Swallowed Star: Transmigrating Across the Heavens

Chapter Two is toxic; why are you arguing with the system?

It would be great if the dialogue between the protagonist and the system could be shorter; it's not only tedious but also childish!

I love all books about Swallowed Star. I hope the author continues writing!

I was chatting with the system... And I died from the poison.

I can't stand it anymore! The author writes about devouring, but then makes the whole thing feel like it's written by idiots. A World Lord breaking through to Immortality has a commotion comparable to a Venerable breaking through to Universe Lord, yet not a single alien Universe Lord came to investigate. Every time there's such a huge commotion after a breakthrough, nobody comes to check.

Hong is Teng Qingshan? What is that? Reincarnated into the Devouring Star Kingdom, he's completely unrecognizable.

Newbies often have the same problem: they can talk for ages about even a decent system. Is that really interesting?

This isn't writing a book; it's just retelling the contents of these books.

The Great Perfection stage of Panlong is equivalent to the initial stage of Immortality, where the Immortal fully masters a system of laws. The Great Perfection stage is the same. The Venerable fully masters higher-level laws; Panlong doesn't even involve the laws of space and time. The difference in combat power between Immortals is enormous, practically incalculable.

It doesn't engage in any battles of geniuses from the universe, nor does it put on airs. The author can take a look at Tomato's Strongest Myth. It's unacceptable that it's not even as good as another book from a few years ago!