The Years of a Spirit Beast Amid the Spiritual Qi Revival

To be honest, the biggest flaw in this book isn't the poor writing, the unsatisfying plot, or the forced simplifications; it's the parents' apprenticeship scene—that's the biggest culprit. It ruined such a great idea and the whole book. Wouldn't it have been better to just have the parents sacrifice themselves? Why include parents and relatives in this type of book? Are you afraid it won't flop?

Based on the synopsis, I thought it was a mastermind story. It's best to write an invincible protagonist story as a mastermind, ideally with someone appearing as an ordinary person but secretly a powerful boss. However, the early plot revolves around the protagonist's parents, which is a bit confusing and lacks highlights.

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There's a meme on Qidian: When parents sacrifice themselves to heaven, they gain boundless power. Joking aside, this is actually a very friendly setting for authors. Most authors on Qidian are students or unmarried, lacking sufficient life experience or writing skills to create believable family relationships.

The novel is good. Why are there so few recommendation votes after almost forty chapters?! Poor author, don't abandon the story! I invested...

The premise is alright, but the writing is so bad it's almost a piece of amateur literature. The main problem is that it's written in an awkward way. It's easy to point out unnecessary issues, but instead of being presented in an idiotic way, it's hard for me to accept.

To be honest, it would have been better to not have parents at all. And that GM... It made me incredibly upset. All the characters in the book seemed like idiots, and they even made me feel a bit less intelligent. 😒😒😒😒😒

Seeing that he'd taken on a nephew as a student was incredibly discouraging. When it was just Wang Xiaoxiao, the occasional teasing was quite entertaining, but the protagonist's attitude towards the two students was drastically different. One was indifferent and always trying to get rid of him, while the other practically clung to him, playing games with him all the time. One started off acting like a superior, while the other used games to build a relationship.

All I can say is that there's a reason he failed.

I feel the author's weakness in the earlier parts lies in the protagonist's handling of his emotional issues with his parents. Since the protagonist has been reincarnated as a demon, the karmic ties with his parents from his past life should have been severed—this is essentially a price to pay for being reborn as a demon.