The Creation of Emperor Wa in the Prehistoric Times

The article tests the poison [Biandan, prehistoric, invincible, calm] A short book review of Bianwen (please forgive me for the bad writing): First of all, I have to say that this is a fine book (the author has a great conscience). Although there are not many words, the main line is clear, the plot is reasonable (it connects the prehistoric plot very well without being toxic), the pace is a little faster, and the writing style is good (at least in the bianwen) (much better than Juntian Yunge) (the only two prehistoric novels are now eunuchs). The theme of prehistoric is what stood out to me among the many entertainment and game routines. It's refreshing, elegant and refined, refreshing. It also has a sense of contempt for the common people and some more classical Chinese passages. These are all plus points. Personally, I feel that the progress is a bit fast and it may be finished in less than 1 million words. I hope the author writes more. Top priority:Don't be a eunuch, otherwise Bianwen's food and fodder will be burned up. But there's no need to update too much, (I'm afraid the author will die from exhaustion) I hope it will be updated in the morning (maybe it's a dream). Finally, fellow Taoists: There are not many bianwens, just read them and cherish them. Big boost for the author, Oli!

I'm trying my best to type, and you guys are trying to create an atmosphere where this book won't hit the streets, okay? (●'◡'●)ﾉ❤

If the author writes this book well, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

Good book, highly recommended. It's finally not the Great Age of Martial Arts. The pig's feet created the human race. Before the Five Saints came out, he established the status of the human race in one fell swoop. He practiced using colorful stones to mend the sky, used his body to support the sky, and destroyed the Witch Clan with his own hands. The status of saint is worthy of the name. I finally saw a different ancient world. Although there are still some small flaws, but overall, it is very exciting. , Just the fighting writing is not exciting enough, but the author's writing style should gradually improve, hehe 😁 For the sake of letting me have a book to read, I will help you to brag about it. If you think it is good, help the book exist and let the author run away. But I am uneducated, and I don't know anything except good books.

A saint should be a person in the world, not a realm.

I, Hu Sanhan, am back again. I've been in a state of mind these past few days. I'm very sorry for not updating anymore. I'll update twice a day from today on. If I can't do it, I'll... , , Delete this comment. (▼ Plate▼#)

If this book is a hit, 90% of the time it's due to the author's failure to update it.

After reading Chapter 81, it was a little boring, and it was a novel about the supremacy of the human race. It was already decided, everything was the human race, and the human race was the general trend of the world. As long as you dare to go against the human race, you would be fighting against the saints and the heaven and the earth, and disaster would befall you. It was so embarrassing! You don't need to read the rest to know, there is no suspense anymore, the human race accounts for nine out of ten of the giants in the world!

It's awesome. It's not the content of this book that's bad, it's not the character issues of the protagonist and supporting characters, it's the author who drags it to death.

It's not easy to find a book that doesn't slander Nuwa, don't be a eunuch 😡

I hope the author's next book will be longer. This ancient novel is really well written and very smooth to read. Could it be too short?

I've read Chapter 80. The Three Pure Ones and the Two Saints of the West have not yet been born, and the human race has become the protagonist of the world! It won't matter if the Five Saints are born later! The six emperors and four gods of heaven are all from the human race! The human race is so awesome. I feel like this article has come to an end. There is nothing left to read.

Author, you have to hold on. One of your predecessors wrote about Shiji in the Great Desolation. He has stopped updating for more than a year, but he is still updating normally. Don't be afraid of being buried. Good books will naturally have a bright future.

What kind of wind blew the author out of the palace to make purchases?

If it's not black, Nuwa Empress must be raised and watched

Author, let's not be in a hurry, take your time, don't be too exhausted and go into the palace again.

Why did I seem to have seen you somewhere before? . . It was also a man who traveled through time and became Nuwa, and then everything changed. He even snatched away two of Donghuang Taiyi's brother's wives, and there were two of them, so they went to bed directly.

The author's spirit in heaven appeared

The word "He" is used throughout the whole text. Remove this word. It is in the third person. You cannot bring yourself into the book by looking at this word.

Author, I beg you, you must hold on at the critical moment.

The brushwork of Spring and Autumn Period, I have been chasing it for so long, and I have been lonely.

He's cheating again, shall we start? See more about the author? I will set a small goal first and then read it after finishing the book 🤓

This is a Hammer novel. It is purely telling a story. It doesn't even bother to tell the story. It's from a God's perspective.

BydAre you two the same person?

Please update. Please write better and update quickly.

Update, update master, don't cheat

Is it illegal to block people who write novels about foreigners? You can write whatever you want about messy relationships between men and women!