Lord of the Elves

I'm confused by the recent plot. I have been reading this book for so long and I don't even understand the author's portrayal of the protagonist (눈_눈). Sometimes he is a little smart and sometimes he is stupid. Overall, it is basically frustrating but it's okay... After reading the current plot, I can't remember the last time the protagonist made me feel happy and refreshing against Kanto. The plot finally turned around when he inexplicably rejected his sister's marriage. The protagonist was taken away by King Feng before. Who knows where you are? How can your sister find you? The protagonist's father has lost all his capital and still thinks that his father can take charge of the family when he returns? What else does your father have to be the head of the family? Only now do you remember that there is still your sister? Na na na na na? Apparently he was quite powerful when he joined forces with others to fight against Du in the mainland competition? And you said you could be the captain? ? ? ? Be the head of the family? ? ? Now I just want to watch the protagonist act wildly_(:з∠)_If I don't get something good, I will feel depressed.

Author, I beg you to kill Maya or downplay this character? I'm really disgusted by this woman 😅. She helped Team Rocket control Jirachi, only to be deprived of her status as a saint, and now she has to regain her status as a saint by awakening Lugia. Reason: 1 Maya belongs to Cheng/Du 2 The battle tower belongs to Sinnoh and Cheng/du 3 Controlling Jirachi destroys the common interests, so it is only a symbolic punishment 4 Awakening Lugia protects the interests of Cheng/du, so it restores its original status Consequences: 1 Maya resents the protagonist because of the Jirachi incident 2 The protagonist has an enemy with a certain status 3 Success disgusts the readers So are you here to tell us the importance of taking sides? ? As long as you stand firm, you can clear everything?

There are a lot of Pm fanfics, and the in-depth exploration of skills like yours is much better than the mindless restraint of quasi-gods and mythical beasts.

The sauce is bubbling, and I found a super beautiful elf novel, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to watch the big book ~ By the way, I want to exchange visits ^_^

Here are Jiangjiang's [2020] footprints~

Facts have proved that the limited and exempt works are all works that are neither good nor bad. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: a Pokémon book is written by an author who is as talented as a traditional fantasy novel, but it is weak in the lack of scene creation. The words are just words, not scenes; and then a Pokémon book. Pokémon is only a supporting role. This is the second failure. However, the character creation is slightly weak, and it may be even more difficult to create Pokémon. The rest are not just flaws, so it doesn't matter. Let's talk about the advantages: The advantages are that there are no obvious problems with the writing, there are no flaws in the logic, the character creation is not outstanding but it is not dull, the story is simple and clear but not a piece of writing, it is interesting to read, and the world view is supplemented by Pokémon. To sum up, it is a good business article. It is not suitable for reading as a Pokémon fan (the author did not understand the point of Pokémon fandom), but it is still good for casual reading. It is especially suitable for people who know a little bit about Pokémon but are not fans. For Pokémon fans, this book is a bit unsatisfactory.

Alas, after reading the recent chapters, I thought the author would finally enhance the protagonist's presence. In the end, she won the battle and was not the captain but used her identity as a wet nurse. So this is a different kind of pretense? ? Doesn't the protagonist want to become the Lord of Sinnoh? Then you need to show your leadership in the early stage. For a cross-continental team competition, the captain's qualifications are very important. Oh, by the way, the protagonist seems to want to be a wet nurse and take command in place of the captain, so he doesn't look down on the current captain. As for being afraid of being targeted and not being able to command comprehensively, these are all excuses. Looking at it now, I understand that the author wanted to highlight the characters of the original animation, but the biggest shortcoming is the protagonist. The protagonist's character is sometimes domineering, sometimes overthinking, and sometimes weak, and cannot be fixed at all. Moreover, the protagonist lacks a kind of faith and courage. It gives people the impression that he just takes things as they come. He has a sense of presence, but cannot leave an impression. In one sentence, the character development of the protagonist is too vague and uncertain. The setting of the book is very good, the characters are good (except for the protagonist), and the plot description is also very good. The biggest problem is the protagonist.

