Global Fragrance

Not bad, quite interesting. No one? I'll sneak into the sofa on the first floor!

I would like to make a suggestion, do not use "Xiaoqiu" when describing in the third person. This is a spoken word. It is recommended to use the full name. The same two words, but the reading experience is completely different.

That female ghost is the enemy of the protagonist. She has killed the protagonist several times. Why should she be accepted as a servant? Sometimes the servant is one of our own. There are other ghosts who can be accepted as servants. Why should we choose this one? And sometimes I feel that the protagonist does things too freely and is being led by others.

It's very well written. The author is a trumpet reader. A newcomer doesn't have the skill and brainpower. Visually, this novel can be in the top ten. I suggest that the author and the editor discuss it more. This type of novel is easy to be harmonized.

. . . This title, I thought it was Gao Wu

Not bad (⊙o⊙), interesting

Fire Tongs Liu Ming, but the protagonist's progress in the world is too fast, right?

I don't know if the author didn't write an outline. It was so good at the beginning, but it started to fly at the end. It was uncomfortable to watch. (´ . .̫ . `)