The God of Death Stirs up the Storm

To be honest, although I haven't read Chapter 20 yet, the fantasy flavor of the past 20 years is really strong. It feels like a new story written by a person who has been reading old fantasy novels. He writes traditional fantasy with a layer of Death fan fiction. If you are writing fan fiction, I suggest you read more fan fiction before writing.

The setting of the double Zanpakuto is a bit too luxurious. At first, the bragging about the protagonist's talent was exaggerated. The writing style of Bleach is low-key and luxurious, and the elegance reveals the reserve and self-satisfaction of a scholar. Therefore, the amazing and talented characters in the original work: Aizen, Ichimaru, Baymax, and Xiaobai, although their talents and abilities are explosive, they never overly boast about their own power, and they don't talk much. Only characters like Yami and Ruby, who are strong on the outside but capable on the inside, will get carried away and then be dealt with neatly. Old man Yamamoto talks too much. In Captain Amagai's chapter, Yamamoto faced the revenge of his former disciple's son and remained silent. He only said a word when the truth was revealed. Later, in the decisive battle of Karakura Town and the death of Chojuro, the commander-in-chief broke out in silence, and he was ruthless and didn't say much. Many of the contradictions in the book are far-fetched. The reasons given by Room 46 of the Central Committee for opposing the appointment and removal of the captain of the 11th Squadron are too far-fetched. If he is just an adopted son and says that he will create a Yamamoto family, then what should we do if Old Man Yama, who serves as the dean and founder of the Shino Spiritual Arts Academy, and more than 99% of the members of the entire Gotei 13th Division are his students? Yamamoto has lived in the Soul Society for more than two thousand years, and he has already taken power long ago, so there is no need to wait so long.

Removing the old captain? Over the past thousand years, the commander-in-chief has always been an old man. The old man's position was built with blood. The old man you made is very wet. Will the old man be afraid of Room 46? Being the strongest in a thousand years is no joke. I feel like I have lost my ambition by ordering the old man.

As a Death God fan, I thought I was in a fantasy area. My talent was too NB and I couldn't expose it to danger. I put a rubbish ability on the table for others to see. I was so old fantasy. I still wore the skin of a genius and actually used the routine of the bad trash. For example: Tang San: I am born with full soul power, two martial souls, a Blue Silver Grass, and a Clear Sky Hammer. No, no, I hammer. It's too NB and cannot be exposed, so from today onwards I am the protagonist of the innately powerful Martial Spirit Blue Silver Grass Protagonist of this book: I have level 6 spiritual power, two Zanpakutōs, one of which is rubbish in melee combat, one of which is worse than Yamamoto's, no, no, no, this one is too NB to be exposed, so from today on I am the protagonist of the 6th level of spiritual power of rubbish melee Zanpakutō. Tsk, tsk, brothers, have a good taste, sneak away first as a token of respect. (Oh, one more thing, I don't know why I always like to write about the protagonist wearing a small vest. The protagonist has to pretend to be cool, and the vest takes over the cool part. The protagonist always behaves like a loser in front of outsiders? How can readers read it happily)

Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is always the stupidest choice

There are so few people who write about the God of Death, and it is definitely unpopular. I hope the author will have the awareness to stop being a eunuch and waste the hearts of friends who like the God of Death. As a person who likes the God of Death, I can vote as much as I can!

Room 46 revoked Yamamoto's position as captain because of his disciple's mistakes.... The author is better than the animation team👍🏻

A book that cannot be written as a series without the plot of the original work cannot be copied well. The starting point is really useless, and there is a lot of waste in copying books.

Yamamoto was dismissed, I feel like Hashirama was dismissed by the daimyo in Naruto, and the marshal was dismissed by the world government in One Piece

Can anyone recommend some Bleach fan fiction?

It's a good book, but it's a pity that most of the people have been dismissed within a dozen chapters~ It's 2022, and I'm still pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, and even if I pretend to be a pig, I've turned into a pig...

I always feel that the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded and has been targeted by villains. You are a fucking genius. In 6 years, you can make him submissive by sparring with him, okay? Don't say anything to attract attention, just be a disciple of Yamamoto, okay? It's okay to show off a little bit of your skills, right? Second, when you graduate, you can control your spiritual power, so can't you just let it go? The kind of little genius? Wouldn't it be more striking to see a complete lack of growth? This kind of secretive behavior makes people think that there is something wrong with you even more! Anyone with some intelligence can think of it. Thirdly, when we were selecting the team, it was me and not him. What the hell, have you ever been to work? Just let him go to the first team, your home base, instead of just punishing him, sending him abroad, etc., And playing him to death, okay? .

