
Konoha's Punch-In System
木叶之打卡系统
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Test the poison with your own body, it is extremely poisonous and there is no cure. Please give up and give up.
I would like to ask the author, in Chapter 40, what does it mean when Hinata blushes at the protagonist? Are you trying to poach the prince? Don't write in such a disgusting way. Or is it your own lust?
Conjectures and suggestions about the art of Flying Thunder God
How to learn the Flying Thunder God Technique and how to use it are two different concepts, and the author confused them. The learning process cannot be explained. You still need to rely on talent, because "talent" is the only official requirement for the flying thunder god technique. "It's not difficult for those who can understand it, but it's not difficult for those who are difficult." The more specific you are, the more loopholes you will have, so before I suggested using metaphysics to deal with it. For example, metaphysical elements such as spiritual power, meditation effects, reincarnation chakra, luck, etc., Combined with various ninjutsu with spells and runes, can overcome the problem of talent. Maybe he joined the "Thunder God Cult" by chance to acquire the technique and learned this ninjutsu just to join in the fun (funny). There are many speculations about the art of Flying Thunder God. The mainstream still believes that it was created based on necromancy. Of course, I do not refute this view. There are just some "writing methods" in the book that are not advisable. First, this trick is not original to the author of this book. At the same time, there is very little official information on time and space ninjutsu, and it is impossible to determine the relevant training conditions. Second, the protagonist already knows the direction of cultivation before he has completed it, and it is explained from the perspective of the protagonist, which does not make sense in terms of cause and effect. So I suggest that the author can overturn and change his previous ideas while practicing the art of flying thunder god. Various professional academic theories can be used to improve credibility and make readers feel superior, and metaphysical factors can also be used to solve a problem. Or simply use the simplest method, "there are effects first, then there are causes", which is more trouble-free. Many authors next door have the routine of "learn this trick first, then elaborate on the idea". This is just like people who talk about a lot of success theories may not be successful, but the theories of successful people are often accepted by others. ——Clues—— The art of Flying Thunder God is mainly used for space shuttle. It cannot transfer the position arbitrarily. It can only be transferred to the designated position through the mark of the rune pattern of the art. You need your own [Chakra] to match your own [Spell Pattern] to initiate teleportation. Advancing can use chakra to correspond to multiple spells, completing the transfer between spells. Normal use of Flying Thunder God's Technique consumes very little! Very few! Very rarely, the consumption is related to the volume of the transferred object. There is no requirement for physical strength, which is different from the art of heavenly sending. Three people can jointly activate the Flying Thunder God Technique at the same time, which is officially called the "Flying Thunder Formation Technique". Time and space ninjutsu is a ninjutsu that allows the user or objects to freely travel between real space and different dimensions. The known time and space ninjutsu does not require seals. The protagonist currently does not have a psychic beast, so the "psychic technique" in the skill should be a non-blood contract summon, such as Tiantian's space scroll and Sasuke's shuriken rune hidden in his wrist guard. Naruto used his shadow clone to extract the senjutsu chakra, and then his true body reversely channeled the shadow clone. After returning to his true body, he released the shadow clone to replenish the senjutsu chakra. What needs to be explained here is that since the shadow clone cannot achieve a blood contract, the spell can only be summoned by reaching a certain contract corresponding to the spell. About forward channeling and reverse channeling, it should refer to the direction between the techniques. The person being channeled does not know that he or she is being channeled, nor does he know the destination. When Jiraiya was a child, he used the art of channeling without signing a contract with a psychic beast, and channeled himself to Mt. Miaomu, during which time he passed through a passage. Mutual multiplication of detonating talismans is also a spell summoning. Most people do not learn space ninjutsu through practice. ——Reference—— There are two problems with arcane ninjutsu, one is that it is difficult to learn, and the other is that it is difficult to practice. Perception, reaction speed, and chakra amount are application abilities, not learning thresholds. Failure to use them does not mean that you cannot learn them. There are many space ninjutsu. Those that use mental energy and eye power are called superpowers, and those that use chakra are called ninjutsu. Concerning spatial perception, this is not really needed. If you practice the art of Flying Thunder God, you only need to know where the art is, because it cannot be moved at will, so what is the use of sensing it? Some people say that perception techniques generally highlight the key points or slow down the movement. There is no such scene when the original technique is used. Moreover, Obito has not noticed that Minato has sealed the technique for more than ten years. Since the explanation does not make sense, why not just do it simply. Before the Flying Thunder God guided the thunder to transfer the Tailed Beast Jade, Minato had made a seal. Perhaps it was some kind of sealing or psychic technique used to open a space to temporarily store the Tailed Beast Jade. The protagonist knows too little about Onmyoji's knowledge of spells, runes, and patterns, such as sealing, psychic summoning, and curse sealing. The protagonist himself has no experience of traveling through the real world and the world of different dimensions many times. Only by being good at observation can he learn easily. The protagonist belongs to Soul Transmutation. Learning the art of spiritualization may awaken the talent of space. You still have to develop your brain and improve your mental strength. This also explains why three people can use Flying Thunder God. "Three cobblers, topped by Zhuge Liang". If the original author thinks so, it still implies that it is because of insufficient brain power.
