I'm Recreating the Myth in Tokyo

The author's first story is written in a standard children's literature style. The fairy tale style has already dissuaded many online readers, but the first section of the first act contains the most boring illogical and long-winded argument. In fact, fairy tales and debates are not the focus. The focus is on the meaningless and long-winded plot. There are three things in the opening. The male protagonist has poor Japanese, steals underwear, and turns into a cat to debate. These three nodes have repeated circles. Take underwear stealing as an example. The conversation process is "You stole it, but I didn't. You definitely stole it, I swear you didn't. You definitely stole it, I really didn't. You definitely stole it, but I really didn't.", Which is a long-winded and stupid dialogue process that makes people speechless. . . Maybe the follow-up plot will be very good, but it will be of no use to people who have walked away speechless. But to be honest, the author has no fault. This is how fairy tales are written. Long-winded debates with stupid logic are also one of the core hot spots of fairy tales. Children like to watch stupid black-and-white debates, long-winded circles and mixed words. The irony is almost standard in fairy tales, but here comes the problem. Children will read this online article at the starting point. Ordinary readers don't have that childlike innocence. Logical readers can't stand stupid fairy tales. Novices can't feel happy. Old bookworms can't stand the cowardice of the male protagonist. Who do you expect to be the audience? Are you a panty-stealing fan? I read a little more and added some complaints. In fact, this fairy tale style + theme turns out to be a pretty good set of things. Even if the reality is based on the light novel and the fairy tale is based on the fairy tale style, and the outline is preset according to the subject matter, and excessive long-winded and meaningless nonsense is removed, and the initial male protagonist is both saintly and cowardly, I feel that this book will really become popular. . . Or at least gain a relatively constant audience. Forget it, just a random comment. I am a logical reader myself, so I cannot accept the explosion of underlying logic in the fairy tale world. In fact, despite this, this book is still worth reading. . .

A full order will be added. The following personal feeling is that it is a very good book, but it is not suitable for online writing. In other words, this book cannot be quick and easy, so it is not suitable for online writing. Compared with traditional literature, the biggest advantage of online writing is fast pace. Kishimoto's new works were rejected because of the slow pace, but it is not possible to speed up the pace because the hardware and software do not allow it. The hardware is at the level of the author. The plot of the software is not allowed. I personally recommend not to have too much hope for this book, but I still recommend finishing it carefully, because every excellent author has a book that he thinks is even worthy of painstaking efforts. Regardless of whether it is good or bad, this is a must. If you are used to being a eunuch or having a bad ending, you will not produce good works in the future.

The old Brahmin released the tiger, which was not only the effect of the tiger's words, but also the influence of his firm Tao. When he is unable to determine whether the other party is good or evil, he is willing to believe that the other party is as good as he appears. Because believers who believe in the gods "devoutly" and abide by (?) The dharma should be saved and deserve to be saved. This is in line with the dharma and his way. Therefore, although the people he saved were not true believers, the merit he received would not be discounted in the slightest. Even if he encounters a similar situation again (for example, another tiger asks him for help), he will still make the same choice again. Because Tiger is right, those who are afraid of dying for the Tao cannot get the "message" from the gods. This "message" means the gods' affirmation of him and his way, which is an opportunity to reach the heaven. The tiger may not necessarily have a "message" from the gods, but it may carry tests and warnings from the gods. If you continue to pursue the Tao, you will die. If you stop here, you still have a chance to live the rest of your life safely. Faintly, the gods seemed to be saying this Just as the God of Death later tested him, with firm faith, he made the right choice in the face of real death. And he can be appreciated by the God of Death not only because of his merits, but also because of his virtues. When he gave his life to a stranger and comforted this "murderer", the virtues of humanity were vividly displayed, and divinity blossomed at the same time. It was this touch of divinity that moved Death. He can ignore merit, but he cannot but give respect to a person with divinity If when faced with the test of death, what he reveals is not divinity, but only some good aspects of human nature, or the evil of human nature, then even if he accumulates enough merit, he may be disgusted by the god of death, so he may be given not so good blessings, ignored or even cursed. What is divinity? While Jesus bore the sufferings of the world on the cross, he still prayed for the rebels. The Buddha's cutting of meat to feed eagles and sacrificing his life to feed tigers are also manifestations of divinity Having both divinity and merit enabled him to reach heaven even when he was about to enter the dark age. For him, who has become a god/Bodhisattva/Buddha, heaven is no different from the human world, and it no longer matters whether he enjoys or suffers. Therefore, he could give merit to Mengxi without hesitation and create half a golden body for him. And Mengxi, who inherited his Tao and merits, must also possess some virtues. Therefore, he would feel sick about the tiger killing those two people. Already aware of the vastness of the universe, I still pity the green grass and trees. This is Shen Mengxi, a person who is virtuous but not pedantic. Tiger said it was because they hurt people with merit that he could speak and punish them. On the other hand, if the protagonist loses his merits, will he not be protected? For example, Mengxi has lost her virtue, which means she has become bad, to put it bluntly. Then, maybe things will change.