Let's talk about the protagonist setting I believe many readers have the same feeling as me. The protagonist's character and personal talents make people feel a little stuck. I will analyze my views on the protagonist, for reference only. First of all, let's start with the setting of the protagonist. The protagonist is a legitimate son who has not inherited the family's talent (the counterattack style of a loser protagonist?). He has a system that can only view elf information and wants to change the fate of the family. However, it seems that he has been hiding his strength due to a grudge against his father (playing pig to eat the tiger style?). Later, he became famous after a battle with Lanzhu, and began to gain the attention of the family and more resources. I have to raise doubts here. As a time traveler, it is strange that Xianyu has not had any other plans for so many years. Shouldn't the family plan their own way out if they don't pay attention to it? It is unreasonable to remain unknown for such a long time, and the relationship between the protagonist and his sister later shows that his sister has a certain degree of trust in his abilities, and also dotes on him, so it is not a problem to get some resources to invest in his younger brother's business. For a thoughtful time traveler, it is impossible to keep doing it for such a long time. Even if it is not possible, you can find a martial arts school to pass on these martial arts and become stronger. This is not difficult for the family. Then Tu Long was woken up by Lan Zhu's scolding, and he started to play a high-profile transformation to assume the identity of the rich second generation (no more pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger). When I saw this, I started to look forward to the protagonist, thinking that the character development of the protagonist would officially start from here, but after pretending to be cool, I started to be timid again. On the contrary, Lanzhu has always been very eye-catching, not in terms of strength, but in terms of personality charm. In this aspect, the protagonist is completely blown away. It feels like the author wants to portray the protagonist as a rational and qualified leader, but the charisma has never been reflected. It is okay that the supporting role is not eye-catching, but portraying a heroine full of positive energy makes the protagonist more like a supporting role, just like the protagonist in some TV series is given enough roles, but no one likes that. I believe some readers feel uncomfortable here, and I have also seen it in the comment section. The supporting characters are unique, soulful and outstanding, which is a must for a successful novel, but a protagonist with no characteristics makes people feel boring. After all, readers read books and put themselves into the protagonist. It is even worse when they are cowardly in front of the heroine. The experience of role-playing as the protagonist is too bad. Next, let's talk about the most exciting part of this book so far. The protagonist makes a wish for Jirachi. This part is what I think is the most outstanding part. Is there a protagonist with this sexy operation and full of visual sense? Has it suddenly become a hot-blooded anime? However, in order to create the image of the protagonist as a rational and qualified leader, the author later emphasized the benefits of choosing this wish too deliberately. If it is discovered through the vision of the supporting character that the protagonist's wish is actually a coquettish operation, it will appear that the protagonist is inscrutable. But if the protagonist repeatedly emphasizes the benefits of this choice, it will feel like a scheming bitch, which is not pleasing. To use an analogy, after the Jirachi incident, the protagonist explains various things to persuade his sister to invest. If the sister praises the protagonist for doing a good job, analyzes the benefits that the protagonist can bring and discusses how to use Jirachi, and then the protagonist rationally tells the sister how to grasp this degree, forming a virtuous circle and not killing the goose that lays the egg, would it be better? Is it easier for others to visually interpret your rationality than to explain your actions rationally? Finally, some readers have strong objections to the behavior of making captains. I think it is okay. After all, the protagonist is not yet a king based on his strength at that time. It is unrealistic to become a captain just because he beats one at a higher level. It is good to retreat in order to advance. It is good to sell favors to the new captain. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist's personal abilities. There is a system that can only look at the data, which is actually a very big problem for civilian trainers. However, there are too many talented people with backgrounds, and it is not difficult for them to find some highly qualified elves. Therefore, the greater role of this system is to predict the opponent's tactics by looking at the moves of the enemy elves during the battle. In terms of training elves, everyone is at the same starting line. In this story of geniuses running around, there are so many geniuses with backgrounds who can make money, and many of them can make money better than the protagonist. However, the protagonist's personal talent seems too weak, let alone half-assed superpowers. Zhulan's dragon power is so powerful, so she must be able to pass it. There are Natsu, Kona, Daigo, etc., And even Kojiro, who is much more powerful than the protagonist, has a martial arts skill. The protagonists standing together are really unbearable to watch. Moreover, in the author's setting, various super powers are very helpful to the elves in battle, but the protagonist is really holding them back. To summarize, there are two main problems: 1. There are no attractive highlights of the protagonist's character. The author has not successfully shaped his image, but he has created several supporting characters with full personalities and hooks. There is no contrast and no harm. 2. The protagonist's personal talent is not good enough. Although other people's loser protagonists have problems with their qualifications at the beginning, they all have an invincible hook. The protagonist's weak chickens are all left in the setting. The plot starts with various changes of destiny. However, although our protagonist has his own system, it is of no use, and his super power is of no use. He only has a gold-rich super power, but the people around him are basically better than him, and he has no sense of existence. Finally, I have a question. The protagonist has traveled for so long and has really done nothing before the plot begins. He only has a flowery stem? Normally speaking, even if a time traveler hasn't inherited the superpowers of his family owner after traveling for more than ten years, he shouldn't just wait to die for ten years, right? It's very inappropriate not to plan ahead! Is there a foreshadowing here between Hua Yedi and Xie Mi? Is it related to the layout made by the protagonist in the previous ten years? According to the author's initial portrayal of the protagonist as a rational and calculated person who plays pig and eats tiger, it would be reasonable to think that he has done some secret things in the past ten years, quietly created some achievements, or kept some trump cards hidden from others.

