The Strongest Creation

The sauce is bubbling, and the small bench in the front row is here to report it!

Good book, the author does a lot of publicity. This subject matter should be liked by many people. You can find some corresponding authors to recommend and comment on each other.

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This book is good to read, thank you to the author

Overall. This is a very novel novel. I read two chapters and the pace was a bit fast. There are some things that were not explained clearly. And I can't tell. The author thinks about it himself. If I remember it, I will comment on it. From the two chapters of the novel I read, it is very good and I will invest in it.

It is recommended that you avoid some poisonous points. Some writing methods are no longer suitable for today.

Change the title of the book, your book is an insult to the creation stream.

🙂 Why is it that while emphasizing not to save people randomly to prevent inflated combat power, the protagonist saves people again and again?

I really couldn't stand it any longer. The one who joined the gang said, I'll take it. The protagonist's eyes were filled with tears. Alas, alas, is this the reborn person? I can't bear it anymore, I'm leaving

There is a reason why bookworms generally don't like to read savior-type novels. As long as you write about any betrayal or anything like that, your book is basically over. As long as you write about rebirth or the Virgin ➕ idiot-level intelligence, it's over. . . It's so difficult. When will I read a novel that's not so frustrating? . . . . . Novels are meant to be read by people, to make them fantasize after the frustrations of life. Why do so many authors think that the plot of the story only needs to happen reasonably? No matter how reasonable you are, if you just write about frustration, who would like to read it?

Is the book review section so deserted?

The writing was very vague at the beginning, and the world view was so unclear that I had to go back and read the setting to understand it. Partners came too quickly. At the beginning, I didn't even know the hero's abilities, so they added them one after another, which was very confusing. The male protagonist has a contradictory personality. He is clearly said to be cold but behaves like a virgin. The plot is boring, even if I get something good, I don't seem to be very excited about it, and the writing is very flat. The advantage is that the novel world view and shortcomings are within a tolerable range, and it is a "watchable" type.

I feel like the protagonist has no IQ and is a fool to try. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura, he would have died hundreds of times.

Three of them appeared on the character list. Where are the other three?

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There are very few such good books on Qidian. Com.

After reading more than 10 chapters, the book was okay, but the setting was too complicated and not easy to understand. It is recommended that the author optimize it.

The pig's feet keep growing, but they are still suppressed to death. I'm afraid that if the pig's feet continue to be like this later, won't everyone else die?

Problems with this book: Food, water resources, if you don't roll the dice, there will be no resources. If you roll the dice, you still have to fight the monsters, but the monsters can't be beaten, so most people don't dare to roll the dice. (Don't use the protagonist to see the problem, use the situation of ordinary people, the protagonist is special) Territory resources, the author did not describe the resources of each initial lord's territory itself. Normally, there must be resources, such as: land that can be planted, minerals, small animals, plants, water sources, etc. If there is nothing, it would be too much. (If there are none, this setting is too unfriendly, and it is better to commit suicide.) If the territory has resources, you can survive for a period of time even if you do not expand the territory in the early stage and raise animals for food or collect water. If you don't give rest time, one roll is a monster invasion, and one roll is a monster invasion. After all, you should give a few rest periods without monsters, not more than 5 times, so that all the lords can have an illusion. (Actually, after seeing the protagonist's condition, I very much doubted how the others survived. At first, the protagonist bit him with his teeth, but what about the others? Could it be that the others also survived by biting the monster to death? There are not many people who dare to bite, so most of them will definitely die)

Isn't this just dog licking? As a lord, you have to be manipulated. It's too poisonous. I could tolerate it before. I really can't tolerate this. I'm not Shennong. Forcibly feeding me shit is a bit too much.

Is the author here? I read this book and I feel like I have found a book that I like. Thank you to the author for blessing me.

Personally I think the author wrote it very well. Give me some suggestions of your own. (PS: The current progress is at chapter 200, and I haven't read the rest yet.) In fact, I personally feel that if you are a lord, you can enjoy the attribute bonus of the people below you. For example, Lin Jingjue is the main body, so it can bring Wang Hongjun a physical bonus, which does not need to be too high, such as one percent or one tenth. In other words, the stronger his subordinates, the stronger the lord. Ps: I don't know if it's something wrong with me or something else, but I always feel that it's awkward to be a protagonist with extremely developed attributes. Maybe it's because I've read too many invincible novels.

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This book made me so embarrassed

In the first chapter, the original idiom is "face full of vicissitudes of life", the author wrote "the face is delicate but the eyes are full of vicissitudes of life", this sentence made me vomit.

In the beginning, the Holy Mother Bitch somehow saved a man. I was speechless and just gave up.

The Dice of CreationGod

Another book that I was raised to be a eunuch. Now I don't dare to read the unfinished book.

Your subject matter is quite good, but I don't know how you write it.