I Won After Taking in Seven Disciples

How can I put it, I wish the author the better as he writes

Come on! I really like the author's writing style.

The author is getting worse as he writes more and more. Many plots are awkward and brainless. The first part is okay. I hope he can return to his previous writing style. I have been saving this article for a long time and I am so disappointed after reading it.

By the way, the protagonist is so defiant and powerful. So doesn't Heaven take care of the earth? Logically speaking, the protagonist can go back on his own. Those immortals who are not strong enough can still descend to earth. Also, the protagonist remains in the state of a child and flirts with men... He's a pedophile.

I just watched it, are you serious about Yan Ling? A proper Eriyi Yan Ling·Judgement. Serial number 111

How can I put it, I don't need the extra charm, it's better to keep it as it is, I got it from Gao Se, it really shouldn't be too disgusting. The male protagonist is not well portrayed. His apprentice can accept it, but his boyfriend is disgusted. He is not handsome and can do anything? ? ? (I'm not a star-chasing person, and it's not like I haven't seen posters of handsome guys online that make people and gods angry. It's not like there aren't any handsome guys among my classmates and friends, and they're not so crazy that they have no principles???) This person with only one face doesn't want to feel like a mother, bringing a weakling who doesn't have strong willpower (this aspect is not as good as Gao Se, at least he has not become a walking zombie whose consciousness has been taken away by monsters)... I can only be an apprentice, and it's okay to fall in love with others. If he becomes a demon, I will kill him.

Quick! Even! New! Ah~~~~~😆

Come on, the author~😆