The Years of a Spirit Beast Amid the Spiritual Qi Revival

How should I put it? The biggest failure of this book is not the poor writing, the unpleasant plot, or the various forced wisdom, but the biggest poisonous point of the parents recognizing their apprentices. It ruined such a good idea for a book. Wouldn't it be better to directly sacrifice the parents? In this type of book, if you also write about parents, relatives and various relationships, are you afraid that the book will be unhappy? How many people abandoned the book because of this paragraph, so I just started writing it. All kinds of plots are forced to feed the shi, what's the use of writing to make yourself happy

After reading the introduction, I thought it was a behind-the-scenes flow. An invincible flow like this is best written as a behind-the-scenes flow. The best thing is that he is an ordinary person on the surface and a big boss behind the scenes. However, I found that the main plot in the early stage revolves around the parents of the protagonist, which is a bit confusing and has no highlights.

As title. What do you feel is wrong with this article? You can go here. I'll revise and explain...

There is a plot at the beginning: parents sacrifice to heaven, and their magic power is boundless. Ridicule is ridicule, but it is still a very friendly setting for the author. Nowadays, most of Qidian's authors are students or unmarried people. Without enough life experience or writing skills, it is difficult to write about family relationships that can convince readers. So the best way is to either worship the sky or travel through time, so that you can remember it occasionally and overdo it, and you don't need to write long paragraphs about things you are not good at. Now the author is too entangled in things that he is not good at, and the center is not clear. Does the protagonist want to idle the clouds and wild cranes or dominate the world? Helping monsters or taking advantage of people? Well, these are four directions, but now the protagonist is not clear in any of them. So it doesn't please any kind of readers now.

The novel is good. Why is it that it's almost forty chapters and there are no recommendation votes? Sadly, the author should not become a eunuch! I invested. . .

The setting is okay, but the writing is so bad that it's almost like a novice. The main thing is that the writing is awkward. It's okay to talk about unnecessary issues. I have to lower my intelligence and attack, which I can't accept. I can't tell where the years are and where they are. I just see a woman playing around and having a lot of bugs. To give you an example, I put on a mask to meet national figures in the early stage. To be honest, an ordinary person like me can understand that I can search nearby towns and find a similar body shape to identify the male protagonist. Alas It's not that no one watched, it's just that the writing and the imagination are really different and the setting is a bit different, so it slipped away.

How should I put it, it's better not to have my parents, and the GM, who made me extremely uncomfortable, and felt that the characters in the book were all mentally retarded, and by the way, they made me mentally retarded 😒😒😒😒😒

Seeing that he has accepted another nephew as his student, I don't want to be too discouraged. It's quite fun to fool Wang Xiaoxiao from time to time. The protagonist's attitude towards the two students is very different. One is indifferent and wants to drive others away all day long, one wants to be tied to his body and play games with him every day, one pretends to be a superior person from the beginning, and the other uses games to enhance feelings from the beginning.

All I can say is that it makes sense to rush into the streets.

I feel that what the author wrote poorly before was the protagonist's handling of the emotional problems of his parents. Since the protagonist has been reincarnated as a demon, the karma he had for his parents in the previous life should have been cut off. This is equivalent to a price, the price of reincarnation as this kind of demon. And when you were writing this process, you always pulled and pulled the relationship between the protagonist and his parents in the previous life, uh, tightly locked. Readers will find it not enjoyable at all. After you become a demon, you can support them a little, for example, make them rich and prosperous. Well, that's enough. Instead of going to the extreme of killing them all, you just briefly mentioned this sentence. You spent so many chapters writing about the relationship with them. They are just a simple and ordinary relationship between tenants and tenants. I even think you can leave his parents Oh, this is just my personal opinion. I can't stand it anymore. It feels like an invincible and refreshing article. The writing is procrastinating and grinding, and it is not interesting at all. It is not for daily leisure.