Legend of Konoha from the Heart

According to the five-star rating standard for novels, I would give this book three stars. The writing and plot are not too high. If you have any comments or suggestions, please post them in this post.

Generally speaking, Sasuke's character is still typical of the Uchiha clan, with arrogance and conceited characteristics. Specifically, there are different performances at different stages. There are four key turning points, namely the annihilation of the clan, being bewitched by Obito, dealing with Kabuto with Itachi, and the battle at Nazusa's Final Valley. Before the genocide, Sasuke was still a primary school student. He performed well in school and was a little genius. However, because he had an even more talented brother at home, he didn't care about his stupid classmates, nor did he despise them. He was very educated. So girls like it very much. After the annihilation of the clan, all he could think about was questioning Itachi, taking revenge, and restoring the glory of Uchiha. He longed for strength in his heart, and at the same time he became a little withdrawn, but he was not cold inside, especially when it came to dealing with Naruto. He was cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Especially after Haruno Sakura said that Naruto was an uneducated orphan, she became furious. It can be seen from Kakashi's performance in the test that he can still show care for his teammates. Of course, at this stage, Sasuke has always been obsessed with improving his strength for revenge, so his thirst for power is very strong. Therefore, after discovering that Kakashi could not teach him and Naruto became a disciple of Jiraiya, his strength began to surpass his own, so he took the initiative to find Orochimaru, hoping that Orochimaru, who was also a Sannin, could improve him. At this stage, Sasuke's paranoia is very obvious, but he still recognizes his teammates in his heart. In the next third stage, his paranoia has distorted his nature. The starting point for entering this stage is Obito's bewitchment. He attributed all the misfortune of the family and Itachi's death to the top management of Konoha, and wanted to destroy Konoha and kill the top management of Konoha as revenge. His character became cruel, and his teammates became objects that could be sacrificed at any time. Anyone who hinders him, even his former partners, will never hold back. Kaoru says that Sasuke's chakra has become very evil, and that's what he means. The fourth stage originated from meeting Itachi's reincarnation of the dirty earth, learning all the truth, inheriting part of Itachi's will, returning to reason, and starting to walk on the path of Uchiha Madara, wanting to bring peace with his own power. Because there was no Black Zetsu bewitchment, he did not place his hopes on the Infinite Tsukuyomi like Madara and Obito. He also knew that the Infinite Tsukuyomi was a way to deceive himself and others, so he chose to join forces with Naruto, and after defeating Kaguya, he chose to seal the nine tailed beasts. It can be said that from this time on, Sasuke has gotten rid of hatred, has his own understanding of peace, and has begun to have his own political opinions. His reason and nature have returned, and he has re-recognized the power of his partners. He will apologize to Kosovo, resurrect Orochimaru, listen quietly to the explanation of the second generation, and fight tooth and nail to eliminate Madara and Kaguya. But the arrogance of the Uchiha clan is also part of his character. The last key node is the battle in the Valley of the End. Winning to become Hokage, losing to marry Sakura, it can be said that this battle is actually a battle of ideas. Naruto pressed Sasuke's pride to the ground and rubbed it. Sasuke, who finally failed, gave up the idea of ​​​​fighting for Hokage, also rejected Tsunade's suggestion to transplant a new arm for him, and left the village. It's said to be atonement, but actually it's just to save face. Four nodes, five stages: The first stage: well-educated, polite, and a little tsundere. The second stage: proud, withdrawn, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, pursuing power, full of hatred and contradictions in the heart. The third stage: cruel, cold-blooded, and unscrupulous. The fourth stage: Be confident and conceited, dare to admit your own mistakes, and have your own pursuits. The fifth stage: low-key, good face, a bit shameless to face Jiangdong's elders. The above are the character changes shown in the anime. In this book, Sasuke's character path changes a little differently, because there are cousins ​​of the same race and age, and Sasuke has an extra responsibility in his heart. And as the protagonist's strength grows, Sasuke is pushed farther and farther away, surpassing the three ninjas, and Sasuke gradually regards the protagonist as a role model! Until the protagonist told the beautified truth about the genocide, Sasuke's mentality directly entered a new stage. He wanted to be Hokage. This was what Sasuke told Heart after Danzo's death! In addition, this book is almost completed, and the controversial parts have been revised many times. It can be said that the author has been working hard to write this book well, but due to limited writing skills and skills, it is impossible to satisfy everyone. Please understand!

