Since 2012

The book is a good book, but the author is not a good author. He makes promises every day that he cannot fulfill, and treats readers like shit. I have never seen a more disgusting author than you. This is the first book I've ever criticized. I would leave the other books silently if they were poorly written, but I would only advise those who haven't read the book not to come in, because if you come in you will also scold the author, wasting the story, and sorry for the characters you created.

"Starting from 2012" To be honest, I have been reading books for a long time. From the fantasy and passion at the beginning, to the "Long Aotian" series of urban rebirth, to the funny and easy-going novels, now that I read this kind of daily novels, I have changed a lot, and this kind of novels It is suitable for me now, plain and warm, (actually I am very miscellaneous in reading now) Some people say that the novel seems to look at the mountains but not the plain, it just needs to be more exciting, there should be conflicts, and the protagonist must do something big. Isn't this enough for the protagonist who is sixteen or seventeen years old? (He made millions of assets from scratch) The League of Legends is just a tool for starting capital (see "What is a roaming mid laner" about the league), and he is not an adult, what can he do with his relationship with his parents? And next to the protagonist, there is Bai Yueguang in his heart (about to become a "fusion" of Bai Yueguang and cinnabar mole). Adolescent boys' brains are filled with hormones. Do you think you will be able to do business with some old men? Any fool knows how to choose. Besides, everyone is different. If you want to go into business and be a scumbag, you should read a certain book (I was so angry that I deleted it long ago and forgot the title of the book), and there is another way to protect your loved ones, such as this book or Sister Hua's "My Wife, Please Be Peaceful" Maybe sometimes the male protagonist's behavior is childish (in my opinion), but this is in line with the male protagonist's experience and current situation, and this childishness is just right. The focus of this book is on the heroine. The image she created for me is that she is beautiful, self-reliant, self-disciplined, good at studying, miserable, but full of hope for life, witty and a little playful, and a little bit sinister. (I personally like Hansu more than Youchu) What I hope to see in this book is two souls leaning on each other (I still feel that it is not enough). Now Hansu also needs some "growth" to further break through the relationship (I personally feel good about the period between the middle of the first semester of the first semester of high school and the first semester of high school). I think the author should think so too, right ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. There is still a lot of plot left to write, but you have to write it quickly. I only have 200 fan points when I fully subscribe, so it's too short! It's not that you can't do it, it's just that you don't want to do it. People's potential is unlimited. Why don't you set a flag?

Xiaohansu's new attribute - Black Belly has been awakened Intuition tells me, Su Bai, you will have a difficult life in the future 🤭 Looking forward to Xiaohansu pinching the waist, pulling the corners of clothes, etc. To get angry, and the pitiful coquettish skills will be fully activated! ! ! 12 o'clock recommendation ticket reward monthly ticket will be given

After nearly two years, this book finally came to an end. I had a lot of stops along the way, but fortunately they have a good ending. This book is one of the few books I have read in its entirety without skipping it. I remember that when I added it to the bookshelf, this book only had dozens of chapters and was not yet on the shelves. At the beginning, it was just a book shortage. I read this book with the attitude of giving it a try, but the content But it was unexpectedly good and very in line with my taste. Apart from traveling through time and doing business and opening a noodle shop, this book is actually very real, very pure, very simple, plain but full of warmth. This kind of love is very desirable. Jiang Hansu is a simple and lovely girl, she is stubborn, she is tenacious. I have to say that Jiang Hansu's establishment is very successful and very annoying. People like it. The author uses a mature style of writing to describe their every detail. Although they are all trivial things, together they are not the kind of life we have always longed for. Two people for life. Simplicity is the true nature of life. Ordinaryness is the real happiness. If you can find someone who loves you in this life, spending your life in an ordinary way is not in vain. This is a once-in-a-lifetime experience, so the love between Jiang Hansu and Su Bai is enviable. I finished reading this book with endless emotions and a lot of emotions. Although this book is over, their story will never end. I tried it in the morning and saw a few Hansu flowers on the green branches that refused to disappear... Looking forward to the author's next work, I hope the story in the next one will be equally exciting and outstanding.

