I Can Become Stronger by Picking Things Up

Let me put it this way: if the protagonist possesses extraordinary abilities in reality, I guarantee this novel's recommendations won't exceed 50,000. Because it's not like the early 2000s anymore. It's not about urban fantasy or super soldiers anymore. Readers now have much more discerning tastes.

Sigh... That previous book was so good! I was really looking forward to seeing the expressions on people's faces when they found out the protagonist was telling the truth.

After reading twenty chapters, the protagonist seems like a minor who hasn't experienced society, and also someone with a brain defect whose intelligence occasionally lapses—completely unlike someone who grew up in an orphanage and is independent and sensible! Perhaps he was abandoned by his parents because of his brain defect? ​​The book's premise is very creative and good, but the details and the protagonist's behavior are too cruel.

Speechless. The protagonist is a psychopath. Take the beginning for example. In the local temple, on one hand, he says to respect the corpses and not take their clothes, but on the other hand, he saws open their bodies to take their treasures. Is he having a split personality?

The protagonist is really something else; he wiped out two entire gangs and didn't take a single penny! He didn't want a single piece of equipment! Murderers and arsonists wear golden belts! But you're nothing but a piece of trash to me! You get angry over a few missing pieces of meat at a meal! Get angry my ass... Damn, what kind of crazy job would someone take in school just for a little money? He's got a brain kicked by a donkey.

Forcing a change in art style is bad, isn't it? It's too jarring. From the moment they stormed the White Ape Gate, the protagonist was forcibly made less intelligent, turning into a goofy, idiotic character. You'd be better off with the protagonist set up like this from the beginning; this is just nauseating.

I'm so fed up with this latest chapter! What the hell are Li Qin and Xiao Qiang? Who are they? This is completely different from the previous content. What the hell am I supposed to read?

Anti-piracy chapters are disgusting. I've been keeping them locked for a week and they're still full of anti-piracy measures.

At first, I was quite interested. Although the protagonist was a bit brainless, he was fun, which I thought was alright. But after reading chapter 10, I suddenly felt overwhelmed by a bunch of things I had to complain about. And then, the author even set up a fan value system? To be honest, that was a bit disgusting.

If you're going to write, focus on the main character. Don't introduce other characters; it makes the story boring. That's all I wanted to say. If you keep padding this out, your writing will really lose popularity.