Sharingan: 1. Dynamic vision 2. Strong mental power and learning ability 3. Visual memory ability 4. Illusion talent 5. Izanagi 2. Vitality absorption (passive, no need to turn on the kaleidoscope state), slowly absorbs 90% of the surrounding vitality and converts it into vitality, which is stored in the natural field of the left eye, and 10% remains in the body, increasing the body's recovery ability. The efficiency of absorption is related to the concentration of vitality and the degree of weakness of the body. 3. Flesh and blood regeneration (active, need to turn on the kaleidoscope state), control the vitality in the natural field, use gaze as a means to inject it into the body of the designated target, quickly regenerate flesh and blood, and also take back the excess vitality. If you are treating yourself, just use sensory control directly. 4. Innate space (active), with the help of the right pupil power, an independent space is opened. After the assistance is cancelled, it will automatically return to the realm, and the physical objects stored inside will disappear Being separated from the body, you can move freely within this domain, and you can also use your own soul to attract the souls of the outside world. The soul from the heart can drag the outside soul back to the body and send the soul to the soul realm 3. Soul arrest (active). From the heart, you can use the palm of the body to grasp the head of the creature and extract the soul of the creature. The difficulty is directly related to the opponent's chakra. The stronger the opponent's chakra, the greater the difficulty of extraction. 4. Reincarnation (active), the spirit body in the reincarnation space can be put into the intact physical body to achieve the purpose of resurrection 5. Soul space (active), with the assistance of the left eye pupil force, an independent space is opened. After cancellation, it will automatically return to the domain. The physical objects stored inside will disappear and the spirit body will continue to exist. Kaleidoscope (both eyes): 1. Susanoo (active) The power of both eyes fuses with his own chakra, and the purple body appears, more than 300 meters high 2. Reincarnation Space (active) The power of both eyes fuses, and the natural ability of reincarnation is activated at the same time. The manifested space has both spiritual body and vitality. It can wrap the spiritual body with vitality, thus giving birth to young creatures. After cancellation, the space will disappear, the physical objects in the space will disappear, and only the spirit body will remain in the living body. 3. Teleportation (active) When the soul space is open, the body can achieve teleportation by exchanging positions with its own soul body. Commonly used Ninjutsu: (Theoretically, you can learn Ninjutsu with any attribute, here are the commonly used ones) 1. Shadow Clone Technique 2. Illusion: Nirvana Abode The art of sound hypnosis 3. Partial doubling, super doubling and digestion 4. Fire escape 1. The art of powerful fireball 2. Dragon Fire Technique 3. Fire Extinguishing 5. Earth Escape 1. Hardening Technique 2. Submersible in the Earth 3. Earth Flow 4. Earth flow wall 5. Seismic core 6. Rock pillar gun 6. Wind escape 1. Wind cut technique 2. Big breakthrough 3. **Jade 7. Thunder Release 1. Thunder Ball 2. Chidori (under study) 8. Water Release 1. Water Rush 2. Water Wall 3. Water Dragon Bullet 4. Waterfall Technique Others: 1. Shuriken Technique (not proficient) 2. Rasengan (Have seen Kakashi use it, ready to reappear) 3. Flying Thunder God (under learning, currently used as a disguise for kaleidoscope teleportation ability) 4. Eight Gate Dunjia (Knowing the cultivation method, but not practicing) 5. Reincarnation of the Immortal Corpse (Knowing the method) 6. Reincarnation in the dirty soil (Knowing the method)

Author, are you writing a "narration" or a novel? What we want to watch is the plot, but you write a lot of "explanations". A proper "explanation" is okay, but if you just use it to write "explanations" for "bad things", what's the point?

I hope there will be more self-created ninjutsu

It's good, but the protagonist, an Uchiha, is actually a fat man. The Uchiha genes mutated here. The author must be a fat man too

It's fun to be petty once in a while, but it's boring to be petty all the time.

Basically all Uchiha who traveled through time were from the Konoha faction. Using the power of the family's blood to kill one's own family members, as a Chinese, filial piety has been at the forefront of Chinese culture for five thousand years. I can't figure out why I want to be an Uchiha.

I will also share my own opinions 1. First of all, it is best not to suddenly become stronger in terms of the protagonist's strength. If he does become stronger, it is best to explain how he became stronger, such as practicing the immortal mode. 2. In terms of plot, don't jump too fast at the end, otherwise it will be boring if you go to the Fourth Ninja World War all at once, or if it ends quickly and no one has seen enough, it will be boring. The best thing is to write some branch plots surrounding the original work, such as the original story of protecting the 12 ninjas, Dragon Vein and other plots. 3. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, he is still a human being. As a human being, you should have goals. Therefore, the protagonist's goal should be stated, such as setting a goal to survive until the finale, or becoming the strongest ninja world, etc. 4. When the protagonist does something, he should check whether it will benefit his own goals or himself. If not, please don't do it blindly. 5. Although the plot is said to follow the original work, appropriate changes can also be made. For example, some regrettable things in the original work can be changed, such as preventing Jiraiya from going to the Land of Rain to investigate or saving him, or saving Shisui who had his eye stolen by Danzo. 6. As for the female protagonist, it is best to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. It's best not to write about two or more female protagonists. In the future, this kind of book will have a harem, and the book will definitely be scrapped. That's all I want to say. If the author can see it, you can refer to it. Although I have never written a novel, I have read a lot of Naruto stories. Finally, I wish the author this book will continue to be popular and not be a eunuch.

