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Spiritual tool, the writing is very creative, keep it up.

Come and see if there are any female readers

I took a look and found that the beginning is pretty good, with no poisonous points and a few bright spots. However, the switching of the protagonist's name seems a bit awkward. Have you seen Nine Star Poisonous Milk? Although the protagonist's name is also switched between two names, they can be identified very clearly. But in your case, one is Zhen Lang and the other is Zhen Qiming. It is a bit difficult to switch. Of course, it may also be my personal reason. I think it is a bit awkward. There is still nothing wrong with the article. I have collected it. Please visit me and comment. Thank you.

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, brother, come on 👍😳

Come on, come on, here I come again, daily updates, I can't get enough of it 😆

Mutual relations.

Well written, not bad, worth reading

It's pretty good-looking and suits my taste. Welcome to return visits from each other

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The writing is good, it has been collected, please visit again!