The Eerie Survival Game

I watched it all night long and my back felt numb and cold! ! ! What a copycat! ! !

The writing is very beautiful, I hope the author can keep it🤭🤭🤭

The poison has been tested👌🏻 There are relatively few poisonous points. For non-old bookworms, there are no poisonous points. For experienced old bookworms, the poisonous points can be ignored, and the flaws are not covered up. Like most new authors, the supporting characters written by them are a bit facial, but no one except the top author can avoid this well. Interesting supernatural seedlings. It doesn't say it's supernatural or ghosts. The whole text says it's weird and supernatural. I guess I'm afraid of it 404😂. However, when I read it for the first time, ordinary people also know about supernatural beings. It felt a little strange. Then I just realized that this is the reaction of ordinary people after seeing a ghost⁽˙⁸˙⁾ The protagonist is bolder, more careful, not a virgin, not black-hearted, but in this regard, due to the newcomer's writing skills, he is not very outstanding, so it does not affect the viewing. However, for old bookworms, the author does not need narration to explain some of the protagonist's actions, such as not giving away his own things to protect newcomers. Old readers will understand this, but if explained, it will make the protagonist a bit verbose. I hope that the supporting characters in the later part of the book will not be twisted and indifferent like in many books. I really want to see the glory of human nature Love it~❤️❤️❤️

Let me first state that I think this book is an excellent novel, but I am talking about the shortcomings and not the advantages. The first task The first three chapters are amazing, the image of a calm ordinary person is vivid on the page, and it is very immersive. The fourth chapter failed, causing a conflict of characters to promote the plot. To be honest, if you are not as profound as the previous portrayal, there will be no problem The protagonist made two consecutive mistakes, the novel is about logic Editing is not necessary in reality. This plot can happen in reality, but novels cannot be written like this. This will waste the previous foreshadowing. If you want to achieve the purpose of getting the ghost pen, you can use your prediction to predict my prediction. However, luck caused me to win, which not only highlighted the calm characteristics of the protagonist, but also highlighted the terrifying atmosphere of the ghost. I obviously tried my best to think carefully, but in the end I still had to rely on luck to win. I could also take the opportunity to make the protagonist more cautious and smarter, and have a successful plot. In the words of a book friend, when you write that the protagonist thinks that a ghost will come out from behind, you can take the opportunity to write that the protagonist is on guard against a ghost that suddenly appears from behind, so you point the light behind him, and then the ghost suddenly appears in front of your face, and then you instinctively poke forward, OK, subdued. The most important thing is to try not to conflict with the calm character in the front. The protagonist starts to reflect or something, and starts to grow Second task Some people complain that you are not good at character relationships. You can not bring the image of the people around you into it. Don't be so violent, and don't write too many mindless conflicts. In reality, most people may not be too smart, and their emotional intelligence is not that high, but they don't have too much aggression and are relatively peaceful. The main reason is that your writing style is here, and what you write is not cool. I saw someone complaining about the protagonist Madonna. In fact, it is not a big problem. I can see that you want to write an ordinary person who is kind-hearted, but you have to be decisive, save if you can, and give up immediately if you can't, because you have portrayed the protagonist as a calm person. You can let the protagonist quickly analyze in his heart what is the success rate of this person, what are the losses, what are the benefits, and then make a decision quickly, which is very pleasing. When you are talking to the waiter, you can say, Pros: You can clearly see the function of the talisman paper, Disadvantage: I lost a few talisman papers Of course I didn't write everything down. That kind of Japanese comic-style male protagonist is quite annoying. You can just write the ultimate Virgin, write an idealist, read supernatural novels, or highlight the goodness of human nature and capture the shining points of human nature. Or highlight the evil of human nature and write about my cold and perverted atmosphere. After seeing the plot of the protagonist persuading the master of ceremonies, some people complained about the reason for this. In fact, to put it simply, the author did not treat him as a human being, and had no intention. He just used him as an NPC. He said a few words casually and thought you were convinced. It just seemed that he was acting with emotion and acting with reason. Of course, the flaws are not concealed. In fact, it is quite normal. Not every author can have this energy.

Now I don't understand what the author wants to do. Some authors only have one update a day to ensure quality and make the plot exciting without compromising the number of words. You may not be able to achieve very high quality as an author, but at least don't overdo it with the word count, okay? At the end of the chapter, I talked about traveling from home to the destination and then making a phone call. The specific content of the phone call has not been explained yet. Is this your attitude towards writing well? Or did you really just write an article on a whim, wasting your better brainpower? The previous complaints were always dropped. Is it all the blame on the readers for not reflecting on themselves? There is only one more update for Shui Cheng to be like that. I really don't know what you are doing. Don't you want grades? If you don't want to write anymore, you can finish it as soon as possible. Don't hang around, it will be very uncomfortable. It really makes me feel like my entire booking was wasted. (Only the list of readers and fans who subscribe to all orders has more than 70 people. It's time for you to reflect on yourself.)

After reading the latest 460 chapters, I decided to give up the book. I didn't know what it was written at a glance. There were too many explanations, psychology, etc., Basically just doing an action, and the rest were all mental supplements, interpretations, and psychological activities. From the time I arrived at the Exorcist Headquarters in the Weird World, there were more and more descriptions. Until now, one chapter is all about this kind of thing. I don't want to brag about it. This book brought me the joy of reading at the beginning, but now I have to give it up. Bizarre book lovers, farewell to other books!

Reading a novel feels like a fandom. Is it interesting? There are a lot of people in the comments who are not even allowed to say anything. It's disgusting.

Can you please stop being so cool? I'm going crazy. Three sentences to one chapter. I found the safe house, right? Let's go check it out. Just these three sentences and one chapter is awesome

Just don't listen to what you say. You're just wasting props to save people who don't know you and have a very bad attitude towards the protagonist. You're like a fool. Why do you always care about these people? Just a reminder is enough

The protagonist has no charisma, so why does he suddenly become a hero? People don't listen to him and insist on committing suicide, but he keeps saving others. Isn't it difficult for him to save himself?