Lord of Wind and Thunder

More updates, more updates, it's so hard to watch

After watching part of it, it was embarrassing to see the protagonist find the medicine for his adoptive father so easily. I said before that I had been looking for it for 10 years but still couldn't find it, but now I found it in someone else's house. Although it is a cool novel, it is not so deliberate, right? Will everyone who has a relationship with the protagonist be able to turn danger into good fortune? I hope that the protagonist's adoptive father's glorious departure in this battle will create a better supporting role, right?

The lord breaks through quite quickly, so I guess this book won't be too long.

The introduction is pretty good, quite attractive, and then I clicked in and read 10 chapters. I don't know where to start with all the shortcomings, so I'll just talk about one fatal problem. The writing is too poor. The character dialogue and story description of junior high school students' compositions are actually not bad at all. Unfortunately, in the words of some great masters, writing mindless white essays also requires basic skills. . No matter how happy you are, I guess the author himself knows it well. He has also submitted it to the niche fantasy category. There is only one suggestion. Don't cut it off if no one reads it like the previous books. If you really want to write a book, please write it well and finish it even if no one reads it. After you finish it, read it yourself and then reflect on how naive you were at the beginning. Take a good look at other people's books and learn more. . Thanks

After reading a few pictures, I subconsciously looked at the update date and found that it was indeed 2019. Your style made me subconsciously think it was a novel I started writing in 2009 😁

A well-written introduction is indispensable for a gentleman 😁

The writing style is relatively immature, the details are somewhat lacking, and the character dialogue is a bit white. For normal conversations, just use normal dialogue. When it comes to expressing some hypocritical nobles or something, use exaggerated words.

Supported by 10 recommendation votes every day, come on, author! ! !

A childish one who has lived as a dog for decades in his previous life. A person who has been severely beaten by reality may not be mature enough but is definitely very stable.

It's very good. Don't be too picky. It's hard to agree with everyone, just x if you don't like it. How could a new book lover read it when he saw a bunch of nitpicks? Give the author some way to survive. You have to be merciful and merciful, at least I think I can see it.

The introduction attracts good young people, and their heads turn when they see the updates...

It looks good, come on, come on, come on.

The introduction is nice, but the rest of it seems dull. I can't say it's not good, I can only say that I didn't watch it any further.

It feels like the author doesn't have much experience. After writing so many chapters, it's like "What happened to Li Yuan..." It's always repetitive, like a running account.

Recommend a vote for the author. Come on and update.

The final exam is here, and there are still a lot of homework piled up, so there is not much time. Updates will depend on the situation.

It's been seventeen days. Why hasn't the author updated?

This book is half a year old. Why did the author remember to update it?

The author's writing skills need to be strengthened, it looks awkward and there are a lot of exclamation marks.

If this book is not written, will the author write another similar lord novel next? I have been waiting for two years.

I have been waiting for this book for more than three years and it has not been updated yet. Alas, I don't know if the author has read it.

It's not that good. If nothing else, the cultivation system at the beginning is definitely a poisonous point.

I have been waiting for 2 years and there is no update yet.