Come on, the author, the description of the battle is very good.

3 Pictures a day please improve 😁

Happy New Year! Make more money in the new year (get it?)

Opinions, not nonsense This book is one of the best fairy herbs among elves currently! Not to mention the fluent writing style, I also put a lot of effort into the setting. What I look forward to most every day is the two updates of this book! ———————————————————————— Let me talk about the things that I personally cannot accept about this book... The author wants to write about Sirona's personality charm, which I think is great! It's no problem when it's based on supporting characters. But it is a bit hard to accept that it has always been based on the protagonist... —————————————————————————— 1. The first turning point, the protagonist originally planned to hold on to development and be an old cunt, but Sirona made a domineering declaration, and the whole thing changed completely, and he decided to use family power... Etc. Okay, just think that the author wants to change the protagonist's mentality and let the protagonist grow up. The original plan of the protagonist in the front is bitten, and the subsequent plot is also smooth (the small flaw here is that the turning point is too fast) —————————————————————————————— 2. There are a little bit of excitement, and it is often overshadowed. The popularity plan of the protagonist's academy is blocked, and the reputation of the battle tower is sluggish. Same 3 0 wins Sirona's popularity report.... (I also like writing about Sirona's style, but don't always use the protagonist as a foil...) —————————————————————————— 3. The Jirachi Incident Bet on Life - The protagonist originally planned to run away, but decided to risk his life after being escaped by Sirona's handsome mouth. First of all, I think Sirona's willingness to participate in the war is very charming! But it's hard for the protagonist to accept being cheated... If the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, it makes sense to want to fight. Even if you really have to risk your life, why should you escape from Sirona's mouth? Naruto can escape Pain with his mouth, and Obito with his mouth, so Naruto is the protagonist! ! Isn't it a bit wrong to get the protagonist? To bring out the brilliance of Sirona, just let the supporting characters do this kind of thing... ———————————————————————— 4. Yaxuan said that the protagonist beat Sirona several times, but not as good as her! (Aggrieved) Wow, Sirona has been enjoying family resources and temple resources since she was a child. Where is the protagonist? Scorned by the family, the resource gap is so huge, raising Huatiye* to beat Sirona, damn it, is not as good as her! In addition, it has been emphasized that the protagonist's talents are rubbish, he has no family abilities, and his superpower talents are rubbish, which are also small pitfalls... The protagonist of the loser style will not always emphasize his low talent. Even if he has it, he can make up for it with a golden finger. However, the protagonist of this book does not have any, so he will always emphasize that his talent is rubbish! The protagonist takes a Gyarados that may be at full value. Although it is difficult to cultivate, it is always a good thing, but Sirona just takes the Ugly Fish at full value. There is no harm without comparison... ———————————————————————— 5. It feels weird. For example, the last time the protagonist defeated Sirona, she still used an instant kill, but it was not fun at all. The author directly castrated this plot... There was no surprise at all. The protagonist is obviously the first person of the younger generation, but his reputation is that he is the second best in ten thousand years! Even if you don't use instant kills, it's better to write about something exciting than this —————————————————————— Generally speaking, there are some exciting things in the book, but it's just very frustrating. Sirona is the sun, and the protagonist is like the moon, or even the little stars, used to set her off. I admit that Sirona is really shining, and I like this character very much. She is my favorite female character among elf, but don't always use the protagonist to set off her personality charm! Even if the protagonist's mentality is to change, it can be a subtle change in the inner drama, and it does not need to change after being cheated... In a word, it feels like the protagonist is no longer the protagonist! ! ! ! ! ! ! Every time I read the book, I always feel frustrated... Maybe the author didn't want this book to be a mindless book, but so far I feel a little uncomfortable... Just like most people don't like Little Dragon Girl being ridden by Zhen, but they won't say that The Legend of the Condor Heroes is shit...

