Patriarch of Stealing Dharma

The story is really good. Although some plots are not handled maturely enough, it does not affect the reading at all. It can show a very good world view. This year, perhaps due to the epidemic, many new authors have come in, including many good books with insightful insights and even fantastic stories. It's a pity that many books disappear after writing for a while. Such a story is really a pity. If it is finished, maybe n years later, there will be a group of niche fans who will miss it. Many years ago, a little over ten years ago, when I first started reading online books, I came across two Tiankeng books, one was Li Sefo's Three Religions and Nine Streams, and one was Ma Zhiyuan's The Spring and Autumn Annals of the Chu Family. It's hard to understand why this novel, which is published in physical books, was not written down. Doesn't the author value his own work?

One of the main characters has a little female fox. This is a poisonous point.

The protagonist feels almost like Long Aotian, so arrogant. Black and White Wuchang kills whenever he wants. Is there any difference between him and the Second Generation of Immortals? Is this any different from the modern police arresting criminals and beating you to death?

Two thoughts. First, if you don't have a detailed outline of the power system, it will definitely collapse halfway. Second, can I get to one million words? If you overcome these two points, you will become popular.

I was convinced. I originally thought that the protagonist was a wise, courageous and chivalrous person, but I didn't expect that the protagonist was simply a hot-blooded, lucky and ruthless person. Investigating Wutian Xianzun, clues came to the door at the beginning of the investigation. The protagonist had no doubts. In the end, he discovered the conspiracy by chance. This is okay, even if I look at the problem from the perspective of God. But the most unbearable thing is that the protagonist knew the name of the master through his eyes before, but the protagonist suddenly didn't know it. If you say that the protagonist deliberately pretended not to know for fear of exposing the secret of his left eye, forget it. I also explained to the author in this chapter that the protagonist was pretending to be stupid. I didn't expect that the protagonist was really stupid. If the protagonist forgets, I can only say that the protagonist is careless and has memory problems. If the author forgets, I can only say that the author is really not serious about writing the book.

Many new books especially like to show off and slap people in the face. Such scenes are really disgusting and can drastically reduce your intelligence. I hope the author will pay special attention to it early. Finally, serious and unreasonable situations such as leapfrogging battles are prohibited. These are the key points and are circled to be tested.

After seeing 15 pictures, I didn't want to read anymore. Old Taoist priest, why didn't you show up earlier and kill the tiger demon quickly? The girls would have to suffer once and then show up pretending to be cool. It's simply unnecessary. I hate this kind of character very much, just like Hong Qigong in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, I hate this kind of person very much. If you want to save, just snap together, all kinds of accidents may happen. Such people often make mistakes. I haven't read the main character yet, but if it's the Virgin, this book will be trash. What a shame about the subject matter. Creativity is wasted. There is no requirement for the protagonist to be very dark. At the very least, he should be a normal person, a rational and normal person to judge a thing. Instead of just pretending to be a good person. In the world of monsters and monsters, all such people are dead.

The protagonist has been forcibly reduced in intelligence for a long time. Every time, he tries to pretend to be smart. After pretending to be smart, he is forcibly reduced in intelligence in order to force the next step of the plot. Alas, I simply don't know what to think.

I feel that one bad thing about this novel is that it does not reflect the identity of the earth traveler at all. Firstly, because no one knows nowadays that politicians have dark hearts, and people with good reputations have even darker hearts, but the protagonist actually surrenders himself. There is also the point of sophistication. When reading the novel, you should basically think that you have met an expert when you see it, but the protagonist has not thought in any direction. I feel that it would be better to change the protagonist to a native or something like that.

I had already collected it, but the more I read it, the more I became speechless. The protagonist has traveled through time and knows what it means to seek death, and he keeps on doing it. He is not that big at first, but his ability to meddle in other people's affairs is getting better and better.

Shock! ! ! The city god was replaced by demons, and the prefect turned out to be a demon. The protagonist of Silly Baitian was seriously injured and went to the government office to surrender in order to find his master. Is this a poisonous point or a serious poison? I really can't bear it. Many novels nowadays are about God becoming a god. Now that I think about it, it is like this. It is only because of such a group of reckless protagonists and plots that poison people to death. Thank you to the author for letting me understand what a good hand is. [Manual smile]🙃️

The writing is really bad. When I was investigating Wutian Immortal Lord, the three I met by accident were okay. After being seriously injured, I didn't want to find Lingxiao immediately (I was also curious, didn't Lingxiao know fortune-telling? Just count it once and then it's gone? It didn't say once an hour but once every half a day? It was said before that it might be prohibited.) I didn't know what to think and went directly to the local magistrate. Not to mention the connection between the two from the incense, it was written in the article that there was a discussion about Wutian's identity. Why would a terrestrial god (who has the means to conceal the secrets of heaven, and later learned that there is someone above him) think that there is no one in the local forces, and even the God Emperor has been replaced by Wutian, so a mortal force can't do anything about it? (Really not even as good as a normal person) Or do you think that the other party dare not kill the protagonist (if you die, you will die, I don't know how to say it, are you not afraid of death?) There is also the issue of force. Are heavenly and earthly immortals worse than dogs? You can't even explore a city, you can't do it in a city, you can't do it in an area (a river area is always smaller than a city) The protagonist doesn't even have the first realm, dares to negotiate terms with the Earthly Immortal Yuanshen, is he really not afraid of death? Writing that the protagonist has some IQ is to highlight the enemy's lack of IQ? I have no enmity with you. Why did you rub my IQ on the ground?

Since the protagonist has decided on the golden finger of being able to steal spells, the entire plot should be written around this. As soon as he left the novice village, he was taken under the tutelage of a big boss and given magic weapons and exercises. It was a bit powerless to complain. Since you have this ability to learn secretly, shouldn't you rely on yourself to make a comeback by learning some awesome skills from never being favored by others? Nowadays, everything is covered by the master, and you can do whatever you want, which is a bit boring.

A good book at the beginning, but it was ruined by the author.

I feel like the protagonist is not just a virgin, but she may also have some brain problems. The Nine Turns Resurrection Pill is only used to save an unrelated fox demon. Poison, you are really poisonous.

I'm speechless. I have to fight to build the foundation before building the foundation. I have to fight to build the pill. I don't know how many times I have died without a master.

Due to limited capacity, we can only guarantee full bookings. The book is a good book, but your update speed is not good enough. I kept it for a month and solved it in 40 minutes. .

No wonder you are so angry. What are you writing about?

Really, it was fine up front, but Jinzhou is really poisonous. The emperor needs the blood of children. Just kidding.

If you wear Taoist robes, you should call yourself Xiaodao or Pindao. What kind of thing is a boy? A monk who is neither a monk nor a vulgar person! After all, he is an author, so why do readers need to remind readers of these details?