My Salvation Game Came True

Maybe the setting of the evil god is a bit hidden, but I discovered it after reading the entire book in nine days. The protagonist learned in a certain chapter that there are ten evil gods, but when describing the red moon swallowing the evil god, it was stated that it was divided into nine, and in the end it was discovered that there was no evil god in the fallen emperor evil god. From this, it can be inferred that the original evil god was divided into nine parts, and the emperor of the Glorious Empire used special means to obtain the same status as the evil god, but his own power belonged to the evil world itself.

First of all, the style of this book is a bit mixed. The first part is more like a light novel, and the second part is like an online novel, but the description style of a light novel pops up from time to time, like a King Kong Barbie among a group of Barbie dolls, which is very abrupt. Secondly, it was written from the perspective of the male protagonist at first, but later it became the perspective of God. Finally, it was too short, I finished reading it in less than 2 days. Summary: Don't use your brain when reading a book, don't analyze whether it's logical or not, and ignore discomfort. This book is okay, and it's not expensive either. There are only a dozen points in one chapter. It's so cheap, so don't pick and choose.

This book is getting better and better as it is written, but it is a pity that it is not famous. Otherwise, if the first 100 chapters attract more people, this book will become a big hit. Although the author's writing skills are not as good as those of great gods, his aura cannot be compared to those great gods who have forgotten their original intentions.

To put it simply, I am a nearly 20-year-old bookworm who has been pirated Taiwanese physical tomes and turned to online literature. I have watched the development of some of the genres on the market. The weird theme has been purified by He Crab and is now moving towards a new model. Because it is difficult to write a weird and main theme that caters to the public's 404 or poisonous points, so it is inevitable that there will be settings that are deliberately diluted and mainstream. After all, the author still has to be right. This book is one of the rare good things that I have seen in writing about weirdness and spiritual energy recovery. The outline is too short and I feel that it has not been spread out yet, so I can't see how much potential it has. However, it should be a sideline to the main theme. In addition to complaining about being short and weak, I still need to praise it. After all, the main body of readers of online articles cannot be described in one sentence, so the author can put down simple white articles, brainless articles, and start writing stories in his own heart. It is worthy of praise and support Okay, the author did not pay me, so the praise is only over a hundred words. Here's another update: Be a real man and refuse to be short.

I personally think that this book is pretty good in all aspects, but there is one thing that feels like there is too much nonsense. I suggest that the author can streamline the content. For example, content like "xxxxxx... Ah, bah, xxxxxxx" often appears in the text. Once or twice, it will be enough. If you read too much, it will be really boring.

I haven't watched it for almost a month. Why did I update it so much

I have been raising books until I forgot 😣I am one of them. If it weren't for this event, I would have forgotten... Time flies so fast...

I can accept it up to Chapter 337, and some parts are even good, but can the enemies be changed (evil god believers)? I can get in touch after changing the map, or encounter other things, I can only say that I am really tired of it 😂

Although it's not particularly amazing at what I've read so far, and it's not so good that I couldn't stop reading chapter after chapter, and I skipped some chapters, it's still well written. It's just that there seems to be no special development behind some foreshadowing. Some of the anticipated plots are just briefly mentioned without detailed descriptions, which is a bit lower than my expectations. I really like the previous scene describing the development of Xinhuo thousands of years ago. Although it is in the form of CG cutscene, it is still shocking and touching. Come on, author, I will continue to read

I have read many behind-the-scenes novels of this series and would like to give some suggestions. I hope the author can write better and better. 1 As for the name "evil", the protagonist knows that these are called "evil" because of the salvation game, but the official name can be different, such as evil things and invisible things. It can be told by the protagonist later. If the names of the two are the same from the beginning, it will give people a sense of accident, but the author has already written it, so this is not a big deal, it is a small detail. 2. The protagonist is the savior. What kind of salvation does the author want to write? I think it's better to focus on the heavy side of salvation, otherwise your evil god will be killed in the middle of laughter as soon as you write it, which would be a bit out of character. Therefore, the protagonist can play tricks in the early stage, or jump out of his psychological activities, but in the later stage, the protagonist should become more rational and calm, and leave the jokes to the supporting characters to appropriately enliven the atmosphere (when the atmosphere is very depressing at the stage you wrote) 3. The behind-the-scenes flow of the salvation text, group portraits are relatively good, a stage for one person is not in line with the salvation organization, that is personal heroism. Also, your members are all drawn out. Do you want to give them personalities? Or just a simple tool? In this process, the protagonist controls a group of "puppets" to save the world. Wouldn't it be better to write about a group of people fighting against the fear of the unknown for their world and family, and to write about the shining points of human nature? 4. Regarding the strength of the official, although the official does not have a golden finger, he represents the country and there are a large number of highly intelligent talents behind him. The protagonist's organization can cooperate with the official. It is impossible for the protagonist or a member of the organization to do everything by himself. He is not a nanny. If humans don't save themselves, what reason is there for others to save them? Therefore, the officials should try their best to understand the reason for their appearance, find all ways to eliminate them, and even develop weapons to eliminate them. This will increase the combat power of the two organizations and lay the foundation for the emergence of evil gods later. (At this time, the golden finger may be able to smoke more diversified things) 5. The time point when "evil" appears. When they appear, the strong ones should appear as late as possible, and the weak ones should appear in large numbers in the early stage to give the protagonist and the government official time to react. Medium intensity may appear appropriately to sound the alarm for the two and promote their cooperation. 6. The degree of destruction of the evil, since it is a salvation, there must be death, and there will be a large number of casualties, large-scale terrain destruction, destruction of the city, the development of the protagonist organization may be slower than the time point when the strong evil appears, highlighting the sense of tension, otherwise I will see As long as you know that the protagonist can solve every incident effortlessly and without any casualties, it would be boring to see hundreds of pictures (so it is necessary to create some three-dimensional characters and write them to death, otherwise how to highlight the tragedy of protecting the world?), You have to capture the readers' hearts. In the mid-term, the people will gradually know that this thing exists. (So ​​it is important to diversify the items extracted, such as the mirror space similar to the ancient one?) 7. Above, if the author wants to write a cool article, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Reading this book makes me feel ten years younger.