Some tips on escape technique combinations v2.0
In fact, the combination of Feng Shui is not unusual. Most authors will write about Ice Escape, and I suggest the author to look up "Taiwan Escape". ... Water Release itself will have different powers depending on its purity, composition, and molecular arrangement. Therefore, some authors will polish Water Release and develop their own original ninjutsu. Such as high-density fluids, highly toxic volatilization, blood control, etc. Another direction is to follow the original work's use of "technique". For example, water mirror technique, water breaking technique, hydration technique, atomization technique, frost concealment technique, etc. Another usage of water is actually guessed based on the origin of Beilihu's escape from the theatrical version of "Heir of the Will of Fire". After Beiliu's breath is collected, Mist and Hidden Zhongji derives from the Dark Escape, and after Beiliu's breath is collected, the ability of the blood successor cannot be used. Through "balance", the order, proportion, shape, and nature are changed, becoming another blood successor limit. In addition to the frost concealment technique, Zhongji also has a special perception technique. I guess this perception technique is related to water. Perception is the use of spiritual energy, and Beiliuhu's meditation is likely to be the fusion between spirit (soul) and water. In the original work, in addition to the pupil technique and some blood inheritance, one of the ninjutsu about absorbing chakra is "Water Release: Big Shark Bullet Jutsu" (Kisaki Kisame x Metkai). Perhaps the author of the original animation has also heard that "there is a fish in the North Ming Dynasty, and its name is Kun. The Kun is so big that I don't know how many thousands of miles it is." He thinks that "Ming" is related to water. At the same time, "Ming" means dark, deep and invisible to light, and it also has allusions to the soul, which inspired the fusion effect of spirit + water. Of course, this is just a guess, and it also depends on the setting of the author of this book. After developing your spiritual abilities, combined with your understanding of Water Escape, you will have the opportunity to create "Dark Escape". ... The most important characteristic of Wind Release is "cutting". The most powerful one known is the Wind Release Dayama Rasengan. Other wind attribute ninjutsu are similar and have not changed much. For example, Bai Yun's sword-drawing technique "True~Sky~Sword" in the morning, Danzo's "True~Sky~Ha", Temari's "Kamaitachi" and so on. If you want to pursue speed, simple wind escape is not the best choice. Apart from space ninjutsu, I first recommend "swift escape". Swift escape is very controversial. Some people say it is thunder + fire, and some say it is wind + fire. However, the consensus is that the prototype of the speed escape is "flame booster". You must first understand fire escape. The second is Thunder Release. The Thunder Release Ninja Taijutsu is still a secret of Yunyin Village. Finally, there is Taijutsu, which consumes a lot of energy. Taijutsu training is directly related to physical potential. For example, Sakura's efficiency in practicing Taijutsu is 5, Xiao Li's is 10, and Naruto's is 30+. There is an old saying that "medicine and martial arts do not separate families." If you know Chinese medicine or are engaged in cell research, practicing Taijutsu will get twice the result with half the effort. If you want to fly, wind escape is still very useful, such as Xiaonan's paper secret technique (paper escape), Feng Ying's magnetic escape (earth + wind), etc. If you want to be original, you can learn senjutsu and combine the wind attribute to create the "Dance of the Sky" in "Dragon Ball", but after all, senjutsu cannot be turned on all the time, and Namikaze Minato only lasts a few minutes. What needs to be added is that the magic of Miaomu Mountain is related to the amount of chakra, the magic of Ryūchi Cave is related to brain development and spiritual aspects, and the magic of Shigulin Forest is related to vitality and physical constitution. It all depends on which fairy art to learn, but if you want to open it for a long time, you need different talents. ... It would be great if the protagonist could use thunder escape, because thunder + water = LAN (laser) is more powerful. The combination of Wind Release and Thunder Release under specific conditions can make them invisible and invisible (such as Boruto's Rasengan). Therefore, I think Arashi + Wind can even simulate the "sunshine" in "The King of Fighters". The physical skills in the book are related to "clouds", and the clouds themselves are charged. If the opponent is a Thunder Release user, it will be a tragedy. Wind Release can also blow away the clouds and mist, or use Fire Release to heat it below and the air will rise, which can also break this trick... Cloud + Fire/Wind = Suspension Effect, Cloud + Thunder = Kirin Ninjutsu, Water + Thunder + Fire = Mixed Explosion of Hydrogen + Oxygen (Cloud Explosive Bomb). The three-state cycle of wind + water + thunder/fire = water, and then use the Rasengan to bring it together, maybe it can form a three-point return to the original energy... ... Taijutsu appeared in the official side story "Sasuke's True Story: Raiko Arc". Chino's companion Fuxin used it, and it was tied with Sasuke's Susanoo. In terms of attributes, it may be wind x2, or it may be wind + water. Well... Someone said that Feng Shui is not ice? In fact, it is based on water, water + wind = ice. With wind as the basis and then adding water, the sequence and proportions may be like this, and it may become a typhoon...
