Start with the Contract Elf

First of all, the biggest criticism of the story of this book is that there are too many events. It is okay to do events occasionally, but it will feel very boring if you do it frequently. I suggest that the author can introduce some mythical beasts and the like, and can also use this to expand the worldview and no longer be restricted to human society, or introduce a particularly large villain organization. In short, the protagonist cannot be brainless and invincible all the way. This book is not suitable for a brainless novel routine. In addition, you can refer to Digimon to make a more complex network evolution line. If the battle and setting cannot be the highlight of this book, then you can make evolution the highlight of this book. I hope these suggestions can help the author. This book is quite suitable to my taste. I hope this book can come out of its own worldview setting. In short, I hope my suggestions can help the author.

The writing is very good, I hope you can put it on the shelves!

The first 400 chapters are pretty good, completely readable, and enjoyable enough. The period when I went to college was probably the most enjoyable. I had full achievement points everywhere and was very comfortable. The author's writing style is also very humorous, and he is good at using emojis to express his words. It's the first time I've seen something like this. It's quite interesting. This is what I like better. But later on, the common problems of long novels appear: the collapse of combat power, the main narrative, and the thin characters. After the later stages, including the pets in the protagonist group, they all began to be "facialized". I basically couldn't see any bonds later on, only the feeling of "tool man" and "tool elf". The further you get to the back, the more regretful it becomes. I hope that I can pay more attention to the cultivation of emotions in my future writing. It doesn't matter if I open a dungeon when I have nothing to do, but I will stick to the main line from the end. I won't take a vacation except for upgrading and fighting monsters. There is a lack of transition period for normal replacement. I personally think it is a bit sloppy. Of course, I'm probably afraid of being called "water word count". This balance is really difficult to grasp. Hard to bear.

To be honest, my personal feeling is that if you can endure it before Chapter 234, what will happen next is a person who is greedy for life and afraid of death?

When others go to the battlefield, the elves and elves have been trained. The protagonist goes to the battlefield and hides behind, which makes us further realize that there is no problem even if there is no protagonist. What's the use of him? Why do all elven literature nowadays like to write like this? It is obviously a huge poisonous point in Elf literature. It's like there is no master in FGO, and a few followers save the human beings. If this is the case, who will play? ! The author should figure out who the reader is bringing in? It's fine if you want to show the charm of the elf, but you can't let the elf become a waste! Everyone who has played FGO knows that when playing FGO, you put yourself into the identity of the master. Although the servants are heroes, anti-heroes, and gods in history and fantasy, it is the [Master] who saves humanity in the end, not a certain high-ranking servant! Could it be that if the [Master] is highlighted, the charm of the servant cannot be shown? No, the krypton explosion has to be done. I hope the author will think more about it.

Very warm and loving. As far as it goes, it is a very good book, but this author is so abominable that he has broken all the good chapters. Finally, I hope I won't write it down.

Always liked it! Please hold on! I will keep chasing you, at least let me know that my chase has results!

It's not bad. Come on💪

Since I don't have a small amount of money at hand, I will write a book review and subscribe ~ Hahaha First of all, I really like the style of writing, it is very comfortable to read, and I don't have to hold back my emotions to burst out like this, the slap in the face is very simple Secondly, I would like to make some small comments. Personally, I think the author lacks a little bit of an outline of the main idea that touches people's hearts. Like "My Senior Brother is Too Steady", although the pig's feet are always struggling, the relationship between master and apprentice, brother and sister is very comfortable to watch. "The First Sequence" has always had its own main line, a big one, maybe it is ambition, or the love between children, it may be very simple, it may also be very sandy. Diao, "My Apocalyptic Territory" does have a very clear main line - the confrontation between the demon clan and Gao Wei (of course, the Tang Dynasty Lord later), but it is still unable to bring the readers' emotions into it. It does make people smile from time to time, and achieves a tacit understanding between the book and the readers. The reason why I say this is because I think the writing is very good (it has the appearance of a king/funny) and I really hope to go further In fact, after reading the last part, the only characters I can remember are Tang Yu, Yi Lian and Kong Liao. The latter two are almost always written about their strength. It is powerful, if there is any lack of emotional details, it can be summed up that the supporting characters only complement the protagonist, but have no personality of their own Finally, congratulations on the new book being put on the shelves, keep up the writing and ink (add more and more) cough cough Personally see it, if you don't like it, don't spray it

After reading more than 20 chapters, I personally feel that the plot and various settings are pretty good, but the description techniques are not very good. For example, the villain must have a "cold look" and a "gasp" when frightened (I really don't understand how to suck in breath, is it bad to say "fuck" when you have the time?). But overall this book is good and there are no major problems.

