I'm Really the Chief of Africa

Compare this book, some books are really poorly written

South Africa, KwaZulu, Natal, Commercial Street, a Chinese store manager shot and killed two robbers. A total of 7 people robbed, a shootout broke out, and the store manager called the police (local Chinese police center). True, awesome!

Seeing Danke complaining about his poor grades, the fellow author would like to say a few words. I think he has fallen into a misunderstanding. Repeating himself does not mean that he will get poor grades. Why is he afraid of continuing to write the fish farm series? Do you feel uninspired or do readers just not buy it? If you don't have inspiration, that's it. If you worry about readers not being sold, you really think too much. Readers only care about whether it is good or not, regardless of whether it is repeated or not. For example, Lin Hai has written about football for so many years, such as Dou Po and Wu Dong are similar 😏

I've just finished the book, so I'm here👀 The new Classical Fairy Tale 👏👀Where do the monsters go👏

This crappy book is probably the worst one by the author.

I just saw the news about Sovereignty today, and also saw the videos of the German and French revolutions. I wanted to read a novel to calm my mood, but this book was recommended to me every day. It's not that the book is not good, it's that the mood is too complicated...

In fact, I had the urge to write a short review two days ago, but due to working days, I didn't have time to implement it. It happens to be Friday today, so I'll just say a few words. Danke's book, my most impressive reading record is the last one, "Golden Fishing Ground", and then I officially and completely entered the book in the last one, "Nordic". I'm a lazy person. I only pay for good books. If I don't have enough, I'll just use the browser. This may not please any author, so I have never joined any author's fan group, discussion group or support group. In short, I am a casual person in Wollongong, and I have never even thought about accompanying the last one. From the current point of view, there are three things worthy of recognition in Danke's book writing. The first is that he has worked hard and done homework on the place to be written. He is not taking it for granted and copying the conditions of one country or one region to another place. Not only that, he can also introduce some small knowledge and common sense. I have looked up the explanations of the names of animals, plants and microorganisms about seven or eight times in the past few days while reading this book. You may forget it soon, but you will be able to remember it quickly the next time you see it. Reading online novels can also stimulate interest in natural science, which is the advantage of this book. Second, Dankei's writing style has always been quite humorous. The relationship between the characters does not follow the template of "good guys deal with" or "bad guys deal with", but a nonsensical farce: good guys will also cheat each other, and the bad guys may also have shining points. When dealing with the bad guys, the protagonist can choose the Rambo route or be the Avanti. This is much better than simply mindlessly rushing along or pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Third, what I appreciate most is the attention to detail and humanistic care. Every character, whether he is a protagonist or a supporting character, positive or negative, three-dimensional or flat, has a very distinct personality. This distinctiveness not only comes from their words and actions, but also from their expressions, micro-expressions, psychological descriptions, small movements, etc. At present, I have not seen any of the main characters or important secondary characters being standard characters, which is much better than many writers. Let's talk about humanistic care. This humanistic care must first of all come from the protagonist's "non-killing", but it is by no means only the protagonist's or the author's "non-killing doctrine". On the contrary, the details of this humanistic care are often hidden in the description of the scenery every time the sun rises and the moon sets, the clouds come and the rain disperses, and every time the protagonist faces nature, animals and plants, or is with other characters. In many places, we can see the author's thoughts and reflections on life, humanity, the world and even the universe through the mouth of the protagonist, which is difficult to see in many other works. Having said the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. First, there is a lack of main line, or in other words, the main line lacks the climax brought by obvious dramatic conflicts. Strictly speaking, the lack of a main line in this book is biased. We can easily see that this is a farming novel that requires the help of the system to establish a private wildlife sanctuary and then reach the peak of life. However, this book lacks one dramatic climax after another to attract readers to keep reading. For example, we know that the protagonist has been fighting against the Tie X Gang for a long time. It is easy to foresee that the struggle between the protagonist (camp) and the Tie X Gang and the forces that may exist behind it will be a possible, continuous, and very necessary point of view. But unfortunately, the biggest climax of the current struggles is when the protagonist calls the whale through the elf and capsizes the bad guy's boat. And this looks, to be honest, like super powers playing house. Another climax comes when die-hard members of the Benx Gang break into the town and commit cruel and illegal acts. However, this matter was easily solved by the author, and then the protagonist and the beloved female character consolidated and deepened the emotional foundation. This approach not only makes readers feel that the protagonist is overqualified, but also feels that the protagonist clearly has the ability to destroy the earth, but he insists on doing embroidery. Obviously the details are handled well, but the author can always make the climax of a stage of dramatic conflict very plain. Big things are reduced to small things, and small things are reduced to small things. Second, the repetition of routines. As I said before, the author's writing skills are undoubtedly excellent, but in terms of routines, the author is undoubtedly uninnovative: A Chinese protagonist who strives to be localized Several optional local or foreign characters of the opposite sex that can be conquered Several local partners who can be relied on in the local area Several old classmates with close relationships, Old friends Several characters who can turn enemies into friends, several "acquaintances" who are not so reliable but can do things for money The villain leader who has always failed but always perseveres A pair of parents who are bound to urge marriage It can be said that although the character itself is not shaped in a facial shape, the positioning and function of the character are still stereotyped. Therefore, although the stage has crossed the globe from Northern Europe to the southernmost tip of Africa, some places will give readers an unbearable sense of familiarity or even déjà vu. I think this is probably one of the reasons why everyone said it was good after reading the details, but the results were not very good. There are many details of victory, but it is by no means just a victory in the details. In addition, there is another issue of scale. Here we are not just talking about the "driving" content in the article, but also about the some ridiculing content and tone. Under the current intensity of censorship, it may become sensitive, so it is recommended that the author consider it carefully and not be too aggressive. That's it, come on, author!

