My Mint Lady

It took me an entire night to read the entire novel. It is recommended to read the first volume while listening to "Night Letter". How to say it? I feel that in the later part of the volume, the writing is not as exciting as at the beginning. Of course, that doesn't mean I can't write well. It's just that the author's way of writing the protagonist's trip to South Korea is rather blunt. Regarding Lee Ji-eun's rejection of the male lead, I personally think it sublimated the character of Lee Ji-eun and made him more realistic. After all, if Lee Ji-eun doesn't reject the male lead, Kwon Yuri won't be able to play. After all, the advantages are too great. I predict a wave of plot developments. The highlight in the mid-term will be Li Zhien's rejection (True Fragrance Warning)

To be honest, I personally feel that you are a bit forced to make the protagonist fall in love with IU. If you just want to create some frustration for their relationship, then your middle plot is inappropriate. According to your plot, IU has no chance, which is really unreasonable.

Let the plot continue as it is, and don't worry about whether the heroine is an IU or not.

Finally got to sign the contract. Congratulations😁😁😁

It can be seen that the author is very attentive and the writing style is delicate. Reading it carefully can really bring you a lot of emotion and gain. The author is a novice, and the language may be more literary and not in line with the style of mainstream online articles. Coupled with the limitations of the subject matter, this may be the reason why this book is relatively niche. But niche does not mean that it is not outstanding. In my opinion, a book that can make people think and move is a good book. This book undoubtedly, at least for me, has indeed brought a lot of touching and harvesting. The writing style and subject matter are not shortcomings but highlights in my eyes. It is a very comfortable reading experience. This is the first time I write a long review. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will achieve greater success and look forward to the new book (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The rise of the Hawthorn Party, long live the Hawthorn Party

I think (personal opinion): The heroine can be replaced by Hawthorn... Ahem, what about everyone?

The author's ideas are really good, and it feels great to see two hearts getting closer and closer through the exchange of letters. I have also read the author's new book, but to be honest, I didn't feel as good as the beginning of this one. Actually, I think the time flow rate of the two people can be a little closer. The IU line is more than 10 years old, while the male protagonist is only more than a month old. The time gap is too different. According to common sense, friends who contact each other once a year will easily be diluted no matter how good they are. If the two timelines were closer, it would give the male protagonist room to grow. For example, the male protagonist's growth path is as follows: from being a street singer, participating in programs through teachers/talents, producing music independently, and becoming a singer. If the male protagonist's line is from 2014 to 19, and the iu is from 05 to 19, the letters exchanged between the two parties will be more than ten times more, and the content of the letters will not only be a guide, but also gradually change from a teacher in life to a teacher in music, to a friend in music. They write songs to each other, comfort each other amidst the violence that is black on the Internet, and finally the two meet to sublimate their relationship. If there are a few twists and turns, they can also write about some of the differences in life after the real meeting, including living habits, running announcements and not caring much, and they can also write about being jealous of the next door neighbor and so on. In fact, in the final analysis, the author did not solve the relationship breakdown caused by the inequality of status between men and women. From the beginning, looking at the female supporting role, I knew what kind of conflict the author wanted to create later, but it was a pity. I hope the author can consider restarting it when he has time. I really think this subject matter is very good.

Holding high the banner of the Hawthorn Party, little IU is ridiculous

I have long said that if Mint Line wants to continue writing, IU and the male protagonist must go through hardships, that is, there must be a cleansing process. As a result, as soon as IU confessed her love, the male protagonist licked her back. An unequal love will not make people feel involved at all. Why is Hawthorn written more smoothly? Because this is a complete story, from strangers to friends, from friends to relatives, there are stories to support it, and there is also a pavement for the warming of the relationship. But the Mint Line is completely a dog-licking story. It is just a pen pal who replied to letters for several months. He confessed his love as soon as they met. After the failure, he met Hawthorn. When Mint saw that his licking dog was robbed, he immediately snatched it back with one sentence, and the male protagonist immediately licked it back. Especially in male-oriented novels, no one wants to read a story about dog-licking But I give high praise to the author for not giving up and not giving up because of failure. The author is also improving step by step. The framework of the story is actually very good at the beginning. In fact, you can consider remaking it. I will continue to support the next book with monthly votes and recommendations. I hope the author can write an ideal work.

The author reminds me, don't let those people ruin your mentality. It is said that it is difficult to satisfy everyone. You cannot satisfy everyone. You have almost 20,000 recommendation votes now. Please write more these days and contact the editor to see if you can be recommended in a category. If your grades are good, you might even get a recommendation. The writing profession really requires you to be able to endure criticism, not only from readers, but also from peers. Look at Jiangnan, I think these people have been sent razors countless times by readers, but after updating, readers are still Wang Jingze. The work really has to be judged by its quality. If you tell the story well, you have nothing to fear.

Although I like IU, I prefer this book to Yuri

When I opened the starting point and saw two updates, I was very surprised! When you look at it, you realize that I'm overthinking it😂

The author insists on writing about IU, so I guess the next step is to downplay Yu Li's appearance. Although you are outstanding, I just won't write about you. Then there were various misunderstandings, misses, etc., And then IU's emotions turned and they were forced to get together. Welcome to slap the author in the face

Lime is mint, hawthorn is mint. Zhi En and Ming Yan get along like young lovers. But Hawthorn and Mingyan look like an old couple who have been together for seven years. The outcome is clear at a glance. .

In different time and space, in the time and space of Mint and Lime, Mint finally saved Lime at the last moment. In the time and space line of Hawthorn and Green Lemon, Yuli and Yantai kissed, so they did not go to Zhien, or Zhien did not show up to stop the protagonist. In fact, it was good to separate the two lines from the beginning, with the failure of the first confession as the node! This way of dividing the two lines will not make people feel that Qing Ning's character collapsed in the end, making people feel like a scumbag who is not very sexy (#-.-). I hope the author will pay attention to it in the next book. In addition, I really like the author's Yuli. I hope the Hawthorn line will not end so hastily, or I can open another Yuli book!

Characters, the support of the two heroines is getting closer and closer....😜 The author should have a headache.

I would like to give my own suggestions to the author, don't be too licky, and I didn't expect that their meeting would be so... Awkward... And I personally prefer Mingyan's life in China. It feels more interesting. After going abroad, the overall feeling has indeed dropped a lot. I hope to return to China as soon as possible, but this is indeed my bread and butter, come on!

I originally came here for IU, but later I liked Hawthorn more. It would definitely be better if the author re-wrote IU with the same plot and plot as Hawthorn.

Hawthorn 😍

I originally liked iu, but after reading this book, I switched fans, so the keyboard player is really awesome!

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