Because That's How the Script Was Written

I am a shameless person who reads pirated copies. I found this on a pirated novel website, and I appreciate it, gentlemen. I have no choice but to be a poor student and am used to reading pirated versions. Except for a few novels that I really like, I rarely spend money to read genuine ones. However, this novel really gave me a big surprise. I like to browse the comment area before reading a book, and then I found that the comment area was bleak (the comment area of ​​pirated novel software). And I was born to be a swordsman. To be honest, I don't believe in evil love and being mean, so I started reading it from the first chapter. It made my heart explode. It was even more uncomfortable than Xiang Xiang, but I am a bitch! I wanted to see how long I could last. Finally, around chapter 25, the feeling of tightness in my chest disappeared. The feeling of seeing the light through the thick fog was very refreshing. It can be said that it was as refreshing as putting on a new gun on the morning of the New Year. Due to the influence of the comment section (piracy), I am afraid that the genuine version will also suffer injustice, so I came here to support it, but it seems that I can rest assured. Come on, author! Awesome! 🤭🤭🤭

Fighting the streets or becoming a god depends on the control in the later stage. If you survive the early stage, you will get the fairy grass (fortunately, I have high poison resistance and survived Chapter 15). Keep the claws. The author NB finally hinted that the essence is fine.

No matter whose idea of ​​​​the opening is borrowed from, this beginning is still very novel in the novel. It's a pity that the protagonist was tortured to death in the first 20 chapters of a novel that everyone could guess. No matter how good the idea is, it is boring... I still hope that the author will achieve results and not be a casual eunuch, come on

Come on, come on, I think the author wants to be a eunuch, come here and be active. To be honest, I haven't seen such a novel book for a long time. The author should persist. After all, the further the book goes, the more readers it will have. Your book has a lot People are reading, and there are a lot of potential readers, but according to my guess, the reasons for the low number of subscriptions are: 1. The title of the book is very attractive, but the first ten chapters are too poisonous after entering, which leads to a huge gap. I was poisoned to death, and I died before I could wait for the fairy grass. Solution: The author can make appropriate changes, or pin a few more book reviews to let readers who don't know the situation understand the reason. 2. Many readers have a habit of keeping books. Although they often die if they keep reading, they still enjoy it @_@, author, keep at it. Such a refreshing style is not easy to see. 470,000 Words have been written. If you don't stick to it, all the previous efforts will be in vain. 3. Among the readers, there are many students who are relatively poor, and some are in semi-closed schools. They go home and play with their mobile phones every few weeks. It is not easy to read a novel. If the results are not very good, you should not abandon them directly, but should look for solutions to them - Lu Xun The longer you persist, the more people will read this book^V^ I have already pinned your book to the top {"NickName":"Oh Lei Wa Gang Damuda","UserId":210672515}

The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a chapter that says that a group of elementary school readers cheated this book 😭

In the early stage of the book, the character design completely collapsed Protagonist: In the early stage, he endured humiliation and endured all kinds of hardships in order to survive, but later on, when his life was not in danger, he actually grabbed Tang's opportunities and weapons? The key is that Tang Ye has never harmed him, and even regards him as the person he trusts the most. How do you treat him like this? What follows is even more outrageous: he actually rapes someone to save his life, then turns into a harem, and a passionate novel turns into a cool novel? A hot-blooded and unyielding man turns into a stallion with a smart brain? Tang Haotian: He has the aura of the protagonist, no scheming, he is polite and not arrogant, but his intelligence is too serious later. He actually regarded Ye, who had harmed him many times, as his benefactor? Who has the halo of the protagonist? The most outrageous thing is that I heard that she turned into a woman later? Senior sister: At first, she said that the senior sister was gentle and good-looking, but she turned into a yandere after having a relationship with the protagonist. However, she did not break out when the protagonist had a harem and instead helped the protagonist to have a harem. Apart from her scary expression, she did not do anything yandere-y. Could this still be a pseudo-yandere? Then what do you mean when you described the senior sister's eyes as scary dozens of times before? Not to mention other things, after seeing Yun being raped, she promised to marry him if he won the fight in a year, and then she gave up.

The turning point won't be until the wedding at the end of the year in the plot. According to the general plot, the elder sister will definitely fall in love with Tang Haotian, and then Tang Haotian will come to steal the marriage. . . This plot is so frustrating to watch

I suddenly had a magical idea. This book should be called "On how local natives can play a supporting role after they feel self-awareness and become a yellow hair while whitewashing"

Such a free start. I guess I won't be able to write for long after I hit the street... I hope there will be a turning point, the writing level is still there...

Suddenly, I felt that when the protagonist was still a supporting character, he was ridiculed in various ways; but when the supporting character took away the protagonist's opportunities step by step, what he did was not as good as the original protagonist.