When I read the title synopsis, I thought it was a light-hearted novel, but when I saw the beginning, a cousin who lost her underwear and became dependent on the protagonist, shouldn't you ask your mother first? A wretched person sees everyone as a wretched person. The protagonist's reaction is fascinating. At first she said she didn't steal it, but when she asked again she said "Young Muai, oh my god!" Isn't this a disguised admission?

I am an author and everyone is a book lover. The author writes the book and the reader reads the book. Life is very stressful, coupled with various things, everyone is facing financial problems of varying sizes. Reading is entertainment, looking for a little happiness in the boring and fast-paced city. Most of the readers who really scolded me were idle and confused, or they were relatively young children. They have no pressure, have enough to eat and drink, have nothing to do, and just like to have some fun. And always with a very strange logic. I can scold you, but you can't scold me. I can scold your book, but you can't ban or delete it. I don't have to read your book, but if I feel unhappy, I will definitely scold you. Adult logic doesn't work like this. At least I took a look at everyone's book review section, and we were relatively quiet because everyone was indeed reading. There are a very small number of external readers who complain and curse, but we simply delete the posts and ban them. Because I don't want to quarrel, and there is no need to quarrel. There are many unsatisfactory things in life, so it's better to live the life you want. There will always be trolls. It's best to remove the ban. Everyone is not a saint. This is a place to read, not a smelly dining room. I hope everyone can read quietly. Being happy is the most important thing. Everyone's support is my motivation! ——This post is reproduced from "The Ordinary Senior Brother" by the great author Hei Ye Mitian.

People nowadays are very angry. So when I saw the protagonist of The Virgin - the uncle setting, just looking at the front, I just felt unhappy. No pleasure at all. Originally there was, but it was also because this uncle was gone. I really couldn't stay at the beginning. Beginning. According to my own understanding, it sucks. You can't keep people, isn't that so? Really have the patience to watch it. I feel like it shouldn't be much. Anyway, no matter what you say, I just feel that this uncle is very annoying. It's not the annoying kind of sadistic novel. Because there is a tendency to abuse the candy first and then sweeten it, and if you abuse it only enough, it will make people want to eat sweeter candy. Read on. Makes people taste sweet. But uncle. And the protagonist. One word. Frustrated. The protagonist is not very holy, just kind, but this kindness must be used in the right place. I haven't looked at the back yet. I wonder what will happen to this uncle. Anyway, just looking at the front is not pleasant. I want the author to change it a little bit, um, make the protagonist a little cleaner. This is just my private opinion. You don't have to like it. But can't spray. I didn't scold or complain. So you can't delete it either. I'm just expressing my own advice. Well, voice typing is great.

We have had enough of some disgusting idiot relatives in real life, so let's not have such plots in the book. Wouldn't it be nice to travel through different worlds?

The uncle doesn't care about blood ties at all and turns the protagonist into a cat for exploitation. The protagonist does not want to kill anyone for revenge. He is just fighting for a book. It is the only hope for the protagonist to return to human form. This is too novice and too holy to be scrupulous.

Collection of fairy tales from all over the world. Pair it with corresponding abilities or treasures.

I don't know how to evaluate this book, maybe I am not qualified to evaluate this book. The story in this book is not as exciting as other novels, but it still has a taste. The story of a Brahmin rescuing a kitten, picking up ears of wheat, and making money from mice, especially sacrificing himself to save others, is a bit tearful. However, there are still some shortcomings. It's a bit frustrating that his uncle doesn't resist him like this, but only cats with this kind of heart can survive in fairy tales.