The kind of novels with strong backgrounds in which one travels through anime and becomes the son or adopted son of someone in the upper class are basically just some idle images with no character. Only when someone dies or is killed can the plot develop. Then the portrayal of the protagonist is also a piece of shit. The protagonist does not think about using the powerful background behind him, but thinks about himself. Or they take advantage of this kind of background but have no class awareness and just do the opposite. Basically, it's very difficult to write later. It's easy to ignore the plot and force literary youth. I've read a lot of them, and I can't escape them. It's hard to find an author who breaks through the rules.

How can I put it, after reading twenty or thirty chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The author wrote a lot of conspiracies and conspiracies in this passionate episode of Death, which is not to my liking 🥱.

They are all complaining, but my perspective is different. The writing is too bad, and there are too many useless descriptions and metaphors. It neither advances the plot nor creates characters nor enhances the atmosphere. What's the point of that kind of description? I have no writing skills at all. This is

Not many people write about Death. I also like to read Death, but your book is not to my taste. The captain's adopted son is being targeted? Even if other captains don't dare, it doesn't mean that they don't dare to say it. If there is no profit, I won't do such a thing. Moreover, he was still targeted by a trap, and he died without knowing how.

At the beginning (￣ー￣), how do you say it (￣ー￣), In fact, Captain Yamamoto didn't take Room 46 seriously at all, On the outside, he acted like he didn't care at all inside, (￣ー￣) He also studied pig feet. Why two swords,... The title of the strongest Shinigami in Soul Society is given. The so-called Room 46 is just an institution selected by the nobles to manage civilians... How many swords can there be? In a sense, Yamamoto is the largest noble in Soul Society,... After Yoruichi's defection, is there a serious pursuit in Soul Society? ? ? Don't people just come back if they want to come back and play? Nobles and commoners are treated as double standards Pig's Knuckle is Yamamoto's disciple_(:_∠)_He is also drunk One more thing, the Gotei 13 was originally composed of Founded by Yamamoto, later learned the truth about the Soul King (that is, the large battery), so he took over part of the work of Team Zero and became the guardian of Soul Society, (￣ー￣)

I skipped through a few of them, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author just wrote a lot of power struggles in Bleach, but the writing was not that good. And has the author really read all the Bleach comics? I feel that the author has completely failed to understand the status of old man Yamamoto in the Seireitei. The strongest Shinigami in a thousand years is not just a boast, and the captain of the old man Yamamoto is not the same as the captains of the other 12 divisions. No one can remove him from his post. Even the captains of other divisions do not seem to have been removed, except for the Masked Legion who are considered rebels. Moreover, the old man Yamamoto himself is the most determined defender of the order of the Seireitei. It is basically impossible for him to take the initiative to change the situation of the Seireitei.

I don't feel good enough. I couldn't save Yamamoto. If it weren't for the fact that he was a free prostitute, I would still have to come back and scold him twice. Forget it, I'm done.

There is obviously a powerful Zanpakutō, but in the end, I have to choose a rubbish Zanpakutō that can only be used in close combat. With Yamamoto as a backer, there are a few people who dare to touch the protagonist. How high the talent is, it is not that high. The talent is not as high as the top, but the talent is more than the bottom, making it look like the ancient genius of Xuezang.

What are you writing about? Room 46 monitors the five nobles. You are rebelling against Tiangang.

The most taboo thing about writing fan fiction is that the main characters are related to each other, either replacing the original protagonists, supporting characters, brothers, relatives, etc... Then it involves a lot of bloody plots... The dream plot makes my brain hurt. Isn't it great for ordinary people + there are so many system plug-in extensions! As a non-traveler, it is a waste of emotions not to form bonds. Survival + insidiousness and cunning + three-light policy are the standard configuration for time travellers. Even if you want to recruit girls, you must find someone with strength. If you don't have the strength to protect yourself, you will be holding yourself back. It should be included in the single representative works of Death, such as "Unohana Retsu" and "Shudara Senjumaru".

Everything is good, but the main character's name is too Chinese, which makes it a little bit awkward every time

Is Yoruichi the heroine? I quite like her, but I haven't watched much of her. Please explain.

From the front, I feel like the protagonist has a very high IQ, but why does Yamamoto lose his brain when he is cut in half by Yuha at the end? Obviously the protagonist used the swastika to fix Yamamoto's state and prevent him from dying. It would be really funny if he didn't send someone to find Inoue now and let Yamamoto die. If you want to say that Yamamoto died on the spot and Inoue Orihime was powerless, forget it. Why can't he save Tohru if he's not dead?

Hurry up and finish it, it's really stinky and long.

Although you are smelly and long, congratulations on the end! The overall plot is well written. As a Bleach fan who often rereads the manga, the more I read it, the more I feel that the 13th Division and Rukia Reiji, Kurosaki Ichigo's Shinigami friends, and the Shinigami are not good things. Especially Aizen's words at the end, the more I read them, the more I feel Aizen's helplessness.

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