Simplifying Cultivation, Starting with Devouring

The author should take a look at what they wrote.

Publishing only 20-something chapters? How little confidence do you have in your novel?

Chapter 27 already features VIP 1P; this is the first time I've seen this.

You've written so many installments of *Swallowed Star*, and they're getting worse and worse. Every single one is a "trash-to-hero" story; the protagonist can't function without a system. *Swallowed Star* is a world of geniuses, and personally, I don't think it's suitable for a system-based story. Even in a system-based story, the system is best used as a support with little presence.

My understanding wasn't quite there, so I had to go back to school and start over.

Another one arrived, time to keep raising them, waiting patiently →_→

Please don't abandon this project; several of them have already died while I was raising them.

I just started reading. The simplified martial arts at the beginning are indeed good, but the author's values ​​are a bit skewed. The universe of Swallowed Star is vast, but where are the other people who know about it? On one hand, he talks about the Earth's crisis, and on the other hand, he happily makes money with zero-cost secret manuals.

Of the four clones, only one is useful; the purpose of the other three is unknown.

I felt the most minor character was the best, the second best was the only one, but this one is a step down, sigh.