Weird Survival Game

The poison has been tested👌🏻 There are relatively few poisonous points. For non-old bookworms, there are no poisonous points. For experienced old bookworms, the poisonous points can be ignored, and the flaws are not covered up. Like most new authors, the supporting characters written by them are a bit facial, but no one except the top author can avoid this well. Interesting supernatural seedlings. It doesn't say it's supernatural or ghosts. The whole text says it's weird and supernatural. I guess I'm afraid of it 404😂. However, when I read it for the first time, ordinary people also know about supernatural beings. It felt a little strange. Then I just realized that this is the reaction of ordinary people after seeing a ghost⁽˙⁸˙⁾ The protagonist is bolder, more careful, not a virgin, not black-hearted, but in this regard, due to the newcomer's writing skills, he is not very outstanding, so it does not affect the viewing. However, for old bookworms, the author does not need narration to explain some of the protagonist's actions, such as not giving away his own things to protect newcomers. Old readers will understand this, but if explained, it will make the protagonist a bit verbose. I hope that the supporting characters in the later part of the book will not be twisted and indifferent like in many books. I really want to see the glory of human nature Love it~❤️❤️❤️

The protagonist has no charisma, so why does he suddenly become a hero? People don't listen to him and insist on committing suicide, but he keeps saving others. Isn't it difficult for him to save himself?

The writing is really good. As an old bookworm, I can say that I am lucky to find such a book during the book shortage. However, the author should also pay attention to one thing. For people who don't read many novels, it doesn't matter if you keep writing this routine. But for old bookworms who are familiar with the routine, a good book will be thrown away after a few hundred chapters, and the rest will be the same. I have a good impression of this type of novels. One is about joining a supernatural company and gradually improving your position, and the other is about a house of horrors. I finished reading the first one, thinking it was the 200,000-word book that I first started reading this type of book a few years ago. Although there are a lot of foreshadowings, in order to write more words, I became a director of the company and went to the ghost world to develop. This was a routine many years ago. House of Horrors has stopped after I read almost 1 million words. The story is still well written, but it always follows a repetitive routine. When the novelty is no longer novel, some people will naturally stop watching it, but it basically has no impact. After all, bookworms are in the minority. The protagonist is already an elite ghost hunter. How many more levels are there? Not much, right? Do we have to gradually get closer to the truth, and prepare to do it all over again like a fairy novel after ascending to the human world and turning into a scumbag? Is the plot moving a little too fast? Once one thing is over, the next one follows. Do you want to add something else slowly at the beginning of each plot? Oh, by the way. When solving supernatural incidents on the plane, ordinary people have entered the mirror space. Who flies the plane? Only limited to this cabin? Well, that's all I can think of. I speak from the bottom of my heart. I sincerely hope that the author can write better and better. Although to be honest, it is slightly less than those books, but it is similar. Very good, come on!

It's so well written! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen a horror novel that made me feel so good! The last time I saw a horror novel like this was the popular "Hell Apartment". The author is so awesome! ! ! I'm so awesome! Come on, the author, I can order all of such excellent horror novels! I can! I don't want to leave a single chapter. Hehe, the author is so great! ! !

Support, the author is very imaginative and the characters are good. Very well written. There are many advantages that I won't go into details. This book is one of those that gets better as you go towards the end. It can be seen that the author has made great progress in both writing and plot conception. I think the reason for the poor performance may be the beginning. The words at the beginning are indeed a bit poisonous. In this kind of novel, it is very important for the protagonist to have a high IQ. The beginning is mostly based on luck, which is a bit discouraging for newcomers. I understand that the author wants to inherit the curse of time later, but the beginning of a book is really important. It is the first impression of a person. If the reader thinks that the protagonist is a bastard at the beginning, he will not be interested in reading further. I personally recommend that the author ends this book as soon as possible, opens another one, writes the beginning better, and portrays more supporting characters. The author's characterization skills are good, hundreds of times better than many novice writers, but there is always a feeling that there is still more to explore. There are no major supporting characters, they are all passers-by. I hope the author will write better and better books and get better grades, so come on 🙂

I personally think this book is pretty good. The author's conception of some events is very novel. As for some people saying that the weird setting of the first event is too simple, I hope you can continue reading. This is actually a foreshadowing, and the subsequent events are also quite interesting. The author is also constantly maturing.

