Getting the Lie-Truth System from the Start

It feels like the protagonist is more in line with the personality of an ordinary person at first, and he is slowly starting to grow through the side effects of the system. Emmmm. . . Become a "social elite"? Entering commercial espionage and underworld too early is a bit toxic. After all, the protagonist has no real strength. (Maybe it's because the system was upgraded as early as possible to arrange the plot, after all, the reward is 10 million) The plot arrangement is too rigid, and it feels like forcibly pushing the protagonist forward. As a kind of refreshing novel, it is better not to use too many rigid plot-promoting methods. I hope that the other information master will remind me of a certain book on Feilu that repeats the same day for a thousand years. Overall, I personally like this book very much. Good job, author!

Ahem, ahem, here I am again, this time to make suggestions. The protagonist has too many ties, including relatives, parents, relatives of friends, friends of friends. Reading too much will cause disgust. The author's ideas belong to a niche type in the system flow and are more creative. However, too many of the same plots will cause aesthetic fatigue. This book relies on blowing to get things. The further it goes, the more money is involved. People who read it may also think that this thing is pretentious and boring. I think this book is a good idea. But it is very difficult to become popular in urban novels. If the author wants to write such a story next time, I personally recommend setting the background in the ancient alien plane or the world of immortals. This way the layering of the story will be improved. The above backgrounds all belong to the world background where the strong is respected. You will not get more and more things like RMB, because in our subconscious, things from other worlds are good and precious, just like human fantasy aliens. They are technologically advanced and stronger than us, so the rarer things are, the more valuable they are. You will never have the situation where my red grandfather on the earth can buy spiritual stones. It can reduce the aesthetic fatigue of numbers. There are many professions in other worlds that can be developed. It is more comfortable to read than the professions on the earth. I have written so much again without knowing it. I don't know if the author has seen the last time. What I said yesterday was a bit heavy, but the truth is like this. I apologize to you. The above suggestions give the author some ideas. I look forward to the next book. If the author sees it and thinks it makes sense, give it a thumbs up. Let me know that I have written so much and someone will read it.

The author's writing is quite good. As a veteran, I can still read it and I'm looking forward to your new chapter. Would it be better if I changed the 5 families? Because I worked in some companies and changed jobs. Although I didn't have high achievements, I also stayed in the 1980s to establish groups and transform them into some family companies now. I also worked as a partner to develop into a listed company. For example, Renrui Human Resources Co., Ltd. May not be able to develop into some foreign families such as Kennedy, Rothschild, etc. Due to different national conditions. If the author sees it, see if he can write it in a different way.

Some explanations about this novel 1. First of all, the author admits that the first tens of thousands of words were not well written and did not adapt to the starting point's style. The plot and writing style have also been adjusted later. Patient book friends will find that there is a gradual change after chapter 36. Don't scold those who don't have the patience to read on, thank you. 2. This book is not a stud book, but the protagonist is not too honest either. 3. There are some bugs in the article, which the author will correct later. Thanks to the book friends who gave their opinions. 4. Please speak rationally in the comment area. The author will not delete normal opinion posts. 5. It is best not to post content that has nothing to do with this book. For example, the author is from xx, as long as everyone knows it.

I am the author, and I hope everyone will recommend it enthusiastically.

This guy is just pretending, he keeps using these routines over and over again. After reading fifty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. He's so rich, but he still can't get a woman. Take a look at what the villain in Skip to School said: Just throw money at a woman. It will make her fall in love with me and crawl into bed by herself.

If the old bookworm can survive ten chapters, I lose! Even Shen Nong's resurrection won't work!

He pretends to be a slap in the face from the beginning to the end. I can't understand why others keep looking down on him when he is so rich and has so many industries. You have a factory that can manufacture the best chips and screens in the world, but you still need to be inferior to the small boss of Huawei. The whole book can only be read without thinking

From the beginning to the end, they are the protagonist's colleagues, classmates, and passers-by who dislike the protagonist, or think that the protagonist is bragging, and want to step on the protagonist. In the end, he is slapped in the face by the protagonist. It has been the same routine for more than 500 chapters. How do I continue to read it, even though it is free of charge?

No one in 3 years old can't write it