Speechless, haven't you made it public yet? Xinhuo has already essentially become the leader of Blue Star, but why is it still equivalent to working for various countries? In the people's perception, it will always be just a mysterious department of the country, forcing the masterminds behind the scenes to flow

Although the author is a big shot, I still want to say No heroine, no heroine, no heroine! ! ! Without him, I'm afraid the author will accidentally write it down😭

My top priority would be to grow the organization, and then secretly be active around the world, recruiting people as it goes. When the scale grows, it will turn from covert to overt, and export members to countries all over the world. Before that, being officially exported is too downgraded. 🤫 If the scale is not enough to cooperate with the official, the official will definitely find out the details and take the dominant position. If there is nothing wrong with the protagonist, then he will not be a savior but a worker. . The scale is so large that members are all over the world, and officials all over the world have to be "guided". Only then is it called a prairie fire, and only then is it called a mentor. 😃 There is another question, how do you calculate the background of apostles drawn from cards like Black Knife, people from other worlds whose world was destroyed by weirdness? Did An Jianyou see a world full of zombies? Is the story going to be expanded to another world? Or something else?

It's so easy to see╮（╯＿╰）╭

It fits the setting so well 😁

The beginning was okay, but after it was released, it started to feel like establishing a sect in a fantasy world. After more than 100 chapters, I was eager to throw out various treasures to improve the sect's facilities, but it was not precise. The impact of the weird on real life was not developed. The more I wrote, the more it became like a fantasy novel. The characteristics of the weird invasion and mysterious recovery were not written out.

After reading Chapter 11, I generally feel that it is okay, but I also want to briefly talk about my own opinions and personal opinions, so that everyone can discuss it reasonably. First of all, I personally feel that there will be no shortage of the consecrating magic weapon, at least not as cherished as in the book. If this situation really happens in reality, with the country's responsiveness, it will definitely gather all the masters and start training new people. (Whether it is useful or not, try it first and then talk about it.) New people will bring items like rosary beads with them when they start learning. It has been 6 or 7 years now, and there are a lot of these things, right? Maybe there will be a few born Taoists and Buddhists, and one year will be as good as others' ten years. Especially if they are found to be useful, they will definitely support these projects. With the efforts of the whole country, how can there be a shortage of magical instruments? Then there is the question: Is the author learning various writing styles? Sometimes there is no foreshadowing, it is suddenly sensational, and sometimes it is deliberately funny and a little embarrassing.

Fang You was sitting in front of the computer typing, and suddenly a pop-up window popped up: "Are you willing to save the world? It's easier to save the world by playing the rescue game!" Fang You: "??? What?" "Ding, 360 has cleared the virus for you" Fang You: "360 is easy to use, nice😁😁" The whole book is complete.

That year, I was 9 years old and she was 11 years old. I told her that I would marry her in the future, and she naughtily replied: "Okay"! That year, I was 12 years old and she was 14 years old. She was a head taller than me. I raised my head and told her that I liked her. She listened blankly and said nothing, then turned her head and stopped looking at me. At that time, I was 18 years old and she was 20 years old. I had been working outside for a year, and she was still attending a key university. I could no longer say that I liked her, because I felt that I was not worthy of her at all. I kept what I wanted to say to her to myself, and I would tell her everything when I was worthy of her. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. I was more concerned about whether she was a wife and a mother. My career was gradually getting on the right track and I was no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Dongguan, in a dim room, just the two of us. After a long silence, she spoke: "Eight hundred, seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will charge you five hundred." I tried my best not to tremble anymore and said, "Come with me." Her eyes glazed over for a moment, then flickered, and then like a fire extinguished, she said, "I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first." She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being held by two policemen, her face was horrified and miserable. The TV did not even cover her face, letting her dangle in front of me, letting her bump, bump, and shatter in my heart! The last time I saw her, I looked up at her, and for a long time, he left without leaving a word. The next time I heard from her was a year later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I can't accept it. Anyway, I feel very depressed. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her, I don't know how ugly that smile was, and she smiled at me as innocently as she did when she was seven years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. I couldn't help but shed tears. She said in a low tone: "I... I want to ask you, when will it be updated!!!"

