Reborn as a Doomsday Black Technology City

No! Rebirth + doomsday + black technology + construction flow is acceptable. Is this another demon world? Magic continent? Are you sure it won't collapse? Originally, the labyrinth should be written as a research base similar to a certain organization, but it was written as a portal to another dimension. It's a mess. It's better to revise it as soon as possible. Don't write about magic and other worlds.

Author, there is a problem with your setting. There is an android factory and you still have to save people. What's the use of saving? To put it bluntly, few people nowadays are useful in the end of the world. Including myself, besides eating and waiting to die, I don't know what else to do in the end of the world. What I have learned now will be of no use in the end of the world. And you have a wife and children, and you see a woman and say she is pure and cute. Is it appropriate? Anyway, I can't stand it. Goodbye.

It's a good book, otherwise why would there be trolls? If it's poorly written, trolls will almost never troll.

? ? ? Time and time again, I make people rebel and become bastards. When I get angry, I throw 600 atomic bombs. Let me see how long you ungrateful bastards can live. It is an insult to your intelligence. How can a normal person be betrayed so many times? What about your system? Where's your satellite playback? There is no surveillance in modern cities? The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist has an IQ problem.