The Lost Civilization of Online Gaming

The author is great, I hope you can improve the writing style of your copy. Actually, I rarely leave book reviews, especially those that are critical. I hope I won't be blamed. But I really like this subject and there are so few people writing about it. Great, your content outside of the dungeon, whether in the game or in reality, is basically good, and some of the settings are also outstanding. The only thing is the dungeon. I don't understand why. In fact, Pillars of the Realm also has this problem, and it seems to be mainly based on dungeons, so I didn't read on. Why is your copy so straightforward? The protagonist is basically watching the plot and running errands. There is no "interweaving" or "conflict" between the protagonists. In short, it is just like a real game copy. You can watch a CG, do some operations, and fight a boss. However, the real game copy is limited by reality and the code can only be written like this. Players often do not experience the copy but purely brush up materials. But this is not the case in novels. I think a simple way is to put two groups of people into the dungeon to fight. In fact, in the final analysis, the novel is mostly about the interpretation of the characters. If the entire story of the dungeon cannot touch the emotions of the protagonist at all, nor can it trigger their thinking, confrontation, growth, change, and feelings, then what is the purpose of such a short story and a dungeon? It is very thin.

Even if there are only one update, you can also get a strong recommendation. The starting point really doesn't follow the routine.

Updated🌹🌹🌹

If you want to read it, the author will mention it in one stroke. If you don't want to read it, the author will write it in a rude way😟

Shock! I actually updated this one, but not the other one.

It's a pity that there are almost zero combat descriptions. Is that because I'm not very good at it?

Although I have only read two chapters, the writing style needs to be improved, and many things feel forced to be introduced and explained. It would be better to be more natural. Generally speaking, I really can't stand it, but book friends said that the plot is quite good and they want to read it. The protagonist looks down on the original owner's physical weakness, so does she have a strong body after lying in a hospital bed for 7 years? This paragraph is really hard to explain. Logically speaking, I should be very adaptable, but there is still a problem with the way of expression. It is recommended that the author read what he has written again if he has time. Because I have written a lot and then when I look back, I will find many different things.

Why has the update been interrupted recently? Is there something wrong?

A new book has been opened! ! ! ! It's been almost a year since I came to Qidian to read a book 😌😌😌 Come on, great job

Suddenly I found that the author strongly recommended it