White Tower Wizard

No one posted? Then it's not too much for me to grab a sofa first, right?

Invested... But the setting is really confusing. One moment, I was observing nature, studying physics, writing academic papers and publishing them to become a mage, and the next moment, I was surprised to see various spells and magical creatures from Harry Potter. And until now, there is no clear description of the power system, levels and rules... It has been pieced together with hammers and sticks here and there, but it is difficult for readers to come up with a reasonable framework on their own. The Harry Potter elements, how should I put it, mainly because Harry Potter is so famous, people use emotions and age to increase magic power and spell casting power. The setting is based on the fact that only when you have deep hatred and evil in your heart can you release the death curse, and only when you have firm faith and think about happy things can you use the patron saint and so on. Everyone is subconsciously convinced by this rule. You have interspersed things closely related to Harry Potter into your world, which is similar to the academic research route of the Squid book. It is like the barbs on your smooth mat at home. It was pricked just as you were about to fall asleep... (I have read more than forty books so far. There are already several chapters. I don't know if other books use it this way. This is the first one that appeared in the western fantasy books I read... Maybe I am a little sensitive to hp because I am too familiar with it? "Aratho... Xxx... Hom... Open!" This is the lock-opening spell with Braille added in the middle. (You were mumbling something about otherworldly writing, but it ended up "open!" Why are these two words so inconsistent...) "Iron Armor" is also called the Iron Armor Curse, and the original sentence of the Iron Armor Curse is armor protection "The Soul-killing Curse" feels really similar to the combination of Avada's Kedavra and Soul-Robbing Curse There is also only one There is a Thestral that can only be seen by people who have seen death... I checked this and it seems to be the original work of Aunt Rowling In short, maybe I am too sensitive, but the author's writing is really good and the writing style is very good, just a small personal opinion... Keep up the good work, the author, the book is very interesting!

Shuishuisui, can you write the protagonist with peace of mind? The plot keeps changing perspectives but makes no progress at all. To be honest, author, you can't handle a single line well... The dry plot also changes the perspective from time to time to affect the sense of immersion. It doesn't matter if you write fast. It's useless for you to outline the whole picture so slowly! I don't know where you learned this writing technique, but with my reading experience, I have never seen many online articles written like yours...

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The author has great ideas, but I don't want to know about it. Let's go and get rid of the trolls.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I still can't see anything special. The protagonist is swimming all the time, and there is no description of the power system or any conspiracy. The key is that it is not exciting and interesting. . . . . .

The pig's feet written in the previous pictures are just like the two idiots. They live in ignorance and rely on characters and events to promote the plot. However, the performance does not match the situation at that time. Instead, they find reasons and excuses to let the situation develop forcefully without any tact. They just give a reason and then follow it up later. When the word "water" is used, they are really filling in the water without making any point.

A time traveler, I want to give back my sister, even though I have health problems, I still send her money, haha

It's good if you can eat enough -_-||, but you also need to eat well. Shouldn't compassion be based on one's ability?

Finally mentioned the mage level, it turns out that it depends on publishing papers...😃

Come on! The pace is going to speed up! It's suitable for raising and raising, and the setting is quite interesting. 😁

Come on, invest in and support each other, brothers!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I still can't figure out what the main character does. He's a jerk. Every chapter is written with nonsense.

I just want to complain, the scene changes too quickly. Can you add a dividing line?

Magic and wizards really have nothing to do with each other. Magicians use magic. Wizards study magic. So your book is not called The Wizard. And called a mage.