I Am a God in Tokyo

I have finished reading all the current chapters of this book, and I saw the author's request for leave saying that he would rewrite the second volume, and I have something to say. 1. There must be an outline. A complete outline can help the author better control the direction of the entire book. Without an outline, writing whatever comes to mind can easily cause the plot to collapse. 2. Don't change the plot arbitrarily because of readers' comments, because you can't make all readers think it's well written, so if there are bad reviews, you should think about whether the logic is consistent, whether the plot rhythm is appropriate, whether the writing is smooth, etc. Consider making changes only if there are real problems, not to please readers. If you listen too much to readers' opinions, you will only fall into an endless cycle of revisions, negative reviews, revisions, and negative reviews, which will make you very tired and the book will easily become eunuchs. 4. I think the author chose the subject well and it is relatively novel. Although it is a bit niche, as long as the author is serious and the quality is high, readers will naturally gather. It is impossible for a newbie to write a book and become popular all at once. That is a very small chance of time. Generally, readers and reputation are accumulated slowly. 5. After the author finishes writing a chapter, it is best to check it a few times to see if the sentences are smooth, whether there are typos, etc. Although these problems are small, they also greatly affect the reading experience. Overall, I still like this book very much. I hope the author will get better and better and the book will get better results.

It's a bit like a stream of consciousness! Most people nowadays don't read novels carefully! It's the beginning, the middle, and the end taught by middle school and high school Chinese teachers. It's very sloppy, but it's very efficient to read! Suitable for beginners! The author's book lies in carefulness! Some plots are not continuous, but there will be a sentence to introduce them later! Very conscious! So you have to look carefully for continuity! This book is not poisonous, but very magical! There is logic too! I just hope the author can write less stream of consciousness🙂

The creativity is very good, but this book is still relatively niche. If you only read the title and think it is a cool article, it is actually quite sad. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The introduction corresponds to the plot, and the plot is slow to heat up, which is better. The introduction of many novels is just a gimmick, and often breaks away from the introduction within a few chapters. 2. You really can't read a book with your head in mind, the plot is so convoluted, and every paragraph of text gives you an ambiguous feeling, and you can't connect or judge it through the context. But when you think about the plot, it seems okay, but it doesn't seem right either. Although the writing style is a bit awkward and there are many typos, it still maintains a weak connection between the main lines, which is valuable. If you read carefully your favorite part of each unit, it will give you different thoughts. 3. Most of the characters in the main plot have equal roles. This writing has good and bad qualities, but in this case, the good writing outweighs the bad. Disadvantages: 1. Precisely because the plot goes around and around, the plot and the protagonist are blurred. . . Who is the male protagonist? Is it Qiye or Qinglong? Who brought the power of fantasy? You can relate to any of this, and it's an unpleasant feeling. 2. It's okay to be cruel, but is it too much to have people dying at every turn in every story of Qiye? How about a happy story (unit)? If happiness and misfortune are equal, then what about the male protagonist's happy moments? Author, why don't you write? In the first story, the male protagonist was stabbed by the girl he liked; in the second story, the fox girl who liked the male protagonist was abandoned by the male protagonist (although it was forcibly), and after committing suicide, she chased the male protagonist; in the third story, the girl who was married to the male protagonist by a god was almost raped. Although it is a story within a story, the story feels increasingly darker and more depressing to watch. Author, how can you say that the trend is for the better? 3. The most important thing is that the sister's role is less, and the sister who runs the main line is like a tool. . . . . Summary: Reason for watching: The plot is more realistic and the writing style is more novel. There are very few novels with this kind of unique thinking. People who like it will like it very much, and people who don't like it will dislike it very much. The characters are relatively fleshed out and there are many female protagonists. Friends who like to read refreshing and daily novels can change their taste and relieve their depressed mood. Reason for not reading: I feel like it collapsed in the later stages (the last few dozen chapters). The story does not have a complete ending, which is a pity. There are some issues with the details.

The author's writing is quite good, but the connection between reality and the novel is not very good and a bit stiff. The description in some places is not very clear, I hope it will get better and better.

Thousands of words can be condensed into one sentence. Come on, sister.

The values ​​​​are very positive, but... The logical line is a bit messy, and you need to figure it out yourself. Paying too much attention to the emotional line is not a bad thing, but it is a bit nonsensical. It gives people the feeling that reality has not pushed forward or changed after reading a lot. For example, after the demon phase is over, I see that the protagonist's life has actually returned to its original state. What about the debt? What about the Sakura family and the other family who were forced into marriage? .... The hole must be filled in, otherwise it will not be complete. Only after the hole in one story is filled can the next story begin. Otherwise, it will feel like there is less jump and a lot of things have been seen.. This is my feeling after reading two story lines. I hope it can be helpful (๑• . •๑)

Reading the chapters, the author must have been shocked There are always "smart" people who can't help but guide others in writing. This is normal. However, if there are more fans, there will naturally be people who can communicate with them in a civilized way. In a certain movie about Naruto Reborn in Tokyo, Japan, some people directly attacked the author personally. But the book was still written like that (at least it was far from what those people wanted) Come on, author! ! !