There are too many psychological dramas. As long as the plot is not much at all, it is all kinds of disgusting analysis, rhetorical questions, parallelism, and secondary explanations.

The protagonist has a good personality, basically no poisonous points, not a holy mother, and has a relatively close mind. The plot of the novel is relatively compact, and the control of several major events is quite good so far. Although the rating is a bit rushed and the description of the supporting characters is relatively flat, it may not be fully developed yet. I look forward to meeting more veterans in the future to enrich the plot and give readers a deeper understanding of intensity ratings and the like.

Some suggestions for the author: 1. It is not necessary to analyze every sentence thoroughly, the content of one sentence and the explanation of three sentences. It greatly affects the perception. If the word count is low, the gain outweighs the loss. After all, your book is not aimed at primary school students. 2. You really need to practice your writing. It is not just a matter of typos, but also some problems in sentence structure. But don't rush this, take your time. 3. The main focus is on the plot, which can be scary and the best is scary. The core of weird novels is the unknown horror. You must be careful when forming a group. Once the story is not scary, the novel will lose its soul. Of course, this is my personal opinion, because there are too few supernatural beings now, so just watch and cherish them. Writing a book is not easy, so come on!

Come on! ! ! (Shock!————)

If you want to overcome fear, you have to face it~ Ollie! !

I think it's very beautiful. I support you a lot. Please don't be a eunuch. Please

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore after chapter 50. I say goodbye

Good book seedling, follow it, keep updating

I think if it doesn't collapse, it shouldn't be a problem if there are too many words. (If not 404)

I watched it all night long and my back felt numb and cold! ! ! What a copycat! ! !

The writing is very beautiful, I hope the author can keep it🤭🤭🤭

Let me first state that I think this book is an excellent novel, but I am talking about the shortcomings and not the advantages. The first task The first three chapters are amazing, the image of a calm ordinary person is vivid on the page, and it is very immersive. The fourth chapter failed, causing a conflict of characters to promote the plot. To be honest, if you are not as profound as the previous portrayal, there will be no problem The protagonist made two consecutive mistakes, the novel is about logic Editing is not necessary in reality. This plot can happen in reality, but novels cannot be written like this. This will waste the previous foreshadowing. If you want to achieve the purpose of getting the ghost pen, you can use your prediction to predict my prediction. However, luck caused me to win, which not only highlighted the calm characteristics of the protagonist, but also highlighted the terrifying atmosphere of the ghost. I obviously tried my best to think carefully, but in the end I still had to rely on luck to win. I could also take the opportunity to make the protagonist more cautious and smarter, and have a successful plot. In the words of a book friend, when you write that the protagonist thinks that a ghost will come out from behind, you can take the opportunity to write that the protagonist is on guard against a ghost that suddenly appears from behind, so you point the light behind him, and then the ghost suddenly appears in front of your face, and then you instinctively poke forward, OK, subdued. The most important thing is to try not to conflict with the calm character in the front. The protagonist starts to reflect or something, and starts to grow Second task Some people complain that you are not good at character relationships. You can not bring the image of the people around you into it. Don't be so violent, and don't write too many mindless conflicts. In reality, most people may not be too smart, and their emotional intelligence is not that high, but they don't have too much aggression and are relatively peaceful. The main reason is that your writing style is here, and what you write is not cool. I saw someone complaining about the protagonist Madonna. In fact, it is not a big problem. I can see that you want to write an ordinary person who is kind-hearted, but you have to be decisive, save if you can, and give up immediately if you can't, because you have portrayed the protagonist as a calm person. You can let the protagonist quickly analyze in his heart what is the success rate of this person, what are the losses, what are the benefits, and then make a decision quickly, which is very pleasing. When you are talking to the waiter, you can say, Pros: You can clearly see the function of the talisman paper, Disadvantage: I lost a few talisman papers Of course I didn't write everything down. That kind of Japanese comic-style male protagonist is quite annoying. You can just write the ultimate Virgin, write an idealist, read supernatural novels, or highlight the goodness of human nature and capture the shining points of human nature. Or highlight the evil of human nature and write about my cold and perverted atmosphere. After seeing the plot of the protagonist persuading the master of ceremonies, some people complained about the reason for this. In fact, to put it simply, the author did not treat him as a human being, and had no intention. He just used him as an NPC. He said a few words casually and thought you were convinced. It just seemed that he was acting with emotion and acting with reason. Of course, the flaws are not concealed. In fact, it is quite normal. Not every author can have this energy.