I read a few books on Shells, Fishing Ground and the Town Mayor Fishing Village; I read the beginning of Treasure King and didn't read it because I didn't like the genre; Nordic only read part of it and finished it after reading it, and then I came here. I added it to the bookshelf several times and then deleted it because of the opening.       ，，，，！ Whether he came to South Africa as an exchange during graduate school or was directly dispatched to South Africa from China, in short, this is an adult who was born in China and completed college in China, and is a party member. First, the Chinese people's education on the importance of human life can be said to have started from an early age. When a roommate dies, a normal person's first reaction would be to call the police or contact the outside world. However, the protagonist starts a different life like a normal person, which feels rather blunt. Although things come together later, how long did it take for him to come together? Second, the protagonist was taken across almost the entire country to a strange place, and was assigned the main mission system task by Goldfinger. He actually started selling jewelry and buying land so directly. He started such a bold operation while talking about security. Who gave him such courage? Third, the parents and classmates in China were notified that the protagonist was missing or dead, and the protagonist's actions became even more confusing after he found out about it. He made two phone calls, one to his classmates and one to his parents. Shouldn't I contact the superior department after this? No need to reissue passport? There is no need to solve the passport and household registration issues through official channels. After all, you are a person who has been reported missing or dead. According to normal operations, you need to cancel your account in the country. If you don't handle it, you will be a black account in the country. How can you return to the country? And whether the protagonist goes to South Africa for graduate school in the name of an exchange student, or is studying in China and is sent to South Africa, can you still go to school? Even if I can't get it, do I still need to contact the instructor? However, the protagonist's operation is that as soon as the two phone calls are made, he goes to farm like a normal person. It can be seen from the above that this is the quality of party members? Is this what graduate students do? Don't let party member graduate students get into trouble. Which person who can join the party in college is not a human being? I'm done complaining and feel good! Regardless of whether I saw the bullet casing or not, or whether I would change it, I continued reading anyway.

I dare not look at it! Stay tuned! I was afraid that I would lose control and finished reading it! I have read every book in Cartridge several times! Except for the Immortal Sect... The Immortal Sect is really...! Hmm~! You know!

To what extent is a novel well-written? There are fan fiction and h-texts. From this point of view, Danke, you are awesome. After all, in this type of novel, your golden fishing ground is the only one where someone writes fan-fiction h-texts. The others are written by some people such as the best servants, the best young masters, etc. So in some respects, your influence is no worse than that of Yu Yan, Feng Huo Xi, and the princes. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Come on!