I don't want to see it anymore when I see that I'm still a fat person from eating like in my previous life. You were a fat person in your last life, and you're going to become a fat person from eating in this life. You're awesome.

It collapsed in the first 5 chapters! Sasuke is protected by his brother, but why should pig's feet survive? Danzo, Orochimaru, and Konoha themselves all have the Sharingan, so what reason does Pig Knot have to live? Will these people forget that pig's feet are in the hospital? Stop being funny! ! ! And pig's feet, someone would actually save him? Just dig out your eyes, right? You don't know where Danzo got the Sharingan in his hand, right? Finally, let's talk about a little bug. Before the genocide is over, except for the participants, who can come into contact with Uchiha, living or dead? So, what the hell is a pig's foot being treated for?

I'm totally convinced by this introduction. Uchiha Madara will always rub you when he annoys you. As an Uchiha, you should stand on the side of the family. Anyway, you have the same blood. It's best not to lick Konoha. As a time traveler, you should know what the top management of Konoha is like. You can cooperate with Orochimaru to transplant Hashirama cells or something like practicing sage mode. In the end, he became the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki who used force to suppress the ninja world, realize the unification of the ninja world, and achieve peace. After all, Hokage, everyone longs for peace. If you don't change anything and don't have a complete plan, then the protagonist will still be your master and kneel down, lick and eat Naruto, wait until death, and wait for Naruto to complete all this.

The plug-in is there, the conditions are there, but if you don't practice cultivation and become a fat person, what happens next? You still want to live, you still want to be fucked, you have no strength, you are thinking nonsense

The protagonist turned on the kaleidoscope at the age of 8, but he couldn't beat Sasuke who just opened magatama at the age of 6. Let Shen Nong do the reading.

He was still unwilling to practice for fear of death, so he slipped away! !

This book is well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

It's so disgusting. I was in a good mood and thought there was a book I could read, but it turns out, damn fat man, the rotten blood chakra eyes are just like a fifty-cent plug-in. Really, why are you torturing my soul and eyes

This article is very disturbing. Why is the protagonist a fat man? I don't discriminate against fat people in the real world. But with Uchiha's exquisite genes, you write a fat man. I read the comments saying that Sakura is dead. I really want to read it. I am really confused. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Chapter 90: Forced wisdom, just for Shui Wen. If you keep doing this, give up.

Uh-huh, it's very disgusting. Author, even if you are a fat man yourself, there is no need to write the protagonist as a fat man, right? It's a bit disgusting. After seeing this, I have no desire to read any more.

It's better for the protagonist to just die. Interference doesn't work, he doesn't eat enough, he's just a piece of trash. The protagonist is of no use after time travel, has changed nothing, and is still a coward. It's better not to travel through time, wasting a great talent. What's the use of such a person?

The protagonist is a coward Uchiha! I have never seen a protagonist who is extremely talented but is equally good at it! Just eat, eat, eat. Obito should have cut off the protagonist's head!

Why did you write Sakura to death? . Baihao Ying died like this

The writing was good at the beginning, but then he suddenly took the initiative to become fat and learned the secret technique of Qiudao. Does the secret technique require blood coordination? Also, don't write so many details of life. You are not Lu Xun and Lao She, and you don't have the skills to write daily life beautifully.

I didn't want to read it until I reached chapter 70. The book is full of protagonists, including Naruto and Tenten and the 12 Xiaoqiang. You didn't even write about it. Is that still the story of Naruto?

I ran away after reading the comments. They said they were too poisonous to try it.

Rubbish reply, bent on kneeling and licking Konoha

Follow your heart and follow your heart, that is, write bad books from your heart to cheat money.

Did you go to fill the main role and fill Konoha? , You've already opened the reincarnation eye, ,, can't you just be a little bit naughty and run away? Must lick

To be honest, it was quite interesting when I first started reading it. But after I saw the pork belly part, I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading more than ten chapters, I realized that the whole process was filled with the protagonist's self-pleasure nonsense.