Advantages: The character (the heroine) is well created, and the youthful and cuteness of the little girl is vividly written on the page. The slowly growing relationship and the interactions between the two are well written and often make people laugh. Disadvantages: First of all, it's the title of the book. If it weren't for Chiji's recommendation, I wouldn't have clicked on this title. Even if you click on it, there is a high probability that people will be disappointed. After all, the first impression of this name is a career article, and the result is a dog food article. And those who want to read dog food (like me) will not click in after seeing this name. Secondly, the description in some places is too detailed, too detailed. However, this problem has improved a lot since then. Sometimes things are too simple, such as store recruitment or chef menus. After all, this is how you make money. It feels too simple to just write about having wifi without going into details. Also, the advantage of being a reborn person has not been used, and I have only made a lot of money through power training. Even if it is not the main focus of career writing, it should show more. To sum up: as a dog food article, it is indeed well written, but other than that, it is quite average.

One click and three consecutive clicks, as long as you hold on to it, it will be a real hit. When will it be put on the shelves? The monthly pass is ready, the starting coins are charged, and we are just waiting for the explosive update.

It was recommended from another book group. When I saw the introduction, I felt that it would be more in line with my appetite. I took the time to read it today and it was full of surprises. The background described by the author is almost the same as mine many years ago, and the things in the village are also roughly the same (I was lucky enough to miss that period of poverty), and there is a sense of familiarity between the lines. Maybe everyone has someone they miss secretly. I see too many similarities in Su Bai, but he is more confident and courageous in the book. If you get some, you will miss some. Maybe I like this book so much because Su Bai can complete some of the things I didn't say back then, what I thought about but didn't do, to fill in some of the regrets I had.

Brother, let me ask you something. With so many readers reading your books, do you think we are looking for abuse or do we like to eat dog food? You fed dog food from the beginning to now, and now you suddenly start to abuse me again. I can't accept it if I'm celebrating the Chinese New Year! (If you insist on sadomasochism, can you make the timeline shorter? The previous article has already made it clear that since rebirth means not wanting to live up to youth, your pace makes me a little afraid to continue reading.) Do you know how difficult it is to find a well-written and pure dog food article these days? No matter who is reborn, it must be so that there will be no regrets or cracks between himself and Bai Yueguang (the sense of empathy is super strong)! If you do this, us dog-food parties will collapse in an instant! !

The storyteller has come to an end, but the story will not end. I always believe that in some corner of the world, a story like Su Bai and Jiang Hansu is happening. I think the story will never end, maybe it is around us. May we all find our own Jiang Hansu, in that snowy winter, under the cold green branches...

There are only a few movies in recent years that can make me so fascinated. I just downloaded Qidian. I came here to ask when it will be released. I understand. By the way, I'll give Xiaohansu a gift. If it's convenient, let me know. After all, I still need to uninstall it.

I've been afraid of the author for the past few days, but after reading it today, it turned out to be pretty good The heroine should be so cute

Every day the male protagonist has to say disgusting words to the female protagonist. The number of words is so watery that I can't stand it anymore.

It's really boring to watch. Could you please stop the male protagonist from talking so much to the female protagonist? These can be replaced with psychological descriptions so that they won't be too embarrassing, and tickets will be given as well.

Author, you don't want to abuse this paragraph, and you don't want to give out sweets. If you want to skip the plot, at least describe the changes in the protagonist's heart, or don't write it at all. What is this article about? Can you just stop updating it for a few days and think more about how to write it. I don't ask you to write too fast, but I want the quality to be a little higher. That's not how you write a sad drama. If you want to be tortured, just be cruel. This paragraph recommends that you read a novel from a few years ago called "Rebirth and Waiting for You to Grow Up". . . That one feels a bit written

I like dog food articles, especially dog ​​food articles that are famous for their writing style, so I can't help but want to give the author two small suggestions. First of all, make good use of expression description. I saw that there were a lot of interactive conversations between the two in the latest chapters (after they got married), but in Hansu's case it was basically "Jiang Hansu said". Even the expression on the NPC's face would change when playing a gold-based online game and completing tasks. There is no reason why there are only dry conversations in the novel, right? The second thing is, the outline is clear, this is for dog food articles. Because there are many stages in falling in love, everyone is shouting to push it down, but what happens after it is really pushed down? What to write? This requires the author to add other main lines, such as the career line (the pig's feet need to make money on the way to fall in love, such as "My Wife is a Big Star" and "The Japanese Girlfriend of a Top Student"). Of course, the crazy one can also be the girl's overthrow line, which is just a few identical lines braided together ("The Prince is Very Fierce" and "Girl, There's Something Wrong About You". I personally don't like this kind of male protagonist who takes the initiative and doesn't refuse) It would be great if the author could see me.

