This Assistant Is Very Careful

Overall, it's okay, but the emotional development of the male protagonist and Coke is a bit abrupt, do you fall in love with someone just by teasing them? Including the interaction between the two in the next few chapters, the writing is a bit embarrassing and childish. The author may want to consider giving up the description of the emotional line. There is also the gangster who escaped from upstairs and saw Coke's beautiful face and said that he wanted to catch him to vent his anger. This is very brainless. You must know that they were protecting the boss's escape at the time. It was too late to kill someone to clear the way, so they still wanted to arrest the girl to vent their anger? Author, are you afraid that the male protagonist will have no reason to take action? Another point is that this book has a domestic animation style. Please remind me that the novel and animation are different. Writing a novel in the animation style seems a bit awkward. Please change it in time now at the beginning, otherwise it will become a poisonous weed.

It's really good. He has a rare intelligence that is online but not too dark. The male protagonist is cautious but not sick. I like it.

Can you update it soon 😭, I'm so anxious. Come on, come on, I hope more people can read this book.

The writing is okay, good luck to the author!

Just a quick refresher I hope the author can summarize the experience of the previous book and write a better work. The first chapter of this book seems to be good.

Come on, good writing! Grab a first prize! 🤓