Hyperdimensional Fantasy Realm

As a long-time fan of the author, I couldn't help but want to say a few words when I saw how miserable this book was. First of all, the main plot of this book. At present, it seems that it should be online games plus reality plus fantasy (or superpowers?). The protagonist's memory is retrieved as he encounters special things. However, considering the four consecutive reversals in the latter part of the previous book, this has yet to be considered. Then let's talk about the advantages. The writing is clear, and there are very few wrong sentences and typos. I read it twice and found less than five. After I pointed it out, the author corrected it, which shows that he has a good attitude. There is no routine. In this genre of online games that is badly played by routines, a player can choose three professions instead of one. The integration of open world and unlimited flow can be regarded as a highlight setting. The world view is huge and has not yet been reflected. However, judging from the author's previous book, the two books should have the same world view. I also saw several characters and easter eggs that seemed to be in the old book. As a long-time fan, it was very comfortable to read. The character setting is clean and scalable. All the characters currently appearing have been labeled. There are two out of three tsunderes and so on. But aside from these, everyone has their own story, and their personality is not single on the surface (there is a chapter in the previous book) I haven't seen this extra chapter yet?) The character's personality will change with the plot, and other characters can't be seen yet, but the protagonist has changed a lot from the beginning to the present because of other people, and it's more like watching a living person rather than a rigid setting. In terms of jokes, there are really many jokes in this book. If you look carefully, there are jokes in almost every chapter. There are no random jokes like the previous book. The jokes in this book all fit the plot. As for the fighting, it looks very graphic, and the author seems to describe the big scenes better than the small ones. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. The author of the first few copies seems to be trying to write a pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot (the message seems to have said so), but it seems really embarrassing. It seems more comfortable without such plots in the later chapters. There are too many foreshadowings and pitfalls, and the filling speed is too slow. As a result, most people quit without even having the patience to fill in the pits. Perhaps this is also the reason for the low popularity. (Although it does feel very powerful when filling it out) The lack of direct pleasure is fatal in online articles. It can be seen from the author's "Nightmare Anecdotes" that the author is better at storytelling rather than pure pleasure. The description of the supporting role is insufficient. Although the description of the main character is perfect, there is no other foil, which also lacks the excitement. Then there is my personal shortcoming. When I looked at the character column, I thought it was a harem, but it turned out that it developed step by step towards party struggle. In the end, why was there no emotional plot at all? Or haven't you started yet? The plot develops slowly, but the update speed is too slow! The daily update is only 4,000, but now most of them start at 6,000, and there will be more updates during holidays. (The author seems to only add updates after the game is shipped) Also, the younger sister's role is too little! As a younger sister, I strongly request that the younger sister's role be increased! Finally, to summarize, you have to be patient when reading this book, and you have to read it with your head in mind, because many details will play a vital role in the subsequent plot. If you can connect the plot and foreshadowing together, it will be really enjoyable when you finally unravel it. I hope the author can work hard and look forward to your series of universes!

Once the author becomes popular, I will become a long-time fan.

The protagonist's biological sister is a bit, how should I put it, if you read this novel as a Japanese comic, you won't feel embarrassed, but if you read this novel as a Chinese comic, you will feel a little embarrassed?

Come on author. I haven't seen such good game writing in a long time!

When I read Chapter 23, I couldn't stand it. The book is very thoughtful, but the pace is too slow. It feels uncomfortable. It's not the progress of the plot, but the feeling brought by the entire writing style, the description of the battle scene, the background introduction, and even the feeling of upgrading. Some places are too thin, and some places are too thick, so it feels too... It's slow. There are too many battle planning ideas, and the pace is slow. There are a lot of words in the background explanation, but there are too many hidden things, and there is nothing to explain, so it feels slow. The protagonist upgrades very quickly, but except for the recovery of blood and magic, the difference after the upgrade is not reflected, so the value of the upgrade cannot be felt, and the result still feels slow. The simple summary is: the direction of the detailed description is biased, so the story seems very boring, giving people the illusion that everything is slow. Irresponsible suggestion: Rigorousness and refreshing are not contradictory. If the plan is rigorous, then the protagonist's IQ will be online, the other party will be stunned, and the reaction will be well described, then the readers will naturally feel happy. The red flowers are all lined with green leaves. There are green leaves, but just saying there is a green leaf over there, there is no difference between this and not. If there is a change, write down the difference. Otherwise, it will be the same as no change, and you will naturally not feel the progress, so it feels very slow, which is actually boring. Come on, look forward to the author's next book.

The two updates are not enough to watch, wait until you are fattened up before killing them

Seriously, is it really good to change settings at any time? (｀Δ´)! What is the balance of the game? You are talented, you have strong skills, you have advantages, are you an ordinary person? Having money can be considered an advantage! This game can be fixed with bugsヽ('ー`)ノ

Seeing how miserable you are, I happen to have no books to read, so I'll give you four a day╮(─▽─)╭

I heard that this book is quite good. I want to read it, but I don't dare to read it because there are too few words. Collect first, then nourish

In fact, I rarely post. This book is because I feel that the author is really thoughtful in writing the book, but it is not popular enough, so I suddenly had the idea to write something. To be honest, the author's writing style is very logical, and the descriptions of the characters' movements and expressions are relatively natural. So far, there are no big bugs in the plot, but I was a little impatient to read the fourth chapter. Of course, since I guess the later parts of the book will be more exciting, I will read it slowly. What's the problem? If you want to say it's not that exciting, the first game protagonist challenges the leaderboard, which is awesome, and he wins. Isn't this even more awesome? But it just didn't make me excited, and it wasn't very satisfying to watch ~ Then because the second place "Pale An" (sorry for not finding that word) thought he was pretty good, so he changed the game. In fact, I felt that it was a bit unconvincing. After all, the first place was still there... But let's not consider this. After all, another game is the main line. It's better to change the game and get to the point quickly. It can also be seen from the three professions that the author has laid a foreshadowing. The protagonists are different (others should only have one profession). Although I know that the protagonist is an all-round master and can nb everything, except for the archer, he casually clicked two. I feel a bit inconsistent. A real high-level player is more serious about playing games, and he must be careful about the choice of profession. Then let's talk about officially entering the game. There are also slap-in-the-face plots, such as grabbing monsters and killing them. I just read this and decided to stop and comment. In fact, this is a plot that makes readers a little emotional. Somehow, this plot just passed so inexplicably. "The protagonist snatched the monsters back and killed the player who grabbed the monsters." This is probably the feeling of not being involved in combat... I feel that the author will read the book review section. In fact, I have so many words, without any constructive opinions, just a review? Make complaints? I don't know what it is either. In fact, this book should really be writeable. I have the logical ability and the language description ability. I just need to be patient and continue reading ~ Or is it a slow start?