I had a lot of feelings while reading this book. When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I also had a girl I liked. I had many opportunities to confess to her, but I gave up. Later I found out that she had a boyfriend, so I didn't bother. When I was about to graduate from the third grade of junior high school, I mustered up the courage, but it was too late. Although I still like her now, I still don't dare to call her or add her as a friend The author has a good saying, I met her by fate, but never met her again.

The author's writing is really great. It can be said to be the most touching novel I have read in the past two years. I hope the author will continue to work hard and work hard to get more updates! The author's novel is probably the book I have recommended on Tieba with the most positive reviews! 👍

Author, please don't update me more. Can you stop being so stingy? It's not that I despise chapters. Can you be more generous?

After 200,000 words about campus life, the plot is too straightforward, the characters are not fleshed out, and the accounts are clear; the business landscape is basically not described, and the feasibility is too low. As a practitioner in the catering industry, a small noodle shop can open 150-300 directly-operated stores in a province. It is simply a joke. There are more than 400 existing noodle shops in the country, let alone a single province. Brief comment: The content before it was put on the shelves was a little readable, but it fell apart later.

Too late to explain

Everything about this book is good, but updates are too slow. I'm tired of waiting.

I finished watching it in 4 hours. It's not enough. Come on!

It's a very interesting book. Kudos to the author!

Comparing it with the rest, the first few dozen chapters are really good. It has been a bit watered down since it was put on the shelves. It is just sweet for the sake of sweetness, without any role in promoting the plot, and the updates are also quite embarrassing. I tried to support the book, but something happened to it. However, it can also be seen from your previous updates that generally it should be updated regularly and quantitatively every day. It doesn't matter if it is less, as long as it is stable. I guess you had no inspiration before and could only send out sweets every day. Then a breakup story inspired you and made the hero chase it all over again and send out sweets again. I don't know if you have an outline. I hope you can think more about the plot and how to portray the characters. To be honest, it's okay to include personal information. The most important thing is to grasp the overall direction of the book. The more you write later, the rougher it becomes, and it doesn't have the aura of the first few dozen chapters.

Can it be updated? Do I have to wait until 12 o'clock to update?

A student who is still in the third grade of junior high school rents two stores with tens of thousands of yuan. Who do you think is a fool?

I was really afraid that I would run out of things to write about. I just finished reading the book Corner Pig and ended up with just over 200 pictures. It was very unpleasant. I gave you 600 coins first, and then I gave you 600 more when there was an update. Although it was a small amount, it was still a token of my heart. 🙏

How can you ask for a subscription to one of these books after reading a few chapters? Of course I was greedy and ordered the full subscription + 10 recommended tickets + monthly pass. It's so good-looking!

As a prostitute who has been reading books for six or seven years, it is my first time to pay for a subscription, but I feel that it is not a loss. Hahaha, the money is not much more than a few dollars, but I have always read pirated books. I have been reading pirated books since I started reading novels. I am also very strange. I can read any book. It can be read by novices or those with more brains. This book is really good. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up.                                                                  😊

I'll give it a score of 8/10 I won't talk about the advantages of this book. It's so sweet. Although there is a little bit of abuse in the middle, it seems that the relationship between the male and female protagonists cannot go any further without that bit of abuse. Let's talk about some shortcomings. One is that there are many logical errors and some common sense errors. Although it does not affect the overall reading, it is still uncomfortable to read. The second one is that the content is slightly repetitive, so perhaps cutting it to 700,000 words would be enough. The third thing is, of course, the plot is too short! ! Why don't you write more. . . How nice to replace the repetitive plot content with new plots later!