The Self-Cultivation of the Ancient Gods

After seeing Chapter 500, I was ready to give up. After thinking about it, I decided to say a few words. The opening concept is great, I'm looking forward to it very much. But from the moment Alice, the first witch, awakened her power, I had a vague feeling that it was not good. The author's positioning was wrong and it might be gone. I remember when we were in junior high school, our Chinese teacher defined several elements of a novel. In fact, I can't remember them at all. The only thing I remember is that contradictions drive the plot and the plot enriches the characters. These are the qualities that an excellent novel must have. The author always explains to readers how pure witches are, and he especially likes psychological descriptions. To be honest, this kind of psychological description is the worst. To express a character's personality, you must not use her talking to herself. But through what she did, from the perspective of an outsider. Readers hope that they are omniscient, but the author cannot let readers know everything. Instead, he must hide some things and stimulate curiosity through games with readers. Similar to what Lao Guo said, storytelling must have a hook, otherwise will you come back next time? Focus more on plot conflicts. This is something I have become more and more important in reading online articles for more than ten years. Authors must learn to subtract, remove unimportant plots, and describe them in one sentence. For example, developing thermal weapons. There is really no need for such long descriptions. Instead, they must be interspersed in the plot and use more exciting conflicts to attract readers and make them ignore these boring things. How to make a gun and how to make a cannon. Do readers need you to popularize science? You just need to make the characters' abilities and technology in the novel logically consistent. Remember that you are writing a novel, and all these things are serving your plot. Only a wonderful plot can make the characters more vivid and attract your readers to follow. Farming, technology, witches, and ancient gods are all means, and the plot is the core. After talking about the plot, let's talk about the characters. There are quite a few characters that have appeared so far, but none of them left a deep impression on me. They are all very stereotyped, especially Alice, who the author has designated as the first harem. A little girl of junior high school age, who has been growing up under the protection of her relatives, can transform herself into a person who is immersed in the laboratory researching technology every day in a few months? ? ? How many adults can do this? Faced with the "bad news" about his father and sister one after another, are you just worried? Didn't even stop the work at hand? Don't you organize people to look for it? Not asking for help from other lords? Is your heart so big? Let's talk about Sir Waymar. I feel like this character's only role is to sell his daughter. The process of him turning to the tentacle monster is simply inexplicable. Just because his daughter believes in the ancient gods, he changes with him? Don't think that thermal weapons are so great, the witch's holy family is even worthless. The war between humans and orcs has been going on for many years. The ancient gods have not just come to this world. As the kingdom's trump cards are revealed one by one, the strength of both sides continues to upgrade. The methods of other ancient gods are not even as good as the holy family? This paradox becomes increasingly difficult to explain. A politician who has been in the system for so many years and is even qualified to be involved in the struggle for succession, will he fall to Ability God just because of a few guns and a few landmines? Are your eyelids that shallow? Will he allow his daughter to have the tendency to believe in strange gods? How big is the Blackstone Territory? How big is the kingdom? Is this how high the bet is? His exile to the Blackstone Territory was just a political asylum, and he still wanted to continue working and return to the royal capital. Wasn't the fact that his daughter was a heretic not enough for his whole family to be burned on the stake? These are just a few of the more obvious flaws, and there are many such logical contradictions that make the characters in the book like character cards. If the author writes an attribute on it, he will have one more, without his own thinking, his own stance, and his own character. Finally, let's talk about the positioning of the book. A reader in the book review section said it very well. If you don't have the ability to create trends, you have to bow your head and compromise. You set tentacle monsters and beautiful witches just to open a harem and engage in ambiguity, so some readers are filtered out. But you are worried about 404 and have been reluctant to drive. The readers who are attracted by your subject matter will also be offended by you. Nowadays, the definition of Internet articles is actually becoming more and more precise. If you want to read serious books, read them in real form. Internet articles must be mobile, fragmented, and entertainment-oriented. This is determined by the market and cannot be changed by personal will, so the author wants the data to look good. Either you have the ability to break this rule and lead a new trend, or you can honestly compromise with the market, otherwise you are sure to be on the street.

