You Practice Martial Arts and I Cultivate Immortality

Sand sculpture. Cultivation system provides martial arts talents. . .

Author, since we are cultivating immortals, we shouldn't give the protagonist martial arts stuff, and then it would be better to change the name of the martial arts realm. This is my opinion 🙂😁😁

This immortal has perfected his Qi training, but he can only fight hand-to-hand like a warrior, and he has no Taoist skills like flying swords.

You are all cultivating immortals, but if you don't follow the Sword Immortal style? Gu raising style? Golden elixir style? Divine soul style... The result is still the same as a warrior in close combat?

Although it looks like a cool article, it's best not to actually make a cool article. Sometimes if it's too cool, it will be too boring. As the old saying goes, it's best to seek a stable word.

The character design is not good, and the rhythm does not make up for it.

Come on. Just write whatever you feel comfortable with. Write whatever makes you feel good. There will always be people who read it.