Getting the Lie-Truth System from the Start

The protagonist initially seemed more like an ordinary person, slowly growing through the system's side effects... Emmm... Becoming a "social elite"? Getting him involved in business espionage and the underworld too early is a bit toxic, especially since the protagonist lacks real strength. (Perhaps this was a plot device to accelerate the system's upgrade, given the ten million reward.)

Ahem, I'm back again. This time, I'm offering suggestions. The protagonist has too many entanglements—relatives, parents, friends, and friends of friends—which can become tiresome. The author's approach is a niche genre within the system-based novel genre, quite creative, but repetitive plots can lead to reader fatigue.

The author writes quite well; even as a newbie, I can still read it and I look forward to your new chapters. Perhaps revising the "Five Families" section would be better? My work involves job hopping between companies; while I haven't achieved great success, I've worked in various sectors, including establishing groups around the 1980s that evolved into family businesses, and even in partnerships…

Some explanations about this novel 1. First of all, the author admits that the first tens of thousands of words were not well written and did not adapt to the starting point's style. The plot and writing style have also been adjusted later. Patient book friends will find that there is a gradual change after chapter 36. Don't scold those who don't have the patience to read on, thank you.

I am the author, and I hope everyone will actively recommend this book.

This guy's acting is so pretentious, he just uses the same few tricks over and over again. After reading fifty chapters, I really couldn't take it anymore. He's so rich, and he still can't get women. Look at what that villain in "Fight Back to School" said: "Just throw money at women, and they'll love me, they'll climb into my bed."

If any seasoned bookworm can endure ten chapters, I'll eat my hat! Even if Shennong were resurrected, he couldn't!

It's a complete charade, full of self-aggrandizement and backstabbing. I can't understand why, with so much money and so many businesses, people keep looking down on him. He owns factories capable of manufacturing the world's best chips and screens, yet he still feels inferior to the young boss of Huawei. This whole book is best read without thinking.

From beginning to end, it's all about the protagonist's colleagues, classmates, and passersby who dislike him, or think he's bragging and want to put him down, only to be humiliated by him in the end. This formula continued for over 500 chapters. How did I even manage to keep reading, even though it was free for a limited time?

It would take at least 3 years to write this.