Walking Alone in the World

In the system flow, as soon as I saw the task failed and erased, I deleted the book. Why? Because I am tired of seeing the system flow of erasing, and the tasks fail to be erased every now and then, and there is no innovation! ! ! ! ! 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Long Xiaoyun and other things are the most disgusting

Ni Ma, the Long Xiaoyun part is so disgusting! He also tried to clear Long Xiaoyun's name, but then gave up after jumping up and seeing how disgusting he was again.

The deliberate ancient style in the front and the escaping style of writing in the back personally feel like they are refined. Chapter 2 "Erasure", I was speechless.

Walking alone? Why impose tasks?

Let's not talk about anything else. Just read Chapter 2. It's all poison slowly. How can Xiao Li learn to fly a knife in three days? In that ancient world, those heroes were very simple? Especially those heroes, in a world where murder is not illegal, how can a stranger trust you in three days? How naive! Doesn't this include learning how to fly a knife with Xiao Li? The dead Shen Nong was poisoned to come back to life and died, until he was reduced to ashes! Not to mention the advanced technical skills such as martial arts. Let's just say that a stranger in modern times learns certain techniques, and he is also a master of them! Who do you think has lost his mind and taught me this in three days? Unless you throw money at it directly. If he was the only one in the world who knew a very popular technique, then the money spent would be measured in pounds! And even if I teach you step by step, it is impossible to teach them all at once. In modern times, there are disciples who starve their masters to death. This is what they say! How stupid do you think Xiao Li Feidao's brain is... There are only 10,000 words here!

Two chapters of poisoning, what the hell system, three days to learn Xiao Li's flying knife, or else it will be wiped out? ! ! I followed it for three days, eating, drinking and sleeping in the freezing weather. Willpower can generate electricity.

I gave up when I first watched Let Long Xiaoyun Cheng Quan, Lin Shiyin and Li Xunhuan. I'm sure Feng Xiaotian will show up the day after tomorrow and fall in love with Lin Shiyin. It would be funny if Li Xunhuan passes him by when the time comes. Ha 😥

Be reasonable! There is no fool in the world of Gulong. You and Li Xunhuan will teach you how to fly a knife after three days with you? Think about it for yourself, is it possible?

The author does not need to think that the protagonist must go to a higher-end world to upgrade. Some low-end worlds are not necessarily worse in martial arts than high-end worlds, just because the world level is low. Since it is about the heavens, there are many worlds that everyone likes to see. When writing a low-end world, you can limit the protagonist, and you can also add some leisure worlds. In addition, can you replace the thunderbolts with golden light?

To put it bluntly, tomb robbing means digging up other people's ancestral graves! A pig's feet can travel through all the worlds. Why do you want him to do the job of a thief digging up other people's ancestral graves? 😰

After reading the first chapter, I realized that an ordinary person today lived in the snow and ice for three days without eating or drinking. Awesome👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Insulting your IQ! ! !

Those who act chivalrously and righteously are all suffering from chuunibyou

Reading the reviews, I'm probably going to buy this book. The author can learn from his experience and re-open a new book 🤭

In fact, it is relatively high-quality grain and grass.

Can I write about Fengzi Monogatari? Over the years, I have almost never written a fanfic about Fengzi Monogatari. I really want to read it. Although I don't have much money, you wrote it and I revised it

It's not that I can't stand it, it's just that in my mind, reading the author's article and having to organize it logically is a bit tiring.

Are you sure you are not in the wrong sect? After receiving Lu Zu's elixir method, shouldn't you worship the Quanzhen Sect? Why did you go to worship Shenxiao?

The first two chapters are so poisonous. What will be the consequences of an ordinary person running in the snow for three days and three nights without eating or drinking? It took three days to have a heart-to-heart relationship with Li Xunhuan? In the world of ancient dragons, if Li Xunhuan was this kind of person, he would probably be dead by now.

Personally, I didn't find it enjoyable to watch, and the character of the protagonist was also uncomfortable to watch.

When writing about the flow of people from all over the world, especially some copies that are more popular among readers, such as Covering the Sky Perfectly and Devouring the Starry Sky, the most disgusting thing is to accept the protagonist as a disciple or apprentice, snatch the opportunity of the original owner, adapt the original work at will, and then write yourself as invincible. This is the most disgusting thing. To be honest, you can normally participate and help, don't belittle the original owner for your own sake, and write your own new ideas in the fan copy.

I really can't stand this book. I'm so annoyed by this kind of blabbering about a simple thing. The author has to make it very profound. Are you going to write eight-legged essay? The more I watch, the more annoying I get. I understand the plot. When you watch the protagonist talk, you like to talk about it. It feels mysterious and powerful? This book is really bad. I have never criticized a book before. This is the first time. What is it written?

I think the writing is very good, the author keeps working hard and hopes to persevere. 😃

It's another poisonous article circulating in the system. How many poisonous weeds are there?

Anyone who can watch the first world is a ruthless person

I hope that after I ascend, I will cry like a dog when I saw my apprentice die.

There is actually a Thunderbolt author. Come on! There are too many story lines and characters in "Perak" in capital letters and close-ups, and the characters are too classic.

Development is too slow. Save up a dozen or twenty chapters and then read again

The second chapter of the Golden Three Chapters is about obliteration. Come on, the author has the shadow of a great god. That is to say, if the shadow is more than a shadow, it is all nonsense. What is the use of obliteration? What effect can it have? Can't I write without obliteration?