I've basically finished reading it, and since my grades are not good, I'd like to make some suggestions. The biggest problem with this book is its unstable positioning. Although this book is said to have adopted part of the setting of Love Craftsmanship, and it is a strange beast, the final feedback image is actually a tentacle monster. In addition, the promise made in the early part of the article that it can be transformed into a human form directly places the positioning of this article in the "harem". In this way, at the beginning of the book, readers with single and no female protagonists are basically filtered out. But how did the author arrange it later? The beginning was okay, but as it went on, the lily trend among the heroines became more obvious. The protagonist even transformed into an old man in the last public chapter to meet the heroines, which basically made readers feel that they had lost all hope of accepting the heroine. Readers who liked the harem were discouraged a lot, which is why so many subscriptions were dropped at the beginning. Because of the single heroine, readers without a heroine and a harem were all turned away. You must know that people nowadays are basically very impatient. When they see the so-called "poisonous points", they will probably retreat directly instead of persisting. After all, the next step will be real money (it will be worse if you watch pirated ones). The author is not strong enough to retain readers by his writing alone. Most of the readers who stay are readers who are still looking forward to it because of the opening chapter. To sum up the above problems, it is actually "more than one heroine, not a harem". Neither of them pleases each other, and this is what affects the performance the most. If you want to improve your performance, the most important thing is to stabilize the route. There is no way to change it at the beginning. It is best to directly determine the harem route and take advantage of the recommendation of the most famous harem author (Ji Cha) from this starting point to retain the influx of readers and make a good turnaround. Otherwise, if you continue to write like this, as the number of words increases, the patience of Harem readers will become less and less, and they will slowly switch from genuine to pirated, and finally give up. Then this book would really be hopeless. The author also said that he has a family to support and children to raise. As an adult, if you consider your family, you should compromise appropriately with the market. Finally, this is a rare novel with potential, with a tentacle monster as the protagonist. I hope it can be written well. Above, Happy New Year

What a miserable business. I admire the author's noble sentiments. Talk about your personal irresponsible point of view. 1 The setting and world view are very attractive. However, I feel that the world view is reflected too little or even not at all in the early stage, which may not retain readers. Later, a corner of the world finally unfolded, the Devouring of Ancient Gods, and the Star-Seeking Civilization (appeared in the dungeon, but there seemed to be no hints or foreshadowing before this dungeon. It always felt a bit abrupt when watching it - it was obviously an adventure exploration, but there was no expectation to reveal the truth step by step. It is like a new and imaginary journey; it is obviously a technology left over from ancient times, but it has not left an ancient shadow on the earth), the endless starry sky... It is obvious that we are in a world of chaos and madness (perhaps), but there is no fear of peeking into the "conspiracy" of the world step by step. Generally speaking, it feels like there is a lack of foreshadowing, resulting in a lack of tension when the explosion occurs, and it is also a bit abrupt. 2 Technology tree, the industrialization of the Western Fantasy version should be a major feature of this book. But spending a chapter or so on "an in-depth analysis of the basic principles and magic of thermal weapons" may be too lazy for some readers. 3 Forgive me for speaking out quickly: the pace of this book is too slow! One hundred chapters are just beginning, another few hundred chapters are establishing a foothold, and another one or two hundred chapters are Arabey's initial decision. So now the popular dramas: "Waiting for Territory Expansion", "Waiting for the Ancient Gods to Struggle for Hegemony", "Waiting to Exploring Space", "Waiting for the Galaxy", "Waiting for the Stars to Return", "Waiting..." In the vast galaxy, when is the New Year! There are currently 600 chapters, and it is estimated that there will be 6,000 chapters when the galaxy is unified... Readers cannot afford to wait. In addition, some things may be better if they are "appropriately detailed". For example, when our amiable and respectable author first wrote about Iluli and the four-star witches, I was guessing: Someone among them must have been in trouble, and Climb helped generously, and then someone converted to our religion, gradually corrupting the four-star witches, the disaster became more and more serious, and finally captured them all, and then Arabbe joined forces with the Blackstone Territory epic to dominate the ocean and control the air. Eat two kingdoms, force the orc army to death, devour one god, and hunt down another who escaped. At the same time, we gradually approach the reality of the world and face a new crisis. Diaomin like me only thinks that things that readers can guess, that are tedious in daily life, must be like this, that can be said in one sentence, and that are not very attractive anyway, should be abbreviated. Our author is like holding a fine brush, carefully describing every bit of the world. But sometimes readers can only guess half a dozen of the plot that follows, and writing it in detail may not be attractive and cost-effective. Anyway, plot! 4 Let me talk about what I find interesting. Climb's evolution always leaves people with endless reveries. Teasing the witch from time to time is a good spice, but some readers may not be used to this unconventional relationship between the male protagonist and the witch, or the lonely LSP simply feels that there is nothing useful. It's also fun to set up a worldview. Above. Praise to our authors!

I would like to make some comments. Although the confrontation between the Holy Spirit Fang and the protagonist Fang in the book is stinky and long, some of the scenes are pretty good. However, if you think about it carefully, something is wrong. The protagonist is so special, isn't he the evil god? ? After covering up and pretending, have you really been moved? I really started washing it non-stop! ? (Is it necessary?) To be honest, the power of the Holy Spirit is much more holy than the protagonist. It is given to men and women, and it is not as narrow and focused on bloodline as the protagonist. There is no problem with the doctrine, but the problem is actually with the humans below! The essence of the protagonist Fang is really fake, and he is a hundred steps away from the Holy Spirit. Very narrow-minded! So this article seems really weird now.

This book tells the story of the protagonist who inherits the legacy of the tentacle monster and starts a scientific revolution in the world of Western fantasy lordship.