Reading a novel feels like a fandom. Is it interesting? There are a lot of people in the comments who are not even allowed to say anything. It's disgusting.

After reading the latest 460 chapters, I decided to give up the book. I didn't know what it was written at a glance. There were too many explanations, psychology, etc., Basically just doing an action, and the rest were all mental supplements, interpretations, and psychological activities. From the time I arrived at the Exorcist Headquarters in the Weird World, there were more and more descriptions. Until now, one chapter is all about this kind of thing. I don't want to brag about it. This book brought me the joy of reading at the beginning, but now I have to give it up. Bizarre book lovers, farewell to other books!

Now I don't understand what the author wants to do. Some authors only have one update a day to ensure quality and make the plot exciting without compromising the number of words. You may not be able to achieve very high quality as an author, but at least don't overdo it with the word count, okay? At the end of the chapter, I talked about traveling from home to the destination and then making a phone call. The specific content of the phone call has not been explained yet. Is this your attitude towards writing well? Or did you really just write an article on a whim, wasting your better brainpower? The previous complaints were always dropped. Is it all the blame on the readers for not reflecting on themselves? There is only one more update for Shui Cheng to be like that. I really don't know what you are doing. Don't you want grades? If you don't want to write anymore, you can finish it as soon as possible. Don't hang around, it will be very uncomfortable. It really makes me feel like my entire booking was wasted. (Only the list of readers and fans who subscribe to all orders has more than 70 people. It's time for you to reflect on yourself.)

Can you please stop being so cool? I'm going crazy. Three sentences to one chapter. I found the safe house, right? Let's go check it out. Just these three sentences and one chapter is awesome

Just don't listen to what you say. You're just wasting props to save people who don't know you and have a very bad attitude towards the protagonist. You're like a fool. Why do you always care about these people? Just a reminder is enough

One of the very good things about this book is that it does not exaggerate the "organization" Many other novels are exaggerated The operation of the machine is described as if the universe is shaking I was amused, and some sources of information that were impossible to obtain were forced to be included. When you ask why, he says that when the organizational machine is running, it scares you to death. . . I really laughed sometimes, I read a novel before. The protagonist was teleported and still had a disguise on him. But somehow the protagonist can be found. How do you check? ? ? Check his transmission channel? Funny. Just fuck off the character's height, he doesn't even know whether the protagonist is a boy or a girl And why do you think his height is not disguised? ? ? This book does not exaggerate this situation too much. Without cameras and no one to report, it is impossible to know that there are supernatural events in this place. Even if you die and no one reports it, no matter how many people die, who will know? What I hate the most is that the machine is running Why are you afraid of supernatural events if you are so awesome? Why don't you solve it all? Why are you still on Earth if you are so awesome?

The protagonist's IQ is a high school student, and his IQ is praised to the sky. The rest of the characters are mostly junior high school students and elementary school students, and they are praised as elites. If you read this book, if you don't read it condescendingly, your IQ will be lowered. Because the reason is as stated in the preface, I hope you will be warned.

The supernatural part is quite interesting, but the realistic part is not well written, and the official organization is just a weakling. The key is that it is not formal at all, the organizational structure is too amateurish, and the portrayal of passers-by is also very templated. Except for the protagonist, they are basically stupid and sweet.

It's very well written, I don't know why it's not very popular.

The writing is really bad. The author may want to write a lot of descriptions well, but the writing is quite embarrassing. It is not on the same level as the author of "I am Yang Jian, I am dead after seeing these words". However, that book also has a big shortcoming. The mystery in the book is too powerful and the setting is unsolvable. It's not fun to read.

The first 100 chapters are okay, but the rest are garbage. .

I can only say that there are no big problems, but there are many small problems. The poor performance is not without reasons. Generally speaking, it is worth watching now, but I always feel that something is wrong 😥