I've just read two chapters and I'm so addicted. I'm sorry that I can't accept the author's writing style and setting, so I'll take my leave.

I voted for another monthly ticket. Are there any updates for the first five monthly tickets this month? I submitted two this month.

There is a feeling that the protagonist is extremely holy. No matter what others want to do to him, he will not kill him. If he is robbed, he will just let him go. He always feels like a coward.

After reading the author's previous book, I have made great progress in terms of writing skills and layout! Support! !

When reading a book, the biggest doubt is how to write this book? A battle plan with the alliance or that kind of force? Because of the layout of Jirachi city and various family research, I have said more than once that an individual cannot win as a team. Or is it the protagonist's personal leadership and charm that can lead to a breakthrough in the family's predicament? Because the family seems to have no description of any actions now. They are all doing what the protagonist tells them to do and following the protagonist. But the plot is so written... Why did the fight with Kojiro last for 3 chapters or so... Isn't the protagonist the conductor? Then no matter who I fight, it is obviously a sneak attack and the first move, which always gives me a feeling of a 50-50 situation, so why bother with a sneak attack? It's useless at all The plot describes a lot of characters... But it seems that there are not many who can stand with the protagonist to fight against the alliance in the future, and each one is making progress... The protagonist can't crush it, and it's very uncomfortable There are also fights, such as Apollo, you can tell at a glance that the protagonist is a quasi-king elf, and many people are like this... How can you tell, is it written on the head? Then the protagonist's golden finger is **, or the protagonist can't even do this without it... Anyway, the selection of powerful elves for supporting roles is based on high qualifications...

Why do so many people talk about poison? Aren't they all the current mainstream realistic Pokémon settings? Besides, I see that there are so many people talking about poison, a lot of people who are prostitutes for free, and there are not many people who subscribe to the home page, so the author probably doesn't expect you to continue reading.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I suggested that the author should write fantasy novels. After reading Pokemon, it was full of fantasy. Feeling a little nauseous.

Go write fantasy novels and stop harming the elves.

I really would rather not have a new chapter come out. I originally thought that the protagonist would unite with Chengdu Fangyuan to fight against Guandong. In the end, Kanto was forced to ally with itself. As a result, I joined Kanto easily and skillfully. I don't know what the foreshadowing is for. But I feel that joining the alliance not only makes the journey of the protagonist a lot easier, but the subsequent appeal of the book has also dropped a lot for me.

This absolute divine book has three golden chapters: the beginning of the fight, the family, the patriarch, the young patriarch, the heroine, the visit, the taunt, and the golden chapter? It's a pity that without that sentence, it lacks a bit of soul.

