Original Beginning

The writing is not bad, but it underestimates the cruelty and rationality of uncivilized primitive people. They only rely on diplomacy and bluffing to survive. Moreover, the protagonist is too womanly. He has reached the Stone Age and still doesn't want to kill people? Are you kidding? If you want to put it another way and say that it is to save more manpower, then that is acceptable, but simply being soft-hearted is too ridiculous. In a world without civilization, do you want to talk about civilization with others? What about lying to yourself? The development is too slow. There are only a dozen or so people on the shelves. Safety is not guaranteed. You can only develop if you are alive. Relying on support from other tribes is always unreliable. The summary is to look at the code of conduct of the Stone Age from a modern perspective. It is out of touch with the times and is too idealistic.

The story is obviously told well, but some system must be added suddenly. .

In fact, the original text mostly writes about farming, domestication and trade, the dissemination and inheritance of culture, the popularization of nature's principles and how natural culture combines religious beliefs to enlighten human beings, so as to avoid religious beliefs that blind people's wisdom and blind people, and the integration of national origin and culture through war. Handicraft technology can be developed to some extent, but industrial technology must be taken slowly and cannot be relied on from the beginning. It will really feel like a cold weapon battlefield suddenly rushed out of a group of heavy tanks and armored vehicles.

The original technology collection will be appropriately referred to 1: I have watched the videos of Bei Ye, De Ye, and the Australian guy many times, so there is no need to recommend the ones in their videos. 2: It is feasible. For example, you said you can make a sword. Are the required ores, temperature conditions, and technical conditions feasible in the world of this book? 3: This post only discusses technology and nothing else. Everyone is welcome to speak

Personal thoughts, please don't have a female protagonist

Big cheers for the author! ! Come on! ! Come on! ! A good book is worth reading =͟͟͞͞└(┐^o^)ⱶ˝

It's pretty good so far (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Although the protagonist has traveled through time, there is no golden finger. If there is one, it is "Wild Survival Complete Collection". The protagonist tries everything step by step and slowly makes it, which is very realistic. Another thing is that the protagonist has a good mentality and quick wit. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future!

The first dozen or so chapters are well written, with the freshness and sense of achievement of the original novel. However, the description of characters and social structure in the later chapters is obviously not up to par. They always try to use clever methods to expand their power, and gradually lose the taste of the original novel. The thinking is also forced to use modern interpersonal communication models. And in terms of production activities, regardless of whether machinery or animal power is involved, large-scale production is always the first choice to reduce costs. With only manpower, a tribe of more than a dozen people may have a food crisis even if they fish and hunt all day long. How can they still have time to make large quantities of pottery and iron? If it were really like this, in ancient times, a village with hundreds of people would not be able to get dozens of people out of work, and then pretend to be iron cavalry and push it aside? Although novels are always the epitome of the times, and history is always modern history, it is understandable that you don't like killing people, but the more you read it later, the more it looks like a black-tech urban novel. A group of primitive people all have modern thinking, and like black-tech novels, they rely on gold fingers to maintain logic. Forget it, save a few tickets, and slip away.

It is still very good and worth reading. There should be a lot of people expelled by various tribes in the book. These people can be recruited to join. Weapons are the most effective protection. Brainwashed and organized to annex other small tribes. The threat of the alliance tribe and the superior tribe should not be underestimated.

Some personal suggestions 1. Although this book is an imaginary world, there are some abnormalities, such as the bacteria and viruses on the vines, wild crops that have great value without selection (such as sugar cane, the sugar content of sugar cane is low if it has not been selected, and it is far from what it is today. Many crops have been selected since ancient times to have their current value). I hope you can improve it. 2. The complex geographical location is also a flaw in many original articles. I personally suggest that you can draw some hand-drawn maps, such as the "Camp Chapter", "Thousand-bill Island Chapter" and "World Chapter" (crazy hint), to facilitate readers' understanding. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. Finally, cheers for the author! Nowadays, the original novels of Wilderness are declining, but the one I picked up by chance makes people feel comfortable. Personally, I think quality is more important than the quantity of updates....

Do you want recommendation votes for the author? As long as you don't supervise me and I work hard every day 🙂🙂 Can you give me a character named Nanke? Thank you

The writing style is unconventional, the plot is innovative, and the subject matter is exquisite, but there are no investment opportunities. Collected.

I would like to ask if there will be a female protagonist for the male protagonist? Will there be a wife?

It's very well written, I don't know why no one reads it 😂️

Come on, write more, and review the book again

Why should we keep the primitive world a secret? Wouldn't it be better to cooperate with the country to develop it?

If you like this kind of book, vote as long as you have a vote, and strive to make the book better.

It's interesting to read the introduction, it's my favorite, and the author also has a completed novel before. I believe he won't go to the palace, so I will keep it for now. I will come to support the author from time to time 😁 ps: I feel that this author is a very serious person, I hope the author can survive.

I think it would be better to go back to modern times without my nanny.

Does this book have a female protagonist? I haven't finished watching it yet, but the protagonist is not interested in any female characters so far, so I can't say whether there is a female protagonist.

I hope the author can keep writing and write well.

Full subscription support, but you have to take care of yourself for a while, don't go into the palace 😂😂

If you want to smelt, you must also smelt copper. Tie doesn't have that condition at all.

How many words does the scholar plan to write? I will calculate when to start killing 😁

I'm really sorry, but when I saw the part where the protagonist visited the Luna Tribe, I just couldn't stand it anymore. It was really too poisonous. In order to ensure the smoothness of reading, the author deliberately avoids many writing difficulties, that is, the confrontation and conflict between characters. The actions of Qi'er and Yueshou are completely inconsistent with their own character settings, as well as the change in mentality brought about by the encounter with the so-called Son of God. The scene where the three met in the tribe gave me the feeling that they were not three complete characters. The relative relationship between the protagonist and Qi Er has been constantly changing since the previous article. It can be seen that the author tried his best to reflect the behavioral changes brought about by Qi Er's relationship change, but in this regard, I can only say that Wen Ai is really not enough! In addition, the protagonist's image creation is even worse. He never seems to have a real sense of crisis, not to mention that he can occasionally go back to modern times, which has nothing to do with it. First of all, his trust seems cheap. Why can he trust Qi'er and Yamada so much without any restraints? His attitude towards the leakage of technology is also very strange. His confidence comes from his knowledge system, but according to the industrial development from scratch, the birth of iron and bronze ware was the first wave of productivity and armaments, and the second wave was gunpowder and steam engines. However, the protagonist seems to have concluded that he can develop fire energy surely and quickly, thus surpassing the Luna Ministry with crude iron weapons. . . Where does this confidence come from (~_~;)?

There are traces of Weijie Inn. Weijie Inn was 404ed. I think the biggest reason is that it involves the official, military, police, party and government. The investigation was very strict before. Although I don't know if I can write it now, I still hope that the author will be more careful and cautious. I hope this book will not repeat the same mistakes again and will be completed smoothly.