Various ideas and suggestions v1.0
The last book mentioned ~ Suggestions on Ninjutsu combinations, such as Ice Release and Tai Release. After developing the brain, learn the secret technique Perception to derive Dark Release. Of course, there are also the use of water-based ninjutsu, such as high-density fluids, toxic volatilization, blood control, etc. Use the nodes of the main line as the dividing points of the plot of this book. For example, the Land of Waves, the Chunin Examination, the events of the theatrical version, Sasuke's defection, etc. Otherwise, the main plot has obviously changed, but the plot in the book has not yet progressed, and readers will scold it. Therefore, each main line node should have some changes related to the protagonist of the book. ——Brain Development—— In the early stage, you should speed up the learning of Ninjutsu related to Water Release and Wind Release, so that you can have the opportunity to integrate them in the mid-term. The first way to improve learning speed is to use multiple shadow clones to cheat, and the second is to improve IQ. The former can easily cause brain damage, while the latter is more difficult. A better solution is brain development (movie "Superbody"). 1. Brain development can improve learning ability, improve practice efficiency, and gain more experience points. For example, Sasuke's experience value is 5x that of ordinary people, then Itachi's experience value acquisition multiplier may be 30x+ that of ordinary people. 2. At the same time, brain development can also improve mental strength, which is helpful for the practice and application of perception and illusion. At the same time, preparations are made for the development of "Dark Escape" and the practice of "Spiritual Transformation". 3. Brain development involves meditation in addition to taking medicine. When the ability to meditate reaches a certain level, the mind will travel through time and experience the previous wars in a dream. This not only makes up for the embarrassment of the protagonist's late time travel, lack of actual combat experience, and lack of ninjutsu, but may also improve the talent of time and space ninjutsu. 4. After the brain is developed, it can be combined with the art of multiple shadow clones to practice. This is the way to use plug-ins. 5. After the brain is developed, depending on the degree of development, it can produce various superpowers. 6. Perhaps one-hand mudra is also related to brain development. 7. Add the brain development level next to the original illusion value (usually around 5%) ——Ninjutsu—— 1. I think there should be a level for each escape system in the system, but there is no level for specific ninjutsu. For example: "Water Release Level 4, Ninjutsu: Great Waterfall Jutsu, Shark Bullet Jutsu, Water Breaking Wave, Instant Water..." The higher the level of Water Release, the more powerful the Ninjutsu is and the less Chakra consumption. 2. Someone said "ninjutsu value", doesn't that mean the same thing? Actually no, ninjutsu represents chakra amount, chakra extraction efficiency, seal formation speed, seal simplification, etc. 3. The protagonist should learn and develop the "Hydration Secret Technique" to improve the density and flexibility of the water escape body. The density can increase offense and defense. There is also a ninjutsu called "Hydraulic Arm Technique", which can be combined with cell activation and strange power to increase the power. Flexibility can increase flexibility, like Luffy's. Later, it can be replaced by Ice Escape to increase its hardness and destructive power. 4. To advance, you can combine water escape/ice escape with "shadow escape" to invalidate the opponent's ninjutsu and force the opponent to use physical skills to fight. Ice Escape + Dark Escape can also create an Ice Escape weapon similar to Sharji. 5. Can simulate the "wood escape and cutting technique". If the Dark Escape is developed enough to suck blood and is proficient in blood control, then once it penetrates the opponent's body, it can absorb the opponent's chakra and life force while controlling the "growth" of the Ice Escape. 6. If you know the puppetry and curse seal techniques, you can use curse seal + blood control to control remote creatures or corpses. You can use it in combination with "Ice Escape and Cutting Technique". 7.. The Rasengan can be thrown out, and through collision or re-formation, it can become an S-level combined ninjutsu of Taiwan Release + Ice Release that surpasses the Wind Release Rasengan. ——Taijutsu—— "Cloud Style Fushen Jutsu" is just a concept. I think this original Ninja Taijutsu should be viewed in another light. The following idea is based on Shuidun's "Blood Control Level 1", using the internal boxing method to refine Qi and blood until Gang Qi is produced. Clouds are water, representing the blood of the body, and wind represents breath. The qi and blood are from the Neijiaquan... Um, Tiger Leopard Leiyin? Internal Boxing>Tai Chi>Wudang Mountain, Yun Shou, Ladder Yun Zong? Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin > Gang Qi? Is the internal air released? Qi = wind? Enhance Qi and blood, combine hardness and softness, improve the realm, turn from the inside to the outside, and develop martial arts. Ninja Taijutsu, Kung Fu? Paiyun Palm, Fengshen Kick, Tianshuang Fist? Internal martial arts? Bing Xin Jue, Three-Point Return to Vitality, and Maha Infinite? This is my association with wind and water, and there may also be some training methods of the Hyuga family's soft fist.