Strength and wisdom coexist, the incarnation of love and justice, the dream of millions of girls - the God of Realm, the majestic and noble ancient god, Krem! Not counting punctuation marks, counting twice per chapter is 242X35X2=16940 The author is really a refreshing change in the field of hydrology🤫

I liked this book very much. When I first read it, I thought the name was a bit strange, so I clicked in. Then I found that it was well written and very interesting. Although the data is low, I will have these things in the future. I support you. It is now on the shelves. The first order is very important. I will order it first. I hope all major book friends will also work hard and support the author.

I've read the author's first two books, Old Eunuch.

I really like this novel, cheers to the author.

As long as the follow-up plot doesn't collapse and I continue to write at my current level, I'll be sure to finish it like a charm!

Tentacle monster vs. Horse monkey soju 😏

I guess the reason why it's not popular is that it's not very good. How can the ancient gods be so cheap? Shouldn't the ancient gods be chaotic and incomprehensible? How did I become an amiable grandpa when I came to your place The writing is quite good, but it just doesn't have that flavor.

People who have many problems should think about their own problems carefully. Everyone has different ideas. Writing an ancient god is not like an ancient god in this way and that is not like an ancient god in that way. This is an ancient god written by the author, an ancient god transformed by a player. Many people have problems when reading novels. They like to bring their own opinions. What you are reading is a novel written by someone else. How could the author know what you think and how to write according to your ideas? Are you really going to write a book on ancient mythology? You have to understand what the author writes, leave if you don't like it, stay if you like it This novel is obviously just a set of ancient gods' abilities. The protagonist is not the ancient god himself, but the other ancient gods are the real ancient gods. The protagonist is a human thought, using the essence of earth's human culture for thousands of years to develop power, and an ancient god with a bit of player thinking. It is almost as if he is a traitor to the ancient gods. The internal system in the future is probably biased toward utopia. Everyone has their own favorites. I don't know about the setting of Ancient Gods. I just think this subject matter is very interesting and I like the setting so I came to read it. If you like to use human thinking to use the abilities of Ancient Gods, you can read it. Some people are loyal fans of the setting of Ancient Gods. If you feel that the human thinking in Ancient Gods makes you uncomfortable, you can look for novels that match the Ancient Gods you think.

Is this the story of the tentacle monster and his harem?

There is a saying: What are you, the ancient god? You don't want women, you don't want blood sacrifices, you don't want gold, you don't want magic power. Are you here to build infrastructure? ****Ancient God? You are still coaxing the little girl like this, you must be a true god (without mercy Those who like Cthulhu will not like to read it, and those who like children's fairy tales will not come Slip away.

This book is good, why isn't it popular?

50+ Chapters, about the craftsman's daughter, Elena, who becomes wise? Author, do you know the background of what you are writing about? How could a mere craftsman's daughter be so deviant? Aren't you from that era? ? I even suspect that Elena is a modern time traveler. 😅 Writing such a character is simply trying to persuade someone to quit. Still unable to escape from low-level writers. I just lost my mind when I wrote this plot. Creating characters is not just about random writing. There is no joint era background at all. Elena, the daughter of a craftsman, is a princess? No! Writing such unruly behavior and thoughts simply reveals the author's low IQ. When I saw this article written about the daughter of a craftsman, I lost interest and was off-putting. What the hell are you writing about? Adding a supporting role of a witch is not difficult, so why do it yourself! Author. In an aristocratic society, the daughter of craftsmen is not afraid to respect the nobility? Did Liang Jingru give you the courage? How could a commoner and a slave think so wildly? To eavesdrop, to break in? ! When I saw the author writing about Elena, I suspected that she was a time traveler. . What is it?

The front part was fine, but the back part was obviously broken and the plot couldn't be controlled, which led to a continuous decline in style. The Blackstone Territory is only a big village at most, a small town-level force, but it also attracted the Duke, the Orcs and the Holy Spirit Church. They are so idle, all staring at this place where birds don't poop? Moreover, the time arrangement is unreasonable, and the farming style is obvious. As a result, after hundreds of tricks, you almost transitioned from primitive society to the industrial revolution, and not even half of a winter passed?

Why is it that in Qidian's fantasy medieval novel, the protagonist must engage in science and technology, build muskets, steam engines, and forcefully promote the agrarian revolution? The protagonist has a mysterious brain by default, and can do everything and all principles. And a complete routine has been formed: the protagonist travels through time - the enemy attacks - the protagonist makes a gun - the gun-wielding militiamen easily kill the enemy - the protagonist earns a large amount of money - the protagonist sells weapons - the protagonist continues to advance technology... Until the last atomic bomb directly blows up the final boss or a certain god There are very few fantasy novels that do not use guns or steam engines like the dragon is dead.

Why can't I find the book I read a long time ago, "Heading the Dragon Palace"?

I watched "Head of the Dragon Palace" when I was a child and it left a deep impression on me. It was very interesting.