known about this technique. How can a person from an outside village know about it not long after joining? Is the title of the third generation Ninja hero fake? Is the Darkness of the Ninja Realm fake? I have already dragged you out for interrogation 2. The teaching of immortal arts and family secrets in Chapter 28 are tightly concealed. The core of the immortal arts training in a holy land channeling (at least the level of secret arts, cannot be passed on randomly), the Hokage cannot command and teach anyone. This is tantamount to robbery, is it possible? No other family would agree.

The name Ye Huan is a joke, does anyone have any impression of the name Ye Cang? What about more European and American names like Matt Kay and Matt Day?

Come on, author, ignore those comments. Those people say that they can't stand it, that they can't stand it, and that they can't accept it. They just want to read a cool novel, the kind of invincible cool novel in the first chapter where the main character appears with the Rinnegan on the left, the Tsansigan on the right, the Eye of the Moon on the forehead, half of the Ten Tails on the body, kicking Madara with his feet, and holding Kaguya in his arms. Or it's the kind of stallion story that accepts every one you see. There is more! You've already read the fanfic, let's talk about the drama? Can't accept it? All kinds of things like that, if fan fiction doesn't have the author's own elements in it, is that called fan fiction? It's better to watch Naruto anime. What are you talking about? Why don't you think it's a drama when you see the protagonist bringing the system, the protagonist bringing the pirate Shinigami or other abilities into Hokage? I just feel that the protagonist must have a system, must have pink eye, must have cataracts, must be amazing from the beginning, or must start everything within seconds within ten chapters. To these people, I can only say, you are so awesome, why don't you write a book yourself? Why bother reading what others have written?

It's not good to see the protagonist living in such a humble life even though he is destined to die. If he is not happy in life, he would rather be reckless to the end. It will be over after death, and he will continue to be reckless while alive! Humble, cruel, resigned, a little weak!

Ignorance is the original sin, Ye Cang is the name. . . There are some people in Neon whose surname is Qin, and there are many forms of single characters, but their names will not be Huan. . .

If you continue reading after forty-one chapters, you will still be impressed.

The protagonist's personality is too out of the ordinary. In other words, there is no protagonist's halo to forcefully write the protagonist's sense of déjà vu. Tossing Tuotuo into an orphanage to fend for himself is the best outcome.

Why does the author always like to inexplicably add commas to break sentences? Like, this…

My dear, the novel you wrote is pretty good, but sometimes the paragraphs are too long. Some people came in and read a few chapters and found that the writing was too dense, so they quit again. This will affect your collection

Ninja star? It took me a long time to figure out that it was the ninja world. It's understandable to be with Kai Ippi, but it's a bit of a death wish to be with the third generation Meppi after the genin exam. As the head of a village, he can be kind and kind to you, but is the protagonist's behavior setting up a character for himself? After learning the Eight Gate Dungeon, telling the Third and Fourth Generations that they would repay the favor was a bit too serious. You were just a genin at the time. Besides, shouldn't the person you should be grateful to the most be Haiichi? It was Haiyi who exchanged his military exploits and favors for the forbidden technique without even saying thank you to him. During the Nine-Tails Rebellion, the eight gates were opened to release ninjutsu, or a variant of the Rasengan. Are you kidding me? If it was so easy to use, not only ordinary jounin but at least elite jounin in Konoha could be replaced. If you can't open the eight gates and desperately try to open one or two gates, your strength would not only increase several times but also increase by a few points. Wouldn't it be easy during the Ninja World War?

The name is a joke. It would be great if you could use the full replacement function of txt. When writing novels, you still need to give people a sense of substitution, especially the names of fan fiction.

Some thoughts after reading this book. The five votes will be given first. First of all, I think the name of this book is really disgusting, and I feel that the name has already discouraged many people. Secondly, the author has his own unique style for the setting of the ninja world. It depends on how many readers the author can accumulate who accept this style. In the end, it depends on how long the author can persist.

The author's chakra design is unacceptable. 😤

A book that was delayed by its name. Before, I thought it was some systematic text dedicated to sap!

Take a look at Asakura Ye Wang. Old 😃

Hahahahahaha, it's really different. The comment section is a place where you can't see the joy in the article

I apologized for being dismissed at the beginning. Although it is very true, reading novels is just for happiness. I'm even more unhappy when I see this

If you have some strength, go for it. If the wave breaks down, use some intrigues, and so on.

I don't know why the inner description of the characters is like some primary school students' compositions. Why do we still have to write hard when the level is different? Too embarrassing.

Were there any people who were persuaded to quit after the first chapter?

Lj Only this

Alas, I persisted until I returned to the village and was poisoned.

Look at how refreshed I still feel after cutting it off... Speechless

How to say it. It's been given before. But after chapter 450, it got a little sloppy. It feels a bit like it's over in a hurry.

Dream-chan, will there be a female protagonist in this book?

Why does the author keep writing "scroll" as "revolving axis"? ? ?