It was really a bit poisonous to see someone being recruited into ANBU just because they were close to Naruto and Sasuke while still in school. A person who didn't even graduate and was not even a genin joined ANBU. When did ANBU become so easy to get into? That's ANBU. . . This poison is really powerful
I persisted for more than ten chapters. When I saw Uchiha Itachi annihilating the clan, the protagonist actually went to fight with Itachi and said that he notified ANBU for support. I'm sorry, everyone. My poison resistance is too low. I got out
Forced display of presence, all kinds of small thoughts, pretending to be dead and joining ANBU in the second year. Even the first genius in the ninja world dare not write like this. It was the first time I read the book and I was so poisonous. I ranked first in the most poisonous Naruto fanfiction.
The author probably hasn't read Naruto, or has only had a brief look at it, so people like us who follow Naruto feel very embarrassed to read what you wrote. There are many places that deviate from the original work.
Shen Nong has been killed in battle, but they still have to write about their parents, wives and children without the writing power. They are an embarrassing group. They ran over to Naruto without thinking at the beginning. They also ran over to join in the fun on the night when the Uchiha clan was exterminated. Please practice more.
To be honest, Poison I was persuaded to quit when I first met Naruto.
This book is basically useless. There is nothing interesting to read.
You start without thinking, is Naruto the one you want to get close to? And why all of a sudden, you, an old man in his 30s who is struggling to grow up, why are you looking for Naruto?
To be honest, there are really many poisonous points.
The author must have only had a rough idea of Naruto before writing a Naruto fanfic. In terms of plot, the plot should at least be close to the original work. The protagonist has no strength and is too toxic!
As for the author, you must be the same age as the protagonist when you write like this. The system is not powerful at all now. I'm afraid you will have to forcefully cheat in the future. After all, with the garbage strength of the protagonist now, it is enough to be a super cannon fodder. After that, the movie level is basically a soldier. It is boring. The time traveled is so recent and I am still so young and speechless. I am trying to pretend to be awesome. It seems There is no difference between the 10-year-old and the Six Paths again. Anyway, the main character has such rubbish strength now. Author, please don't force yourself to cheat. The protagonist's level suddenly soared to the Shadow level, and then Naruto controlled the Kyuubi and suddenly soared to the Six Paths level. He is not even qualified to play. After all, reaching the Six Paths level is the same as being tortured by other people's Six Paths. If you want to kill, you need a higher level. In this ** system, it is really pointless to have poor abilities, upgrade as slow as a tortoise, and experience is getting more and more awesome. If you don't meet the system, you can get a gift package to get the One Punch Superman Saitama limiter. It is better to upgrade directly than him. Otherwise, you will not be able to upgrade to the six levels except for forcing the protagonist to use Dragon Vein or something. After all, the enemies that the protagonist fights are better than him. It's boring to be stronger than him and have as little experience as him, so you can see the results. I cheated and cheated, and suddenly I got tens of billions of experience. Suddenly I was able to fight with the mother of six paths. If I say it, I should have picked her up at the same time as Tsunade, or four generations at the same time. It wouldn't be so sudden. Even if the protagonist had a period of becoming stronger because his wife in the previous life didn't pick up girls, anyway, I really hate those ten-year-old six-paths.
If a word is messed up, the plot will be messed up, the data will be messed up, and the characters will be messed up. It takes tens of millions of experience to level up. How much experience does it take to kill a traitorous ninja? This is still a Jonin, what if there are six paths? Just careless people controlled by the system!
I feel like the story about joining ANBU was not well written, it might as well have been about being in a ninja school. After joining ANBU, there wasn't much plot, and then it just became a pig's foot plot.
No matter how genius you are, you would let a student who doesn't even have a genin go to ANBU? Even if Pig's Knuckle is the strongest among the students, where is the talent?
Old poisoner, poison warlock, damn, he has a strong ancient chivalrous style, but no internal smell.