The Magic Empire Begins with Farming

I hope the author will change the protagonist's behavior to be more cautious. An elf who masters magic will be released casually without fear of others running away or being killed. When he encounters an assassin, he will be reckless. If he is strong, forget it, but it shows that he is a novice who has never fought before and does not have a count guard? Wouldn't it be better if the visitor was unkind and frightened away by shouting without any guards?

The legendary beast! ! !

The protagonist is very verbose and keeps treating the Middle Ages with modern laws and the like. . Sometimes it's really dramatic.

Emmm... How to put it. Although I am not a bookworm, but after seeing smart phones from Wenquxing, I am basically immune to any poisonous points. So, let's not talk about poison, let's talk about content. From the beginning to now, the fullness gradually decreases. Nowadays, the average author can tolerate being stuck at just over 2,000 words per person. The content should at least be fuller. There is no sense of being able to peek into something, but instead there is a sense of lack of resources. Farming literature, without rich people, things, things, maps, resources, history, and background, will look very empty. After all, it's not a cool article. Just go through the pictures and kill monsters to level up. Maybe it's also because of the popularity of Witches, but there is no rich content, so I can't watch it. I can only say that overall there is no problem. If you don't like it, please delete it😁

Is the protagonist too kind and reassuring to Vera? Someone came to your castle to steal something and you were caught. You took care of food and housing but not paid wages. You also told her about the staff and explained it to her patiently...

Not to mention anything else, you have traveled across a universe and you can just take the magic and runes from Earth and use them? ! Just use the barrier spell as soon as it comes up? ! What about playing house?

Could the author be too hasty in handling it? The collision of two ideas is handled a bit casually by the author. And some places are contradictory, such as modern equality of human rights, fair trade, and income according to work. This consciousness itself has no problem. The author uses modern concepts to formulate rules in one fell swoop, which is still acceptable even though he is a bit hasty. And I don't quite understand how the female characters are portrayed in it? Some plots really go against the character of the protagonist. Just like that mercenary lady, she can still receive a monthly salary after committing a crime through labor reform, and can still move around the town as she pleases? You don't have any legal provisions, so you are released on bail pending trial? If the protagonist clearly says that I am a lord, and I just want this person, because he is good-looking, because he does not obey me like other people, and he keeps looking for trouble, which is too new, then you can come to my house and directly support me and give me money every month. That will not be so uncomfortable. I feel like this is a bit both upright and upright! If we really treat everyone equally, everyone who goes to the protagonist's house to steal things can be sent to a labor camp and get a small monthly salary. No matter how much they can get, it will be great!

The article is full of catchphrases such as "wo*" and other hooligans. It is estimated that the author's level of education is not high.

[New book] [Collected] [Invested] [Tag] # # lord # magic # elves Looking forward to more performances from the supporting characters in the future [Poisonous Milk] ① The integration of modern and alien magic to build a new magic system? ② Economic and people's livelihood construction in the territory? Set up a magic academy with elves? ③ After showing his prominence, he was jealous of the king, leading to a struggle for imperial power? ④ After the establishment of human rights, explore together with the elves and resist unknown foreign enemies?

There are no ancient ruins, no multiple planes, no system cheats, no ancient evil invasions and epic disasters that occur once in a thousand years, and no gods and demons playing a big game of chess behind the scenes. Some are just one world with five continents, endless islands, floating islands, and underground worlds. The protagonist collides, transforms and creates a whole new world. I hope that the protagonist is a scheming hypocrite who speaks with great truth and behaves sanctimoniously but is actually a man who steals and prostitutes women. If he is not a real villain, his EQ is too low. He should be a hypocrite with high IQ and EQ. Don't deliberately make the protagonist too over-the-top. It's not good to be obscene and dark, and look ferocious and terrifying. It's not darkness for the sake of darkness, but everything is for survival. In many cases, you have to be cruel, insidious, cunning, despicable and shameless to survive in the cruel competition. No matter which world it is, the weak eat the strong and profit is paramount. Good old people will not live long because of their low IQ. Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. The undead, demons, elves, orcs, and angels are all badly written. There can be a female succubus from the nightmare tribe, and a siren goddess named Ocean Beloved who has been conceived for twenty years in a shell. Floating island winged humans, insect humans, various dinosaur-like, strange beasts, ferocious beasts, monsters of war, behemoths and sea beasts. Various magical animals, magical plants (plant elves), magical floating islands, oceans, and underground world animals and plants. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. Those who can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, and have the charm of mother and daughter together, those who are infatuated, gentle, generous, intellectual, and elegant, as well as those who are dark, sinister, and extremely paranoid and want to imprison and force the protagonist. Some women have multiple personalities, good and evil, good and bad. The emotional plot must have tension and impact, cold-blooded rationality to the extreme, heart-piercing unrequited love, and extremely paranoid and perverted liking. The weak ones annexed and conquered, while the powerful alliances attacked far and near, and formed a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carriers, and sail battleships are not suitable for aircraft carriers. They need to develop steam engines or magical arcane power or sea monsters and ocean monsters as the power to pull the ships. They can carry giant dragons, giant eagles, and giant bats as bombers. The air force's technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. Not only the Western magical and fantasy race, Warcraft, mythical and legendary creatures, but also ferocious beasts, giant beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas and various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels for creative inspiration. Also, the worldview must have depth and impact. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races. The protagonist can establish a number of comprehensive academies, including military, technology, agriculture, machinery, biology, medical, navy, administration, martial arts and magic academies, as well as a heroic arena (similar to the Roman Colosseum that can accommodate many spectators) for experts from all walks of life to compete on the stage. If you win three games in a row, you will be free of board and lodging fees, and you can recruit some good players. There is also a hero survival trial held every four years. A team of one hundred people and up to five people can survive in the wild wilderness by hunting monsters and collecting some valuable plants or other things. Points are assessed based on the value of the items and ranked based on the points. Live broadcasts of crystal magic can be recorded, and there are also viewing stations in the wild. The Hero Arena and the Hero Trial Field are competitive competitions between master heroes and are the favorite entertainment methods for ordinary people. Not only is it the selection of the master who finally wins the title of hero, it is also the most exciting entertainment activity in a boring and boring world. The viewing locations are all sold-out seats and there are also viewing points in the wild. The Hero Arena and the Hero Trial Field are competitive competitions between master heroes and are the favorite entertainment methods for ordinary people. It is not only the selection of the master who will eventually win the title of hero, but also the most exciting entertainment activity in a boring and boring world. Seat tickets are sold for viewing positions, and those famous characters will also produce some related figures and toys.

The character of the protagonist is a bit like the protagonist of a light novel, with advantages and disadvantages. For example, in the magic talent test section, there are too many psychological dramas with the clerk girl, which makes it feel cliche and boring. Moreover, the protagonist is also slow and unaware throughout the whole process, and there is no conflicting interaction between the two, which makes the girl's internal drama seem redundant.

Writing a book is not easy, don't read the comments. Write according to your own outline and ideas. Don't be anxious, don't finish it. Now that I have collected it, I will share it with you. I hope you can stick to it. Come on,

It seems like he was very awesome in his previous life, but in fact he is just a rookie and has no golden fingers in this life.

Unsightly, slightly poisonous weed. . . . . There are very few mage articles nowadays.

The book is good. I don't know how to write a book, but when I read what you write, sometimes I feel like I'm reading a running account. I hope this aspect can be optimized, the content more vivid, and the emotions richer. I don't dare to say that I will definitely become a great god, but a small god is fine.

Farewell, I don't understand what the book has to do with Mo Fa