Just before I saw the subscription chapter, I probably won't subscribe for the time being. The overall rating is 3-4/5. If you haven't read similar articles, it should be rated 4 points. It's pretty good food for book shortages. The following is my personal opinion The overall writing style of the article is in the same general direction as the starting point in the past two years. It is more funny than light-hearted, and has a little more jokes. However, the overall look and feel is good, similar to Marvel products. It borrows the advantages of some popular books, but it is not Stitches. It is a creation with the author's personal understanding and secondary design. Reason for abandonment: The traces of elf interactive reference in a certain book are too obvious. Other reviews of this book have talked about it a lot. I almost abandoned the book next door because of the elf character set by an Internet-addicted girl. I really couldn't bear the trainer turning into a pendant. And the parents of the main characters in this book, I was really "???". The underage intermediate spiritual master + provincial champion is not as big as the so-called cute caterpillar card. Although I know it is a joke, I personally don't like it. Later, Mouquan actually gradually began to write less about Internet addiction characters. In the past month, he focused on training and tactics (and of course showing off in competitions). . Wish the author a great sale, passers-by drift by

What is the role of the protagonist? I don't see the importance and irreplaceability of the protagonist. If you can't do this, it's a failure. Especially when entering the battlefield, he only lets the baby go to the battlefield and hides behind him. Even if this makes sense, it is still a huge poisonous point in pet stories! The spirit envoy and the elves should depend on each other and defeat the enemy together. To be honest, even if the protagonist dies, his pet can still live well, but what else can the protagonist do without the elves?

I thought the meat I had raised for a long time would be fun to slaughter and eat, but the result was that it was still not fat enough. Am I not patient enough? 🤔

It's so hard to come up with a name, my hair is falling out, and the author is crowdfunding to write a book~ We are now recruiting all kinds of elves. It must have a name, attributes, and evolution type, preferably simple and easy to understand. (PS: It is difficult to appear in the early stage if it is too strong) What other supporting roles, introduction, detailed attributes, feel free to do so. Attributes include: metal, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, ice and thunder, light and darkness, illusion, poisonous ghost... As well as attributes not discovered by the alliance and so on.

The author should build a fan group. Then he can hold activities during festivals and be informed in it. {"NickName":"Ink Finger Key","UserId":312859723}Please🤭

Nowadays, this kind of time-traveling or gold-finger writing has a common problem, or it can be said that it is the same with all novice novels. It goes too far and makes other people look like trash. I don't see how hard the protagonist works, how much perseverance he has, or what kind of extreme environment he has experienced. We can't even see how smart the protagonist is. He somehow becomes invincible by cheating. He also keeps saying that he relies on hard work. In the early stage, this may be more suitable for the readers of Shuangwen, but in the later stage, the combat effectiveness will definitely collapse, and if it is always a pretense routine, no matter how much readers like it, they will be tired of it.

This book is quite interesting. It doesn't matter if there are a lot of Pokemon traces. After all, isn't it nice to have ready-made ones? But what is rare is that there is a lot of self-innovation. As long as you can maintain this, it is better to refer to Digimon and other pet streams. I hope you can continue to have your own ideas. Come on ＾0＾~🤓

I have also read your first book for free. Goodbye before I finish it. It's up to you to figure this book out for yourself Please give it a boost

This outrageous world structure cannot even be justified. There are Pokemon everywhere, and everyone has one Pokemon, so there are related industries. Trainers are the mainstream profession. It is even more outrageous. Everything can become a Pokemon, and then people have to spend tens of thousands of dollars to buy Pokemon? ? Can this still become mainstream? The state's subway construction only has a long payback period. Do you get any payback? The national medical insurance subsidy is tens of billions. What is the concept of at least hundreds of thousands per capita? Is this lab stage? Forget about military use, my Dongfeng is not worth more than this? Mass production, accurate, reliable, fast, ultra-long range. All things can become elves, aren't they more numerous than humans? It's outrageous to spend tens of thousands of dollars to buy elves that are more numerous than humans. With these tens of dollars of talent, you still have to pick the rest and pay the IQ tax? If I buy a Husky, the price of a fighter will not exceed several times the normal price, which is ridiculous.

