The Call of the Old Days

Keep it up! The protagonist's ability is really interesting. He can possess other bodies after death and gain the original owner's memories. If I die ten thousand times, I can become a polymath; if I die countless times, I can directly become an information unifier. I suggest that once he's fully developed, he should use memes to prove his path and become the God of Chaotic Information. Information is the cornerstone of success.

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I got hooked after seeing the time travel stories.

The beginning is off-putting. Allen, Allen, Allen my ass! I don't understand why the protagonist is supposed to be a time traveler but is actually more like a native.

Novels still need to be enjoyable, regardless of whether you're a newbie or an old-timer.

... This is just my personal opinion. The author's writing style, world-building, and story structure are all of a very high standard. However, I think there's a big problem: aside from those who are into the established lore, the current start seems quite difficult. I think it's best to start later, or even make it a little easier.

My recent writings are completely incoherent; I have no idea what they're about. They've just inserted terrible romantic subplots into perfectly good stories.

I really want to complain about the color scheme on the cover. 🤫