Weapons Dealer in the Wizarding World

Looking at this work, you can discover something. The author of this book has not yet learned the essence of the author, water. The current chapter could actually be better. You can write more plots and foreshadowings.

Author, my investment this month is gone, and I will definitely give it to you next month 😃😃😃🌹

I read Chapter 8 and saw the barbarian attack part. I think the author should train some troops when the population increases, such as knights, shield warriors, marksmen, etc., And also let them cooperate with each other After all, the protagonist, as a lord, can also have some of his own private troops

I also want to travel through time! I have 100 coins and I want to buy a town 😁

The creativity is good, but the literary love is still a bit lacking. It feels flat and uneventful. Like reading a flow of literature, 😰

I just read the first two chapters. The currency is dinar. Is it a riding and cutting system?

Okay... Is this the end?

Chapter 19: The Limit

It's a bit like a business development brochure. It's too dry. Proper water is healthier. Sun's manufacturing also made me complain about incompetence.

It's pretty good for newcomers. Although it needs some ancient bridges to support it, at least the author has a relatively reasonable discussion of his own worldview and economic, military and other systems, which he hopes to maintain.

The story of a weapons dealer called a sage, a beautiful killer and a time-traveling lord

Too many words look tiring,,, wrap more lines,,,

I strongly agree that the whole story is not just about the protagonist, or there is no protagonist, but different supporting characters in each time period. The protagonist is the main line, and there are many different supporting characters. There are no ancient ruins, no multiple planes, no system cheats, no ancient evil invasions and epic disasters that occur once in a thousand years, and no gods and demons hiding behind the scenes to play a big game of chess. Some are just one world with five continents, endless islands, floating islands, and underground worlds. Establish a comprehensive college to cultivate talents, magic and martial arts, scientific research and alchemy, animal and plant cultivation, military administration, military combat, science and engineering, literature, art and architecture. The protagonist is created by the collision, transformation and fusion of a whole new world. It is nonsense to kill everyone just after time travel. It is normal to be completely abused by the natives. It is also nonsense to overwhelm the natives with IQ. The protagonist is just an ordinary person and may not be able to outplay the natives. It is just that online novels are all brainless and forced. To reduce intelligence, the protagonist has no strength, no power, and no experience. The only advantage is that modern people are well-informed. The strong-mouthed king is good at deception on paper, but has poor practical ability. He has a good eye but a weak hand. The only advantage is that he is thick-skinned and good at fooling girls. It's normal to have a difficult start. It's bullshit to have a domineering little brother come to worship you. But you can pick up powerful girls and give birth to powerful, gifted and excellent sons and daughters, and cultivate talented apprentices (little brothers) to build up your power. You natives can bully me now, but I will let my wife, lover, son, daughter, and student apprentices deal with you. I hope that the protagonist is a scheming hypocrite who speaks with great truth and behaves sanctimoniously but is actually a man who steals and prostitutes women. If he is not a real villain, his EQ is too low. He should be a hypocrite with high IQ and EQ. Don't deliberately make the protagonist too over-the-top. It's not good to be obscene and dark, and look ferocious and terrifying. It's not darkness for the sake of darkness, but everything is for survival. In many cases, you have to be cruel, insidious, cunning, despicable and shameless to survive in the cruel competition. No matter which world it is, the weak eat the strong and profit is paramount. Good old people will not live long because of their low IQ. Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. The undead, demons, elves, orcs, and angels are all badly written, but there can be a female succubus from the nightmare clan, and a siren goddess named Ocean Beloved who has been conceived in a shell for twenty years. Floating island winged humans, insect humans, various dinosaur-like, strange beasts, ferocious beasts, monsters of war, behemoths and sea beasts. Various magical animals, magical plants (plant elves), magical floating islands, oceans, and underground world animals and plants. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. Those who can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, and have the charm of mother and daughter together, those who are infatuated, gentle, generous, intellectual, and elegant, as well as those who are dark, sinister, and extremely paranoid and want to imprison and force the protagonist. Some women have multiple personalities, good and evil, good and bad. The emotional plot must have tension and impact, cold-blooded rationality to the extreme, heart-piercing unrequited love, and extremely paranoid and perverted liking. The weak annex and conquer

I feel that the author is not good enough, the early development should be dozens of chapters, add some small events, and then start external activities after reaching a hundred chapters, the book is still good👌😃😃

I ran out of books to read and found an old book by the author. Surprisingly, it was okay! Although the opening routine is clichéd and the description of the emotional line is stretched, the settings such as No Hao Hao are not bad. It is a pity that no one talks and it is quite deserted.

Why not just build a steam engine from the beginning? 🤔

Let me post it as the ninth post. It's really well written. I've already invested in it. If it's put on the shelves, will it explode?

Let me ask a question, is it possible to use traps such as horse traps to deal with knights? Our country has the richest experience in dealing with cavalry in ancient times. There are always one or two methods that can be used to eliminate terrain factors, right?