This alliance's strategy is really disgusting. He illegally sent people incognito to attack people to steal chlorophyll gems, used them as bait to lure people to attack, and then arrested and executed them. He also recognized the chlorophyll gems and used them for trade in order to lure another powerful leader to kill him. Behind the scenes, he also colluded with his disciples to do evil. How can he convince the public when the conspiracy is put on the table? Don't the gym leaders under him have the integrity to be willing to be lackeys? When the Chlorophyll incident came out, all the conspiracies were put on the table. It would be better to deny it. I designed a plot to execute Ace, but I didn't get the position right. The relationship between pirates and navy is that of thieves and officers and soldiers. The Tianlong people are more He is the villain. Is it appropriate for you to trick him here? Even if the protagonist's father has no feelings, he has done something wrong. He is just a bait and will be killed. How can the protagonist calm down the reader's mood if he doesn't kill Samaranch and Juzi who are playing tricks? And the guy who designed Maya to be so disgusting actually came clean and didn't kill her? Just for his own benefit, he let her get her wish and let her shed some crocodile tears in the end? The previous plot of Hoenn was only finished but not finished. The execution plot this time is really full of poison. It's not that the protagonist cannot be wronged, but that in the elf fanfiction, evil people actually benefit from it. The protagonist actually thinks that attacking Sakaki is revenge. The high-level alliance officials involved in the design will have to get retribution. This plot is so angry that I haven't opened the book again for a few days.

If the protagonist doesn't cheat, then I feel Zhulan is almost invincible.

Halfway through the movie~, the shortcomings are that the elves are not the focus. The protagonist has a lot of messy abilities but they are of no use. Maybe they are foreshadowing. Anyway, I didn't see the back part. It buried a lot of pitfalls. I didn't mention it for more than half of the time. It was labeled as Invincible flow and I didn't notice it. It's cool. There are basically none. It felt like it was suppressing the protagonist until the middle period. , I have cultivated a lot of elves with various routines, but the description of the battle scenes is very embarrassing. 🌚🌚 If you don't read it as an elf novel, it is good. The elves in it are supporting roles, and they even feel like just tools. Yes, it makes me feel like they are just tools. The mythical beasts do not have the B-level of the mythical beasts, and I do not see the power and power of the mythical beasts and the reverence of humans for the mythical beasts. Most of the descriptions are about human intrigues ~ which is outrageous

The second design of the Elf novel simply insults the original work

Five monthly passes are enough, the author can add more

I vomited! I want to watch the extra story between the protagonist and Zhulan. The ending is really anticlimactic.

