Son of Darkness

. . . . The plot is OK, but the knowledge points are messy. Shadow Ball fights the normal system, Meditation Fire Fist, Sword Dance Dragon Wave Dragon Star Cluster, Hu Di fights the Hot Monkey because the fighting attribute is very tricky. Gotha Duck uses water-based skills to grind down Longlong Rock's HP. Longlong Rock's special defense HP is basically gone. Gotha Duck's water-type four times restraint is basically gone.

I would like to make a suggestion, if the protagonist is really Banmu's son, I think he has a bit of affection for the protagonist. I don't think even Banmu would be without the kind of care and teaching that a father has for his son, right? Considering Sakaki's character, we can actually add some subtle concerns and vague dismay at his son's good performance, which may make the character a little fuller. Now this is completely the way my superiors deal with their subordinates, which makes me always wonder if my son's identity is fake, or is it a foreshadowing?

Why change the messy settings? I have endured the first-level god Arceus, and I have endured the third-level god of space and time! God damn Guraton, Rayquaza, and Kyogre are the third level gods? ? Mew is a fourth-level god? Do you understand the fantasy beast? The most outrageous thing is that the 3 lake gods are level 4 gods, and xyz is a level 5 god? ? ? Have you actually seen Pokémon? Now that you're done, can you say again that all the other mythical beasts can be recovered? 🤔🤔🤔 Why are Wind King, Lugia, Sun and Moon Necrozma and Black and White Dragon all champion Pokémon? It can still be recovered by humans. I am speechless! Is it okay to just ask him to quit? Waste of time😅😅😅

Author, can the conversation between the pig's trotter and the elf be divided into sections so that it can be more comfortable to watch?

I'm confused. The protagonist only has one friend so far. It's too fake. Besides, don't write everyone as hostile, okay?

The Ankylosaurus is the quasi-god of Alola, right?

What to say. . . Looking forward to the next one, this one can only be said to be readable. The setting is great, the plot is okay, and the details are terrible. There are quite a lot of conflicts in many places, and then there are a lot of bugs in the simplest skill learning and attribute restraint, and I haven't checked the information. The most profound one is. . . I remember that in the evolutionary chain of mosquito-repellent frogs, isn't it true that only the mosquito-repellent frog king has rainfall properties? Why does the protagonist have rainfall properties from the mosquito-repellent tadpoles to the later evolutions? . .

Strength persuades me to retract the article. I voted for Cathy on the earth at the beginning. I can bear it. The rain is fast and swimming frogs can bear it. Mosquitoes and tadpoles have all said goodbye to the rain.

After meditation, the flame fist is so powerful that the author is extremely poisonous.

. . . Casey is not a special-ops player? You give it so much physical skill.

There are too many typos. Can't you correct it from scratch?

Also, the author's timeline is a bit confusing. It's many years before the plot begins. Wu Neng has not left, Xiaozhi and Xiaomao have not grown up, and the Champion King has not yet matured! There should be a few more elves! ! !

After reading a few chapters... Casey's triple attack and Gotha Duck's teleportation are a bit outrageous. The author is just pure YY.

I want to say that the protagonist's pet does not belong to an agent? Why are the skills basically physical attacks and telekinesis not included? 😂

New authors, please be patient. That doesn't work, this doesn't work, that doesn't work. Can you write a book yourself?

The characteristic of Mosquito Repellent Repellent Swimmer is to store water/humidity, and the hidden characteristic is leisure and ease.

Author, you have made many punctuation errors in many places.

After reading the first few pictures, the author asked Casey to use meditation on a daily basis, but among the skills, only one awakening power is special attack, and the others are all physical attacks. I don't understand why the author is not going to evolve at level 31. Is the author going to go to heaven? Or is the author playing games that do not distinguish between special attacks, physical attacks, and skill versions? Strength persuades him to quit.

Can the author put the quotation marks correctly?

Let the author open a post about the current elf.

What the hell is going on in the early stage, when one exchange gives you two eggs with the potential to be kings? The reward for first place is just like a king! Whether you are on Athena or Nazi, where do you get the points? The Rockets are so awesome, why not Jianguo?

The protagonist was strong from the beginning and felt boring. The plot is too idealistic!

The author can read the previous chapters by himself. . . The combat power of the quasi-king is really eaten by you. Except for the occasional elf talent, it is basically gone. You said that elite high-level elves also have the possibility of advancing to the king level. The captain of Team Rocket can only go one step further when he reaches the king level. What about the quasi-king? Is it so easy to reach the Heavenly King level? Your qualification enhancement potion only upgrades the Heavenly King to a Quasi-King of Heaven. Can others jump from Elite to Advanced to a Quasi-King of Heaven? . . Then the protagonist changed to two king-level elves. As a result, the entire game reward was actually with the potential of a quasi-king. . . If I were an exchange clerk, wouldn't it be okay if I sold the information and killed the protagonist? . .

It is recommended not to read it with your brain in mind, there are too many mistakes in the knowledge about Pokémon.

If there was no system, this novel would be very good.

The level division of this mythical beast is a bit strange. Phoenix King is the champion level...

Is this because the strength has grown too fast? After 70 chapters, I am already at level 57. There are more than 850 chapters in total.

The writing is really messy. The previous setting of the trial island was a trial for newcomers, but later the author forgot about it and reset it again. It became a trial for squadron leader to be promoted to captain. The key point is that it has not explained why the protagonist participated in a trial that only squadron leader can participate in. What do people think of such a serious background setting error? And can the system points and Rockets points be renamed? They are all points and it's easy to get confused!

After reading only a few chapters, I realized that the author had a lot of secondary assumptions. All kinds of balance. Come on, of course. I think the author will have to check the information next time he writes. The first few chapters are all wrong. Although the second set is okay, you can't let them learn moves that they can't learn. I don't remember the attribute restraint. If things get better later, I will subscribe

This novel is worth reading, but it's not really a very good one. I'll give it a read when I'm short on books. There are a few problems: 1. The male protagonist feels more like a bad character to me. Coming out of Team Rocket from Darkness Rising is not a problem, but the problem is after Rise. In the early stage, there is no resource and there is no way. I can accept it by catching elves and trading with Team Rocket for points. It is also okay to exchange the enemy's elves in the middle and late stages. However, there is no shortage of resources in the middle and late stages. Let's keep the wild elves as a family. It was very uncomfortable to exchange it. The double standard was trying to catch the disaster beast, and what happened later 2. The timeline was confusing, the characteristics were not checked clearly, and the cries of the elf details were not correct. The ups and downs of the protagonist were too rigid in terms of the plot. There were too many elves in the protagonist elf group, which led to some personalized descriptions of the elves in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, only Hu Di and Dou Long were left with some personality. The others basically only appeared during training or eating.