When I read this book before, I felt that the writing style and the protagonist's eloquence were very similar to **The Yin Yang House. . . I just read it, and I didn't expect it to be your new book. . Come on!

I want to be cute, I want to recommend, I want to collect, I want to invest, I want to ask for all kinds of things, I want to ask for help! Everyone is welcome to provide suggestions downstairs!

Is this really a time traveler? I didn't notice it at all, just write about the indigenous people.

The setting is good, but in what era is there such a beginning? One chapter is too much, and I write so many chapters without getting to the main point. I can barely get into the story later. I was attracted by the name and introduction, and then I found out that I had been cheated.

To be honest, it's a thankless job for you. Readers "can't understand" it, and you also have a "hard time" writing it.

In the first chapter, I thought the protagonist was very arrogant, but then it turned into nothing but incompetence and rage. In the era of fast food, isn't this early stage too depressing for readers?

When I saw the plot in Chapter 3, my first feeling was not that I was moved! But I think this woman is so selfish! If you think about it from the perspective of the male protagonist, you will understand! Even Japanese anime now don't have this kind of plot! She is simply a selfish and disgusting woman!

Memory Kill is too nonsense and not suitable for novels. Comics Memory Kill is okay, but online novels are not very suitable. After all, the preface cannot match the sequel. When you write it back, most of them don't want to read it. . . .

An onmyoji who has lived for 1,500 years cannot accurately position himself, and he actually fixes his eyes on the son of Inari God. He should be said to be almost useless, but he is still invincible. ?

I felt dizzy. The protagonist felt like a Japanese native, without the arrogant spirit of Chinese people. The whole book was full of fireworks and confusion, and I didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do or what the story was about.

The background setting and atmosphere rendering are very good, but the character creation and plot progression are very weird... Is this the author's original style?

I would like to suggest that the real world should be accelerated. Similarly, the force value must be displayed in advance and strengthened, otherwise it will be of no use. This is the only way out for the protagonist.

Only a hundred people invested. It's not without reason. The narrative is not clear enough. Since you got the power from the book, then you should return to the real world as soon as you get the power. Who would like to see you use a lot of words to describe the human world and sophistication in the book? In the real world, it is the kingly way to make trouble.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading the third chapter, combined with the first two chapters, I just felt that the protagonist was too childish!

After reading three chapters, I feel like the main character is insane.

The story is really well written and the design is clever and engaging.

I really don't understand. The protagonist killed Inari God's son, and then used a trick to make Inari God his mother. How could there be so much love between such a mother and her son? He is not a normal son. It would be okay if he didn't kill the protagonist again, but he still expected to be nice to him? Can you accept it if you put yourself in someone else's shoes?

It feels like the protagonist himself is very twisted inside, which makes people feel very awkward. Most of the time, the protagonist looks very smart, or at least acts like a normal person. But sometimes when he encounters some problems, he is forcibly reduced to intelligence, which is used to highlight the care and persuasion of the people around the protagonist. Coupled with the twisted love shown by the protagonist himself, it makes people feel that the protagonist is very much like a schizophrenic, who has mental problems anyway. After reading over a hundred chapters for now, this is my impression. In fact, I feel that Erzai's writing style should be more suitable for writing the Cthulhu series, because it is full of distortions, distorted emotions, and everything is distorted.

All ordered, please support. I read The Lord of Friends, and the previous chapters were incomplete. If he hadn't been a master and had readers and fans of the previous books, I don't think he would have read or written it. Moreover, it was in the fantasy genre. Even if he had written it, he wouldn't have achieved the amazing results of The Lord of Friends today. You still need a large number of readers to develop niche articles, and you are a niche among niches.

I felt very frustrated and confused while watching it. I didn't know whether the protagonist was in reality or fantasy. It was too self-pleasant, although the writing was good. And according to the real world, the male protagonist has appeared in front of the official and in front of the hotel, but the official did not find the protagonist... Okay, do what you like, don't watch it, hold in your anger

Uh⊙∀⊙! , I was very happy to read this book. I felt it had a certain depth and the writing was good. However, when I came to the Indian chapter, I really felt that the author's views were about to become "gods". As for whether he is a psychopath or a god, it is a matter of opinion. But I personally can't accept it. Maybe this is what ordinary mortals think. For example: asking others to accept it, turning one son into two, and sharing it with others. It is preaching and speaking confidently. My personal opinion is that since it is acceptable to change one into two, then it should be okay to change one into multiple. If the son is acceptable, then whether the husband's role is also acceptable. In the end, it evolved into, can you accept it, one husband of yours becomes tens of millions (still different role-playing). Even if you can accept it, can you do it during sex at night? So does this count as cheating or staying safe? Forget it, as a mortal, maybe my thinking is too narrow. So, I withdrew.

The logic at the beginning is confusing! Poisonous!