Plot guess: If the protagonist wants to change his destiny, he must first become the leader of the family. To achieve this goal, the first step is to build a reputation. This is a good explanation. It is something that every leader has to do. Without fame, no one will convince you. The progress of the protagonist is a bit slow. It was only from Tu Long that he realized that he needs fame and shows his own value to gain more support from the family. Moreover, when he takes over as the head of the family in the future, there will be less opposition. Refer to the two earning heads of the Ju family, which led to the brain drain, and And both times, it took Lan Zhu to wake up and do it. The protagonist still doesn't feel that time is running out. The alliance is getting closer and closer, and there is no time for you to develop. Hurry up and do a few more big things to show your overall perspective, rationality, courage and other leadership qualities, and help a few second-generation and powerful people to gain their friendship and favor. Hiding all day long, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not a way to earn a position. Second, you must have strength. This is easy to explain. If you don't have strength, you won't be able to sit firmly in the position of head of the family. Even if you are helped to get the position, you won't be able to direct people to work. If you have strength, you can point to everyone with a brick in your hand and ask who agrees and who disagrees. Now the protagonist's father has not yet reached the age of retirement. The protagonist must at least be stronger than his father to take over, and the plot must be designed so that the protagonist's father does not listen to the protagonist's advice and makes a wrong decision. The protagonist turns the tide, and the protagonist brings back the heirloom, so the protagonist's father will abdicate (this kind of word count is better), otherwise the protagonist will have to die. So protagonist, don't be timid, be brave enough to express yourself, let your peers admire you, and let the older generation think highly of you. When you become the head of the family, other families will still be the heads of other families. If you don't work hard to gain their approval now, it will be too late when you become the head of the family and let them re-examine you, because you have to race against time. You can only start after you become the head of the family. You still need time to unify other families and become the talker of Sinnoh. Third, establish your own power. The protagonist is not the head of the family now, and relies on others for many resources. He should start some projects to earn money and resources, and even help the family in some fields (who can make money and fight, who doesn't want such a leader), be the protagonist and his father's will When there is a conflict, you can do what you think is right even if you don't get the support of the family. You will also need help when you earn the position of the head of the family in the future. After all, you see that in other countries, you have to use your own money to get sponsorship to elect members. If you don't have money, you can choose nothing (so Jirachi's city is a good foreshadowing). Fourth, establish your own network. The protagonist's father asked him to study in Qifeng for this reason. Building good relationships with the second generation of other forces will be of great benefit to future development. And if you want to be a talker in Sinnoh, of course you have to have a good relationship with each family. The author has laid the groundwork. After the Ju family failed to become the head of the family, the teacher who went to the academy has a 70 to 80% chance that the protagonist will help him go back and regain the position of head of the family. Otherwise, the Ju family will not support the protagonist as the leader of Sinnoh. Fifth, Sinnoh's choice. When the protagonist becomes the leader in the future, Sinnoh will choose to remain independent or merge into the alliance. Let's talk about independence first. This is the hell difficulty. You need to find allies first. Sinnoh alone cannot fight against the alliance. Forget about those Team Rockets. They can use each other, but they cannot be allies (as a stable regime, we still have to distinguish between these terrorists). With their pathological and reckless behavior, if you treat them as allies, that is If you put a time bomb behind yourself and choose these forces as your allies, you can only choose to be enemies with the mythical beasts and take the path of recovering the mythical beasts (do you still want to gain the friendship of the mythical beasts when you are with these people?). Of course, if this path succeeds, the alliance will be rubbish, and world domination is not a problem, but readers probably won't like this ending (look at the white text of who destroys whom). Therefore, if the alliance is an enemy, the protagonist must quickly become a Sinnoh talker, and then find support from other continents that want to get rid of the alliance before the alliance reaches other continents. This is a bit difficult, and there is not enough time. When the protagonist becomes the head of the family, the alliance will probably start to exert its strength. The second option is to integrate into the Alliance and become a shareholder of the Alliance to form the factional power of Sinnoh. The Sinnoh region can be reformed according to the alliance's wishes, but the heads of various departments are still responsible for the major Sinnoh families. If the Alliance wants to gain the right to speak in Sinnoh, the corresponding alliance must also give important positions to the people of Sinnoh. The ending will be that the protagonist one day becomes the leader of the alliance. This route is more reasonable, let's discuss it. Here are some personal suggestions. The author has consciously asked the protagonist to add chips to the Yuan family before, such as investing in the research institute for super evolution, Jirachi's city, etc. However, I think that in the academy, a circle of rich second-generation officials and second-generation officials, there is a lot of room for maneuver. After all, the identities of the classmates are not simple. The priority is to tie these people to the protagonist's ship. How to tie them? In addition to friendship, the most important benefit is that students can mobilize family resources. Why not start a business together? Integrate the different resources of each family and create more benefits. Each family will taste the sweetness through investment. The status of these friends in the family will increase. At the same time, they will gain additional resources through business and become stronger. People in power in the family can also see the value of the protagonist (which can make everyone better). Ability, good leader), and because of interests, everyone can unite together, and through business, everyone is used to listening to the protagonist's command. These friends who grew up together will get better and better because of this, and it will also advance the time for them to control the family's voice. The most important thing is that these will be the protagonist's thugs in the future. To be a leader, you must have talents under your command. Xiang Yu can't beat Liu Bang, right?

This sucks so fast,,,, it took me several chapters to finish it, but I'm speechless,,,,,,