Congratulations to the author for finishing the book, and congratulations to myself and all the book friends who have been reading it all the way to the end. It is not easy to read, and if you can find a book that suits your appetite, you may not be able to read it until the end. Even if you have read a hundred books, you may not be able to read it until the end. Let us applaud ourselves here.

After reading Chapter 25, I feel there is something wrong with the characterization. The protagonist is okay, timid, lustful, funny, and has a little sense of responsibility. Although it's not very lovable, it's not boring either. But Jiang Xue's portrayal felt very inconsistent. A special investigator first wasted his life energy to kill soldiers, and then was told about his psychological activities after that. It gave me the feeling that he had not been in a few fights and was a little girl. But this is inconsistent with the aloofness and the identity of the special investigator who just appeared. There is also a bit of forced sensationalism, what if you never come back, and a dialogue about no regrets in this life. And the fight is over, did we forget something? Damn it, the seriously injured! I can see that I am trying to be funny. But it's funny regardless of the occasion, but it really doesn't feel funny. And to put it another way, this kind of comedy is relatively straightforward. Not even remotely funny. The most powerful comic in the novel is "The Traveler Has Three". The curse and the confidence he wrote about my brother are both quite good. It is recommended to refer to it. Actually, despite these points, I quite like this book. I hope some thought can be put into characterization. For example, don't write and never return. It is about two investigators who have been friends for many years, and then one of them faces a high-level mystery. The other one suddenly stopped him and said that he would invite you to the theater when you come back The other one said yes. The man suddenly said loudly and in a dramatic tone, what does the Great Sage want to do here? The investigator's back, which was slightly stooped due to his age, suddenly straightened up. Singing the same answer, step on the southern sky and break the sky. Then the two laughed. No one said the next thing. Just give a background like this. Don't be direct and never come back. Just like you who has no regrets in this life. You can insert a senior to protect you and sacrifice to protect the people. Then you read the suicide note and saw that you have no regrets in this life. Then he decided to stay and attract the monsters. I thought silently in my heart, do I have no regrets in this life? This kind of a little opinion, hope for better.

The time span is set a bit short It seems that it hasn't even been a year since the appearance of Wei? How many months has it been since the protagonist awakened? Response departments in various countries have been established too quickly. Normally, it takes one year to establish a new department. It is estimated that the lines of authority and responsibilities have not been clearly drawn yet.

About 45% of the way through, the protagonist suddenly disappeared, and some of the content was so repetitive that I suddenly didn't want to watch it anymore.

After going around in circles, there are very few behind-the-scenes group portraits that can be read, and I can only read this one and the one about the indigenous people. The recently released book "Creating a Salvation Organization from Scratch" feels like a portrait of the characters, and the progress is very fast. I can only come back to read this book and the natives again.

This ending is wrong. If time is used to kill the evil god, then everyone should experience the timeline of the last week, rather than forcing sensationalism: the protagonist takes the evil god into the timeline, making it seem like they both die together. Finally, after a hundred years, he comes back with the sentence "I'm back, where did you come back from?"

When I saw that the timeline in Chapter 155 could travel through the past and the future and affect the present, I didn't want to read it. However, with the idea that the virtual past could not affect the present, I took a look in the comment area and found that there was no need to read it anymore. In my opinion, Chapter 155 is already over.

The setting of the theme is still okay, but after more than 200 chapters, it becomes a bit uncontrollable. It develops too fast and then imposes the setting in a large space. The development of the base is described from the perspective of various supporting characters, which is not as sophisticated as before.

Seeing the divine pupil laughing to death, Blue Star version listener: Tian Tiezui: The last chapter of the book said: "In Blue Star at that time, there were great demons intruding in the sea, and evil snakes entrenched in the mountains. Teacher Xinhuo summoned all the immortals to restore a bright world to the world. Legend has it that the teacher once said when he went on an expedition. :..." Mentor: "Although I have no intention of competing, I am ignorant of the suffering of the people. I only want to clean up the world and protect a corner of the world. That was Blue Star's first [contract], and now the final [contract] has finally been drawn up."

Has the author changed his insistence on the setting? The super prize pool has 10,000 destiny points and you can draw ten consecutive draws once. After playing the wave, it is 130,000. Now, you can only draw ten consecutive draws 13 times. I am speechless. Isn't it so rigorous?