The NPC Girl Is Going to Save Her Little Brother

Would it be better if you changed the book title?

Sigh, this kind of writing style wouldn't even get you a contract if it were used in male-oriented fiction, but I never thought it would work in female-oriented fiction. But since it's already available for subscription, I don't know how to give any pointers.

I actually clicked on this by accident, but I took a look and found it quite good, so keep up the good work, author! 💪

The author's concept and plot are quite engaging, but the cover and synopsis aren't very appealing. If they were revised, they would attract even more readers.

Hi, I'm here! I don't know if you still remember me. Your story is quite good and captivating. The plot is good and the pace is fast, but the characters are not well-developed enough, the segments could be more fragmented, and the plot is not handled well enough. Great job, I've received it!

Keep up the good work, author! I hope you reflect on your writing process and read more novels of the same genre.

Great book, I've added it to my favorites! It gets better and better with each chapter, I hope you'll add it to your collection!

You need to change the cover; this cover gives the impression that the project might be abandoned at any moment.

I'm hoping you'll visit my page after I add this to my favorites.