One Piece: Devouring Devil Fruits

The author's ability to write fruitful and thoughtful ideas is very good. I personally thought of some of them and hope to give the author some inspiration. The fruit ability in this article has the ability to capture. I don't know whether the fruit ability can be captured after developing the ability. It is recommended that the author not write about capturing the specific fruit ability. I personally think it is a bit messy and does not match the reported naval capabilities. There are too many combat abilities in the later stage, and there may be errors or some confusion. 1. It is recommended that the author capture substances such as devil fruit energy after fighting with the ability user, increase the area/number of people covered by the halo ability, and increase the upper limit of the ability of the devil fruit before awakening or after awakening (similar to increasing the area of ​​the barrier fruit). 2. After the ability is awakened (there is a certain probability) (related to the development level of the previous ability user), the ability is taken away and given to people close to oneself. Having said so much, I hope it will open up the author's mind and provide more refinement 🙂.

It's not all forced by life to become a pirate. Now that living conditions are so good, aren't there a lot of gangsters and gangsters? Why should I work hard when I can get rich easily? I'm a pirate, traveling around the world with a machete, controlling other people's life and death with money, women, and it's exciting to watch people kneel on the ground and beg.

The safest place to start in the world of pirates is definitely the navy.

The World Government doesn't care whether there are overlords in the navy, and the navy itself doesn't care. Don't think that having overlords means you are born to be a hegemon. Even the Warring States Period has overlords. The plaque hanging in the office says "Justice reigns over the world."

It's too complicated, with too many narrations, but other than that it's okay

The first 13 chapters made me vomit blood and I couldn't hold it any longer. It was like changing a few things and writing them in different ways, and kept writing! Just for the sake of word count, you can't talk so much nonsense, right? Np

Forget it, the key point is that the author always complains about it. It's really ridiculous. To be honest, for example, the protagonist knew about his life experience, and then complained that the novel changed the world background and so on. Can't you write it well? Do you have to do this? The other thing is water. Who knows, no one else is as passionate as other Pirates fans. The author always emphasizes that the protagonist is handsome and temperamental. Don't put too much emphasis on appearance. To be honest, when people read novels nowadays, the main character will be just okay. Too much emphasis on appearance will make the protagonist look girly, and it also favors female fans. It's not that I look down on female fans, but female fans like to write about appearance. After all, One Piece is a hot-blooded anime. Why are you doing all this? Stop talking and read other novels

It's okay, but the author restricts the protagonist's abilities too much. It's a bit boring to watch. I don't even see the protagonist's strength getting significantly stronger. Especially since the fruit is picky, it's not interesting. Since you have arranged the ability of this fruit, what's the point of limiting the ability like this?

What nonsense. In 1495, Roger was not dead yet, the new world was still in an era of chaos, the golden lion and other older generation pirates were still hurting each other, the era of the four emperors had not yet come, and the Shichibukai system came out, speechless.

I finally understand why the performance of this book is so poor. I feel that the author is writing a novel in a narrative way, which makes people unable to understand and read it, and the more it becomes boring, the more boring it becomes.