Gan, "I Become a God in Tokyo" was also written by you. I said why it looks so familiar. The story is very attractive, but the protagonist is too smart to be tolerated, and is so kind that it makes people feel stupid. His survival depends on luck, and he is also controlled by others. To put it more exaggeratedly, without tigers, I can deceive him into losing everything, and he will forgive me even if he fails. Please, let the protagonist mature!

((유∀유|||)) To be honest, I felt uncomfortable reading the first 20 chapters. Tell me, is this a sadistic story? It would be outrageous to let uncle go.

It's really interesting. I write fairy tales on a novel website full of violent killings. In so many years, I have only seen four or five books and ordered them.

I feel that these are all sophistry and meaningless, because real heroes have their own laws when they act, and they will only act according to their own laws. People who act according to other people's systems are either followers of the system or puppets of the system.

I just want to ask if this uncle is dead and in which chapter? I want to start from there

Did I read the introduction wrong? ? ? ? After reading twenty chapters, I realized that this is called spiritual energy recovery? ? Is this called the Night Walk of One Hundred Ghosts? ? Is this the mastermind behind this? ? ? It feels like the introduction was written wrong. . . . And what is going on with the protagonist's uncle? The more I watch, the more fascinated I become. The protagonist doesn't look like the boss behind the scenes at all. It's a bit like the sense of déjà vu in "My Adventure in a Fairy Tale World". If it were really an adventure, it would be really good because the writing is fine, but is this the rhythm of recreating a myth? Did the author go off topic or did he write the wrong introduction?

The setting of the article is very good, but the character of the protagonist is too virginal to watch.

The author must be a woman, or she might just want to be transsexual. The writing style feels too childish.

Have you ever seen a dragon that keeps dying like dumplings? "The Story of the Iron Tree" tells the story of Xu Xun's killing of dragons Thousands of dragons were killed for him There are two opportunities to earn merit. The first is to point out the location of the dragon, who can be named the god of the earth. The second is to point out the hundreds of rivers where the dragon has not finished rolling. The latter is a great merit. If successful, the sinful dragon can use it to atone for his sins. I'm really looking forward to seeing the protagonist roll 100 rivers Guanyin also appears here, but the position is more subtle, neutral but slightly closer to the dragon.

It's a good book, more like a fairy tale. Although the protagonist is indecisive and useless, the book is very good and fits the direction of the book. If it weren't for the character of the protagonist, why would the old Brahmin accept the protagonist as his disciple and prepare everything like his son? Even the guardian tiger is ready, just afraid that the protagonist will be bullied

One of the effects of reading Xiaomei Luo's books. Yesterday, when I heard Buddha talking about this song again, at least I would not be affected by the emotion of the song and could rationally refute the other person's lyrics (in my heart) and feel a sense of pity. The protagonist with such desire and resentment is really pitiful (it's okay to laugh at us as much as you like)

Kill the two cousins, it's so disgusting

Let me go, what decent myths does Japan have? Are you going to rape someone? Bring the Chinese gods with you?

Maybe it's because I've played King of Kings too much and every time I see the name of the protagonist, I feel like I'm out of touch.

The uncle character at the beginning was indeed unlikable, and the protagonist's character also had problems, which discouraged readers. However, the various fairy tales that followed did have the flavor of fairy tales, with fractured thinking logic and a black-and-white world view. This is a flavor rarely seen in Qidian. Com. It is not a violent fight and killing. However, after the director's real-life aura revived, I feel that the author's writing style has changed a bit, and it has more of an online flavor.

I don't know how to put it, but I think it looks good. 😁

I thought Shen Mengxi was named after a heroine. Hey, I saw something a little wrong with this conversation and went back and forth a few times. Then I pulled it out and saw that he was the leading actor on his resume?

" Cursing in the book review section and chapter reviews really affects the author's mood and the reader's reading experience. I promise that the book reviews posted here will never be deleted.

Xiaomei Luo's style is a bit niche, so if you don't consider Xiaobaidian in your next film, it would be best if you can find a balance between them. Xiaomeiluo caters to the market and may not be able to tell your story completely, and more people may watch it...

Your books are very interesting. Do you have any new books?