
Elf: Become a Trainer by Learning Ninjutsu
精灵:从学习忍术开始成为训练家
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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505Chapters
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People who use Riolu to do bad things are like using cuties to poach, just like using guide dogs to bite people in real life, it is simply impossible!
Poison Testing Pioneer
I haven't read a few chapters, but like other readers, you have chosen the wrong elf. Elves like Riolu, Cady, Little Yorkie, and Detective Mouse all have righteous hearts, and it is impossible for them to accompany you to do bad things, or even kill people. At the beginning, you should choose Commander Cleaver, Sickle Helm, Iron Claw Lobster, Flying Mantis, etc. If not, choose Big Mouth Bat, Rice Spoon Snake, Mongoose Chop, Bad Frog, and other centipedes.
Shouldn't Mudun be Bulbasaur?
Isn't Riolu rare? Any killer organization would give a newcomer a Riolu with good characteristics and high talents? Author: Have you watched Pokémon? The setting of Ninjutsu is also messy. I have read a book that writes about Ninjutsu like you, but others are much better than others.
If the protagonist doesn't learn the art of transformation, shadow clones and illusions to increase his functionality and make it easier to complete tasks, but instead learns fire escape, is he trying to compete with the elves in terms of output? I don't understand.
I really can't stand it anymore. The setting of chakra alone can put people off. The setting of chakra is that you must first possess chakra and then use chakra refining technique to refine it. Instead of practicing chakra refining technique, you can have chakra. There will be more pitfalls later. The protagonist's chakra will dry up after using the three-body technique. Wouldn't that mean he is about to die? Is there really no danger in running out of chakra? Yamato building a house is like not sleeping for more than ten days. Did Tsunade just ignore it after running out of chakra and eating like crazy? We must know that the amount of chakra is linked to mental energy and physical energy. Which one can make a person healed if the mental energy or physical energy is used up?
You can take a look at the official stuff. Choosing Riolu is a total failure. If you are going to have a protagonist who will harm others and not benefit yourself, why choose a Pokémon that is impossible to get along with the protagonist?
After reading about 30 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. First: The worldview and hierarchy the author gave me was completely confusing. Also, the elf level of 50 is a bit too low to be considered a king. It feels like there is no difficulty at all. Second: Comparison between the organization's hierarchy and personnel strength. There are 9 levels in total. Not counting the white level at the beginning, there are 8 levels in total, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, blood, and black. The boy at the beginning has the power of the green level king. Later I skipped a chapter and looked at the levels after the orange level. The orange level is already the pinnacle mission of the elite, and the green level is the king level. How to calculate the level of combat power? Blue and purple direct champion? His blood is as black as Uncle Liu's. What kind of tasks do you have to take and what level of people do you have to kill to level up? How can you, a killer organization, be considered an underground organization if you are so arrogant? Third: It's just some resource elves and the like, basically just give them casually. I won't go into details about this, it has no core of dark style at all, it's just a winery with the skin of a killer organization. I have only read about 30 chapters. It may or may not be better in the later chapters . Interested book friends can continue reading.
Hot knowledge: Creatures with brains are 100% awake when suffocated. No matter how dead they sleep, they will wake up instantly. Also, you are really magical, try it yourself, will you suffocate if you bury your head in the pillow? No one in this world can suffocate himself to death without the help of external force.
I feel that it would be better and more reasonable to replace the first elf Riolu with another more common elf such as Arm Strength. After all, Riolu is a relatively rare elf. It is a bit unreasonable to give a killer organization to a newcomer. What kind of organization is this? So rich.
So poisonous. Do you understand the background of elves and Naruto? I started writing novels. This is the author of the unscrupulous manufacturers producing unscrupulous products. How did chakra appear? I didn't even understand the characteristics of elves and so on, so I wrote them randomly.
To be honest, I didn't even read it. The introduction persuaded me to quit. Ninjutsu is too ridiculous. In Naruto, the ninjutsu is used to fight humans. Humans use ninjutsu to control fire, water, etc. But the elves are born with it. They still need to load the template. Is there a big difference between returning dragon fire and big character explosion? The stitching is too ridiculous.
Is it true that you don't think about whether it's your fault that it's almost half a million words and it's still not popular?
Alas, as a killer, when I had the opportunity to capture high-level elves, I actually let him go instead of selling them. They are worthless, right? It's very funny. Won't the killer organization take them? There are also organizations that specialize in snatching elves.
After reading about thirty chapters, I feel like it doesn't have much to do with Pokémon. If I replace the Pokémon around the protagonist with something else, it might be able to go on smoothly.
Three golden chapters, I died in the first chapter
The third book is dark trash, trash within trash, some messy stuff that cannot be written in depth.
I would like to ask if there is no transformation technique among the three body techniques? Why use a disguise mask?
Ah, I thought it was a Naruto fairy tale. . .
After reading the first chapter, I decisively gave up. The setting in the first chapter was extremely toxic, and it will probably become even more toxic later on.
Illusion? The plot dropped immediately after it was officially released. It can be said that nearly a dozen chapters have nothing to do with the PM article. They include undercovers, wealthy families, infighting, and price wars. If I hadn't read the previous chapters, I really doubted whether I was reading the PM article.
. . . I don't think it's Elf writing, it's just a joke, 88
The body-blinking technique is generally something that only Jonin can learn, so you have been directly promoted to D-level. There are only a few people in D-level. Only the three-body art is classified as D-level, and the others are all C-level or above.
I really like this kind of protagonist who benefits himself at the expense of others, but the author, you used your brain when you wrote it. There are a lot of typos, and you didn't change them even after we pointed them out.
I can't stand it anymore. Zi Gongxiang's anime will cut your throat at every turn.
Are you sure you don't want a female lead, author?
I have read over 200 chapters. Is there a female protagonist in this novel? If you don't give the heroine, at least give her a Gardevoir or a Menus. No matter how bad it is, it's okay to give her a Felo Meizi or Sister Mizui.