It Began When I Saw It

Don't be a god, don't be a trumpet king of black eyes, don't be ridiculous, it was a good time to watch, but suddenly a dwarf came and saved the protagonist and his gang, and then the protagonist turned around and took over the dwarf's artifact, and thought of using the dwarf to protect himself, it was really both fake and stupid, it really made me sick

Awesome, one day I think this book will become a god!

Judging from the push-to-receiver ratio, this book is very popular, but too few people know about it. I only discovered it when I kept paying attention to when the author wrote the sequel to Train. Everyone, please help the author to promote it!

According to the angler's urine, personal suggestions: 1. Just make sure to update 3-4 times a day. Think carefully and organize the framework. Don't let the settings and plot collapse in the middle. 2. Don't show up as the heroine. Okay, I can't stand your ability to control the heroine, big brother. It's extremely toxic to begin with. I was persuaded to quit before I could even hold on to the free chapter. 3. Change the map immediately when you find that the rhythm is wrong. The fisherman's imagination is worthy of recognition, but it often happens that his personal rhythm is brought down and poisonous points appear because he is entangled in a plot. Changing the map can actually solve this problem. A new start can, to a certain extent, turn previous regrets into motivation for future advancement. 4. Don't bring personal emotions into the plot. Angler, many of the plots in your first two books were written with personal emotions, such as the plot in the previous book where the protagonist goes on a date with his girlfriend at the zoo. To be honest, it was really awkward for me to read because you put yourself in the position of the protagonist and deal with things. Just imagine, the real protagonist, not to mention how wise he is, should definitely be a rational person in a mutated world. How could he risk going to dangerous places at this time? That's not called a protagonist, it's called a standard supporting cast that can only live up to three chapters and is used to highlight the charm and characteristics of the protagonist! Speaking of which, if there is a trick like a sidekick giving experience and equipment to the protagonist, you can try it. 5. The description of details can be as vague as possible. Fisherman, your detailed operation still lacks some experience. If you really need it, I suggest you learn from Fate 0's wits method. 6. Dig more holes. One of your major shortcomings, angler, is that there are not enough holes, and even if there are, there are no critical or shocking effects. The article is so smooth that it can be described as 'simple'. This will lead to the fact that once you are not enjoying yourself during your lowest period, people will skip reading after subscribing for a few chapters or even stop subscribing and wait for a while before watching the subsequent plot. If you find that it is still tepid, then it is basically time to cool it down. On the contrary, if you dig a lot of interesting pits, and once this plot appears later and everyone finds it interesting but realizes that you have not seen it before, then those who have subscribed will not mind catching up on what they missed while skipping ahead. And once this situation is discussed in the book section and the rhythm is picked up, many people will not mind spending some time to help you create a book list and promote it.

How can I put it, this book is actually very well written. In the early stage, the various strange beasts and strange secrets of the mountains and seas made the readers want to put it down. However, later on, the protagonist's strength improved rapidly, and he no longer explored those strange places. With the addition of alien invasion and conquest, the sense of horror was gone, and the pale hand did not bring it up again. It may appear later.

🔨 Damn it, I wrote it well before, but suddenly I stopped exploring, and the style of the painting changed to a battle between hundreds of tribes, and it was like a battle for seconds. What happened? Did you change the person? If this continues, I will really give up the book. The writing in the first half of the book is really good. From the moment I entered the train, it became more and more sloppy 🔨🔨🔨🔨

Fishermen's books are the best spiritual food, and spiritual food is indispensable! ❤️❤️

I just saw that this book is classified as science fiction... Can you believe that this book is actually science fiction? I just finished reading the first chapter, and I feel strongly about tomb robbing. Let's see what the author wants to write in the second chapter. I was really shocked to see science fiction.

Seeing that Pig's Foot deceived 14 hunters into the mountain to save his mother, and 5 of them died just after entering, it was really a sign of filial piety.

I just finished reading the first story. It's very imaginative, the plot is twists and turns, but it's a bit intellectual. So many people died during the expedition. Everyone in the expedition team is so safe. Let's chat about popular science. Are you not afraid that you will be next? I knew in advance that there were creatures but I was not equipped with an infrared detector. The most important thing is, can ordinary people withstand the pressure so deep underground? 😅, the underground magma has come out, is there no poisonous gas? Is the ventilation that good? I don't know if the subsequent plot can be more logically consistent.