Dreaming in the Sky

The writing is very good and very thoughtful. After all, you are in the future era, and I can't say much about the content. But how do you feel that in those tens of seconds, you used the word "water" (maybe it is necessary, you can ignore this), from a future perspective. That Taicang must use the word "future", now is the future! There was no change in your expression. You were sure that the conversation between the two people was so calm, and one of them had just arrived. The mental endurance is a bit too strong. The protagonist should not be more curious now, but should also ask when telling the truth for the first time. There is no sense of substitution in the dialogue. To be honest, it was too brain-burning. I will never read science fiction again. Maybe it's because I can't imagine it. Your environment is too suspenseful, but it's well written and has great ideas. The review was not very good, I don't read much science fiction, it was too brain-burning.

The writing is good, but the plot at the beginning is not very attractive enough. It is recommended to describe the protagonist's situation first, and then slowly introduce the history.

The title of the book generally has a good introduction. The first few dozen seconds were really tiring to read, but it became smoother once I passed it. The writing is good, but this subject requires the author to have strong layout skills and a strong knowledge background. Is the author ready? Wish you success!

Received, please give the author a big boost＾0＾~