A Wanderer from the World of Soul Land

There are more and more bonding and emotional scenes. The early stage is very comfortable and free, and the writing is free and easy. There won't be much "wave" in the future. It is not the swordsman who shows mercy at all times, but the shape of a knight in the sky, passing among thousands of flowers, only a brief communication can be just right and comfortable. The description of communication with women should be reduced to an appropriate amount. When a woman sees you, she will only like you. It will make people feel that they are all puppets of desire, and there is no one who can talk to you. It is too utilitarian. Emotions are warm. When the uninhibited and indulgent wind is filled with strong emotions and expectations, even if it is passive, it will bring excessive heaviness. The swordsman's sword heart is throughout, and will not become full of emotions again and again for the ups and downs of the outside world. The hometown left in the heart is a pain that should not and cannot be expressed in words, and it is tender. Learn from history and hide in your heart. The outspoken description is not suitable for a prodigal swordsman. The descriptive expression of language is not only used to tell the story, it can also dramatize the emotion and soul of the article in a third-person way. It is recommended that there be less psychological description and less senseless love between women for the protagonist. Through the communication and behavioral details between the characters, the characters and the bonds between the characters are profiled. Through the extension of the time line, the readers are slowly shown a young and true, mature and free story of a prodigal ranger and a sword as his companion, in the land of Douluo Continent.

This protagonist is really capable of being narcissistic, seeking death, and being narcissistic. He is really talented.

This book does not have the taste of Gale Swordsman. The protagonist is too comfortable. It feels like living one day at a time, pretending to be slapped in the face, and upgrading for the sake of upgrading. Although it can be written in this way, it will inevitably be repeated, and you will get tired of it after reading it for a long time [1] First of all, whether in novels or CGs in LOL, Everyone can see Yasuo's loneliness. On the one hand, few people can understand him, and on the other hand, he exiled himself. Because he failed to protect the elders, he later disdained to be understood. He knew that he was not guilty and did not violate his true heart. In my opinion, Yasuo is not a person who likes to participate in worldly disputes. [2] Secondly, Yasuo's line, "Although I have wandered around the world, I have never lost my true heart." Yasuo has never violated his heart, and he always follows his heart in everything he does. Maybe it is to find the murderer, maybe he wants to resurrect Yongen or want to have a good talk with Yongen, maybe he is protecting Ionia and doing what he thinks is right. [3] Finally, as you move forward with the strong wind, you also need to pay attention to your behind. This shows that Yasuo is not a brainless fighting madman. On the contrary, he can see through what the enemy is doing and is very experienced. (So ​​the protagonist is not the Yasuo in my mind at all 😭) The protagonist is like a headless fly. It is too poisonous to arrange a nominal master. Yasuo later developed superb sword skills after experiencing life and death. His sword skills are killing skills, so there is no master to teach him. The protagonist should be allowed to go through some hardships. He is so smooth. I have never been so smooth when playing Yasuo! ! The real Gale Swordsman doesn't need teammates! ! !

After seeing it on the shelves, I summarized the reasons for abandoning it. The system mother poisoned me in the early stage. I held my breath and survived, and then I came to the second poisonous point of this article. I held my breath again and started to draw and draw. Of course, it does not mean that the writing is not good. The whole text is wandering between being poisonous and beautiful. It gives people a feeling that it looks okay but always feels blocked in my heart. It is not suitable for old bookworms to read. The above

This is the most rubbish Douluo novel I have ever read.

The author is the first one I have rewarded in so many years. I used to watch pirated copies and it was pretty good 😒 Come on, author, if this level continues, it will definitely become popular 🌹

I haven't read much, maybe a few dozen chapters, and I keep talking to myself, crazily trying to outwit everything, people, things, and even spirit beasts around the protagonist. The protagonist talks to himself, the system talks to himself, and the soul beast also talks to itself! It's embarrassing to watch 😅

Well, I'm disappointed before I read it. I don't blame you for not being able to write, but I'll just write it if it's embarrassing. There's no need. If you say you're short of money, write steadily and don't let yourself go. Don't bring in your bad mood in reality. Well, I don't know what the situation is. I didn't read it. I just wanted to make a point. I'm so disappointed after reading so many fans, so I will preconceptions when I see it. The white-haired young man: Sorry, author: Who are you! White-haired young man: I'm sorry. The sword passed by and the author's head fell to the ground! With his back to the author, he said sideways: Mr. Motian Pavilion, Mr.

