After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Became a Drama Queen

I thought it was pretty good when I first read it, but now I feel that the heroine is very brainless. She has nothing to say but slanders the hero in her heart. She seems to have done nothing by scolding the hero. I feel that this article is not good for the heroine except for the hero. Originally, my sister has changed for the better after being saved by her, but then she was forced to write her as a jealous, petty, and bad person. Is this to support the heroine? So fake. It doesn't matter that the male protagonist can hear what's in his heart. What the hell is being allergic to women? Wasn't Dangdang allergic to these sisters before? Didn't the author say that the male protagonist was a sister before the heroine traveled through time? Can I understand this? The heroine is surrounded by bad people. All in all a bit disappointing

The comments are all right. The heroine has bad views. Yan Mo and Yan's father have always been very good to the heroine. Whenever she encounters something, she will scold Yan Mo in her heart. No one else dares to say anything. She is a bully and afraid of the strong.

It made me laugh so hard, the drama in my heart was so exciting! If Xia Qianyu knew that Yan Mo could hear her inner thoughts, she would have been struck by lightning.

Gou Mo couldn't bear to hear such a dog-like man. It was too unpleasant. Reading a novel is not about you scolding people. It doesn't matter if you don't have a good impression at first. But after reading more than ten chapters, you are still scolding a man, which is boring.

I have abandoned the article, and there is still no main plot. There are few male and female protagonists, but many supporting roles. I don't know what Shangguan Chong is for. There are too many other characters, and they are all just soy sauce. It feels like the characters of the article are still at the same level ten years ago. A surgeon opens a barber shop, or some fairy character. In any profession, you have to work hard to be rewarded, rather than just eating and drinking and becoming the best in the industry! The funny thing at the beginning is acceptable, but there is no main character in the back and there is a contradiction. He obviously saved the younger sister's life, but the younger sister is not a completely black character. Later, she is forced to be smart and hates the heroine. Also, wasn't the heroine awesome at the beginning? Why did he become mentally retarded again later? ? ? Please be more serious about your writing, please? Why is it that the author who has already written 11 articles before is still writing at this level? Can you think about it?

I was fooled by the cover, and I accidentally clicked on it I just finished reading the whole book, and I feel that this book is quite interesting without having to use my brain to read it But I still have something to say. It doesn't really matter if the plot is ridiculous, but basically every chapter of this book is filled with a lot of writing errors and aliases. Many times the preface does not match the subtitles, and there are many There are serious bugs in the plot. For example, the eldest son of the Yan family asked the second son to go abroad. At this time, the place was on his own sofa, but the second son thought that it was lucky that he had fastened his seat belt, otherwise he would have jumped up. I wanted to say that it turns out that rich people usually sit on the sofa with safety belts and wear safety belts to communicate with each other. For ordinary people like me, the strange postures have increased

The more I read this novel, the more irritable I become. I have been complaining about Yan Mo all day long. Why don't you just say it? Yan Mo seems to be easy to talk to. He doesn't do anything and wants to be an ordinary person. Why don't you leave the Yan family. You are wronged all day long and you don't say anything. You are a bunch of top-notch people. Is there so much right and wrong in high school?

Actually, I feel that Su Muchen is more suitable as the male protagonist. Childhood sweethearts support each other throughout their lives. Although it is based on the silly female bed, there may be some overbearing CEO brother falling in love with his adopted sister, but it is too bloody. Yan Mo is more like a protector behind the scenes. Yan Mo's ability to hear the heroine's heart is a fusion of the two people's hearts. The relationship between the two people should also be an emotion above family affection. Rather than some bloody brother-sister relationship.

There are a lot of psychological descriptions of swearing. It is wrong to curse both good and bad people. I am very disgusted with these curse words. This in itself is an uneducated behavior. Personally, I think it would be better to complain instead.

I can't stand it anymore. This heroine is complaining about others pretending to be white lotus. Don't complain about others pretending to be white lotus, but she has also become such a person. Alas, maybe I don't know how to appreciate it. I hope the more I write, the better.