Konoha's Strongest Brother Controller

First of all, this is a very good story-flow novel, and it can even be said to have a certain degree of literature. It is not brainless or random Especially the protagonist's attitude towards life and death. I have read too many Naruto stories and ended up using reincarnation or reincarnation randomly, and then had a happy ending The branch line of the story is quite different from the original work (that I know) The ending is still very rushed, I still want to read the paragraph Obito's drama The early stage writing was still not ruthless and dark enough, so it didn't have such an obvious feeling after whitewashing. It may also be that I have read too many articles about bombarding Konoha and killing groups of people. Maybe the author wrote it this way. Some characters' personalities are still different from my impression Also, in the end, Liu Yunhu Ben and the team leader were not given identities. It was too real. 😭

The third generation is not cowardly, he is just a politician, haha, without his acquiescence, who can let White Fang die, he is the Hokage.

I was confused when I read the second chapter. Was the Uchiha clan behind White Fang's death? This all involves the Uchiha clan. How much are the Uchiha clan hated?

I saw something written about Kakashi and came in. It's okay for you to write according to your own ideas, but you can't write blindly. When did Hatake's sword skills have the application of spiritual power?

Kakashi Brother's Start, the elder Kakashi is 3 years old, reason flows without golden fingers, a book with laughter and tears Only when it contains something shocking can it become literature, and the most shocking thing is the narrative of life and death. I feel like I've read one of Hatake Itachi's novels, and Liangbo is the heaviest one! The setting and time control books are very similar, but the style of painting is completely different. The dialogue is too rational from beginning to end (almost no modal particles), which makes people feel tired. Once you read it, you will find that the story line is quite good I keep saying that the setting is not important, but I wrote 3 chapters about the setting, and I am speechless. These two b-babies are more Uchiha than Uchiha. 😂 It is an obviously cold-blooded and rational novel, but due to the writing style and storyline, it is unexpectedly readable. Whether it is a three-person team or the character, it is very consistent with the original novel, but the magic modification is a bit powerful. Why does it feel like the author is gradually letting himself go? Has anyone counted how many chapters are titled Untitled? Accepted. Wow, the little girl looks better dead! (Forgive me for the spoilers, I can't help but complain) The main reason is that this little girl takes up a lot of space in the early stage, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch. Open your mouth and shut up, not wanting to change the plot, it's poisonous, even if you say inertia or correction, the protagonist's idea is vicious What the hell is Ye Cang? The author's emotional lines are a bit poisonous.

As soon as I saw the introduction, I felt sad. As a master of swordsmanship, Hatake Sakumo would name his son Zanren?

The protagonist is not very close to Kakashi, and he is not controlling at all. It doesn't match the title of the novel at all. Could it be that this is about Itachi and Sasuke? Does this have anything to do with the protagonist Kakashi?

Do you blame Uchiha for everything? White Fang's death was the reason why the Third Generation and Danzo blamed Uchiha for everything? ? ?

I feel like the author doesn't understand Naruto.

The timeline of age groups is very confusing. The older generation Ino Shikacho is taking the Chunin Exam with Gai, Kakashi, Asuma and the others? Minato is already leading Kakashi. Shikaku, the older generation, is the Jonin squad leader, okay? Kakashi, Kai, Asuma, Yuhi Kurenai, and Shiranui Genma. They are of the same generation. They are about the same age. Why is Kakashi only seven or eight years old?

Chapter 6 Fragment "Make it tame like a girl" Girl? If readers don't like it, please change it 🙂

Is Sandai really a man to introduce Hatake Swordsmanship on the spot? This is not a disease!

Naruto should be renamed Black Zetsu's Story of Saving His Mother🤓

Eight colors of Konoha? What the hell? Scribbling

The setting is very messy, and it doesn't have much in common with the original work.

My younger brother is disgusting when I read it. I hate my younger brother the most after reading the novel, followed by my younger sister.

The author writes the book as if he had read other fans. Have you never read the original work? The setting and timeline are messy.

Tsk tsk tsk, the setting of the Eight Colors of Konoha from many years ago has been revealed. That was the setting of the fan fiction not long after Naruto released Shippuden.

It's getting more and more nonsense, and things that are simply unrealistic are being pushed on

It was just a blow to White Fang's reputation. Who knew White Fang would commit suicide?

It's well written. There is also a book called Konoha no Ashina that is also very well written. I recommend everyone to read it.

To be honest, if you write about a conspiracy, then use the conspiracy to do it. Instead of fighting through it.

With Madara's pride, it is impossible for him to disdain to cooperate with Danzo

You can't even write a resume, but you're still writing a stupid book. You don't even need to read the content of your book to know how good it is.

The setting of Naruto has been changed many times. It was initially a trial version, so the characters tended to be dark. Later, it became popular among younger people, and the settings were quickly changed and patched, so there were many bugs.

If it weren't for the female protagonist, this would be the most beautiful fanfic in Kakashi's lineage.

The third generation is a good old man, and White Teeth gives him nothing to do, just to highlight the settings added by Kakashi later. The cartoonist didn't think that much at all, why is it that every book is made as if the third generation is necrotic 😰