We all know Qian Renxue's life experience. Bibi Dong was only 20 when she fell in love with the master. She was still an innocent and lovely girl. She was raped by the bastard Qian Xunji and imprisoned for a year to give birth to Qian Renxue. When Tang San met the master, the master was about 50 years old, at least 45. I can't remember the specific details. When Tang San arrived at Shrek Academy, he was 12 years old, level 29? Bibi Dong must be 50 at this time. Qian Renxue's age is not difficult to calculate. Even if there is a discrepancy, it will not be more than 5 years old, that is, between 25 and 30 years old. According to the time of the original work, Bibi Dong and the master broke up after giving birth to Qian Renxue. The master suffered a love injury and went out to explore, met Liu Erlong and Flender, and later knew that Liu Erlong was going to get married. The two dragons were born, and the shortest period of time was more than 1 year. When the two reunited at Lanba Academy after separation, the original text said it was a full 20 years. At this time, Tang San was 12 to 13 years old, and Qian Renxue was at least 21 years old. Now Qian Renxue is said to be 13 years old and level 60. This is rejuvenation, or the protagonist's system is blind. I hope the author can correct this bug. Otherwise, the timeline collapsed, and Qian Renxue awakened at the age of 6. Even if she was born with full soul power at level 10, it is a bit nonsense to upgrade her soul power to level 50 in 7 years. She is still at the age of 6 to 13. She still has to pretend to be Xue Qinghe every day, and there is not so much time to practice. If he is 1 year old at this time, then he started pretending a few years after he was born, right? Let a baby pretend to be the crown prince of the Tiandou Empire? As the eldest son, how many years younger than the third son Xue Beng is this prince? I hope the author will fix this vulnerability as soon as possible. The rest of the content is well written and feels very comfortable to read 🙂

It's better to update once a day Why are the updates so slow

Yes! You can raise a cat, and you can raise a cat girl! You can raise two together!

First of all, my evaluation of this book is: extremely mediocre It is now November 29, 2019, the book has not yet been put on the shelves, and there is no suspicion of piracy. From an objective perspective, this book is either bad or bad. It's a highlight to make the original work feel comfortable. To be honest, the writing can be considered as scumbag. Character creation isvery poor! The heroine≈The biggest failure so far Many people come here with the mentality of watching Douluo fan and Yasuo. How about you come and give readers a love at first sight? And the attitude of the protagonist, is it right to regard himself as God? –                                                                                                       //////////|||\\\\\\\\\\                                                                    =====                                                                                                                                                                          | | ≧ (⊙) |⌒| (⊙) ≦ | ( | | ╱ | ╲ | ) \                                                                                                                                                                                           Profit                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ​/

Mid-jungle linkage, okay, Yasuo doesn't say anything, just be happy and that's it 😁😁

The writing is pretty good, please update more, otherwise it won't be enough.

The protagonist who is a road idiot and a dog-licker Protagonist = author = a dog-licker and a road idiot, it's over.

There are two more chapters in the Book of Thousand Bloods🙂🙂

Good book🙂 five-star reviews

Author, please work hard, your writing is very good.

Not enough😟

Do you think I won't watch you when you shame yourself? 🤭

This book is too plain. Can't it be more rigorous?

The sea, you are all water, can you not be so watery?

Good book, a rare good book (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻ Genius plot direction, but there is an author who doesn't love readers? Reader: Let you torture me thousands of times, I will treat this book like my first love! So, very beaver, no big problem!

I always feel that the protagonist is too slutty, and a genius like him will definitely be killed in advance.

Are there any novels similar to this style that also travel to Douluo Continent? Can you recommend some with stronger male protagonists? Thank you.

Come on, come on, don't wait any longer, play as you like.

Zeng Yi, hey hey hey, the invisible horse's hooves are heard, and the horse's hooves are heard falling, oh yeah! Oh yeah!

The writing is so good, why?

Pig's feet are like west Lan in DNF!

A No heroine (women only affect the speed of drawing the sword) B Single heroine (my sword is used to protect the one I love most) C Multiple heroines (As long as you are brave, Bibi Dong will take maternity leave)