The theme and setting of this book are very good. You don't have to stick to Pokemon. After all, this book is also very good! I hope the author will persevere and write a novel that can surpass Chong Mei

I just finished reading the last chapter. The author may be tired. At the end, it is obvious that a lot of progress has been completed. But it is undeniable that this is a masterpiece of native elf literature, and it can be regarded as half a fairy tale. Whether it is the original Silkworm Baby, Er Harin, Big Fat Bear, or the later Shy Yan, Die Xiaodie, and Dumb Crow, they are undoubtedly extremely successful characters. Even after reading for several months, you can clearly recall their personalities, preferences, and their unique charm. In comparison, Fu Fu Ai Ai and Xiao Cai may not be so outstanding, but they are still impressive. Personally, the image of the Vulcan Crow is the most outstanding part of the book, and even once overshadowed the protagonist of the book, Die Xiaodie. Perhaps we see something very similar to ourselves in the Dead Crow. He does not have a good background, nor does he have a good talent. All he can rely on is his own efforts and risking his life. Among a group of companions who can be said to be extremely talented, Xiaodie, with his mortal body and god-slaying body, can be said to be invincible in combat aside from Die Xiaodie. Just like the title of the last chapter, cutting open the legendary road with one sword, the stupid crow killed countless favored men with no "qualification", and even more, with no "qualification", he broke through the door of legend by himself without relying on the help of the protagonist. To be honest, I was shocked at that moment. In summary, elves are slow to develop, and become more exciting in the later stages. You can see a lot of them in Su Hao and his partners, some of which are funny, some of warmth, some of mutual encouragement, and some of family affection. The world described by the author made me yearn for it. Maybe the real world is cruel, but maybe the process of growing up is the most precious thing.

The author is great, especially Silkworm himself has a soul and will find ways to make money for himself as a trainer. It is no longer the way of writing Pokémon fandom in the past where trainers constantly challenge and interact with the lives of Pokémon without a lot of Pokémon. The interaction is very cute, especially Gunuo's plus emojis. The picture is really awesome, but there are a few updates. I hope the author will update more... Gunuo ◎↖⇔↗◎

This book was okay in the early stage, but became very popular in the later stage. It has a lot of poisonous points. The protagonist is a freshman. He doesn't do research to save money, reads materials to gain intelligence value, and works hard to develop his own strength, but he messes around everywhere. He wastes his precious golden time on being a patrolman, a teacher and other chores. He thinks he is awesome, but he is a fool. College is the learning stage, and it is a critical period to concentrate on improving yourself. Once you graduate, it will be difficult for you to study with peace of mind. The protagonist built a laboratory and became a sheep herder. In reality, if someone behaves like this, they are basically useless.

Big boost for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง I like this kind of pet story the most

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What can I say? The author's books are all a bit samey. You can almost tell what they are without reading them later. What's more, the most annoying thing to me is that without the protagonist, human beings and the world develop slowly and slowly. As soon as the protagonist comes out, there will be all kinds of annihilation crises, forcing the protagonist to increase his level crazily in the later period. Basically, several books have this routine, which is a bit boring.

The protagonist obviously grew up with the ability close to his fingers, but he always said that he relied on his own efforts. He was so shameless that it made people sick. He always had a condescending feeling towards the elves. He even rushed to use the rewards (such as computers) he promised to give to the elves. He already had millions of his own essence. Ling asked him for 2,000 yuan, and even charged usury from the elf. The whole book felt like imitating the "elf master", but the protagonist's personality was very bad. At least it made me feel nondescript and disgusting. At least the protagonist in the other book would never take away the rewards promised to the elf, and he was also very kind to the elf.

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Phantom Butterfly : Focus on illusion & soul (law) Dream Fairy Butterfly : Focus on illusion & dreams (law) Ultimate? Evolution Sacred Butterfly of Creation: Focuses on the soul & miracles (supreme) Sacred Butterfly of Creation: Focuses on virtual reality & creation (supreme) emmmm I don't think the author can control it, so just take a look. PS: Please don't be too arrogant                                                                                  Dream-playing fairy butterfly                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ​The Holy Butterfly of Creation (PS: Because I only found one picture available, I chose black and white as Creation. Pfft, I really couldn't find any other pictures)

The book is so good. Why are there so few comments. It's like reading another divine book about to rise. Just as I predicted that the global martial arts will be the same. Come on