The Demon King Has a Lot on His Mind

Now that I have regarded Maodan as the heroine, no plot can poison me.

Lilia's fiancée setting and her entanglement with the previous demon king are just shit. It can't be said to be poisonous. Damn smart. If I just kicked her out, what kind of cuckold is it? Does the demon king want a woman? Someone will watch me convince you

How can I put it this way? The book is really good and you can read it. Although it has some bad points, it is at least better than many new writers starting from now. This demon king theme is not very popular now, but the author really wrote it carefully, which is really not easy. I voted for one of the two monthly votes this month. The book is indeed very interesting, and the plot development is actually very logical. Although the wording of a few paragraphs is a bit unclear (I have only read the third volume now and don't know what will happen next). In fact, if you think about it for a while, you can see that the biggest problem with this book is the opinion of many book friends on the character of General Secretary Ping An. I think the image of Heian created by the author is a bit similar to the Heisei waste in Japan today (I don't know what it means, please use Baidu), the kind who is obviously very smart but indulges in some other fun and loses his own enterprising spirit. The protagonist's power is borrowed from his future self, but the protagonist himself doesn't want to work hard. He can become very strong at once but never thinks about it by himself when encountering problems. All problems basically depend on Number 2. As a demon king, he is more like a puppet and can easily be manipulated. Another problem is that the male protagonist hates English when he first meets the brave. This is actually a major flaw of the book. We should understand and be tolerant of other countries' cultures, but the male protagonist hates these studies like a waste. I think the author can make the male protagonist change in the later period. Another problem is that the male protagonist's personal maid was abducted by the demon clan. The male protagonist did not pay attention to this matter at all for a long time. It was obvious that the person who looked up and looked down did not notice it at all, but only said: Ah, it turns out she didn't go home after she was about to get married. This is actually very problematic, and this situation is absolutely impossible to happen even in real life. A close one. If you leave suddenly, at least you will ask, instead of relying on your own imagination. I was really unhappy with the scene with the office maids, although there were no obvious problems with the plot. But the Demon King clearly has no dignity at all. To put it bluntly, the male protagonist does not look like a devil at all. No matter how easy-going and approachable he is, he shouldn't say to some servants who don't understand respect: Just be cute. This situation requires education. At the very least, we need to learn respect between people. The male protagonist himself has an almost perfect start. There are thugs to send his wife, the food problem is easily solved, and there is a golden finger behind it, but the male protagonist is still unwilling to make progress. He just wants to eat and wait for death, and does not want to work hard. This is undesirable and makes readers upset. The kingdom where the hero lives is also a problem. There are obviously strong men in the kingdom who cannot withstand attacks. And it should be wrong that the kingdom can seem so miserable. After all, the country also needs to be maintained and developed. But this is a new author after all, and writing like this is very worthy of recognition. I still hope the author can listen to some readers' opinions. After all, the story itself is good, and I hope the author can write better and better (it's best if this book doesn't contain eunuchs), because I will still support it.

I can't appreciate this novel. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is still a loser. He still has to worry about being eaten by his subordinates. He has to take a detour when he sees his subordinates. It makes me laugh. Is this called a devil? Still planning to farm? Sneak away, highly poisonous, be careful before entering

I don't understand why the author added a setting of Lilia's fiancée. What did she do for the male protagonist? The male protagonist tried his best to save her and it felt like licking a dog.

Very well written, Huayu cheers for you💪

The sofa belongs to me. Does the author have a group?

It's so poisonous, why doesn't the protagonist improve his strength? And why can the human army approach the Demon King's castle? The character design of the protagonist who breaks down and bursts into tears at every turn is a failure. There are too many poisonous points to watch.

The author's performance is relatively dismal, and it is not easy to persevere I forced myself to read the second volume and couldn't stand it anymore. Maybe because of personal preferences, this book did not attract me. For example, the protagonist does not have a distinct personality (you can only see the nature of a weak chicken), the story is relatively cliched, I was confused when the devil improved the soil (maybe I have poor reading skills), and the treatment of the brave and the saint is also a bit inexplicable There is also "dreaming" similar to the Dream of Red Mansions, which I feel I can't understand. Dream of Red Mansions is for poetry, words, etc., For people to think about. It has a strong literary quality. It is best not to imitate ordinary Internet articles, and it cannot be imitated. It just "shows" the outline to the readers. It would be fine if the subsequent story is interesting, but I am not interested in this kind of story at all... I am very interested in this kind of subject matter, and it is a pity that I have not seen a more interesting book.

Let me tell you how I feel about this book. If you don't agree, don't criticize it. Just pretend you haven't read it. First: This book is written like a Japanese light novel. Maybe the author wrote it based on Japanese light novels. Second: The biggest poisonous point of this book is the creation of the protagonist rather than ntr. To be honest, as long as you write well, don't say ntr. No matter how outrageous you are, men will still read it. This protagonist is simply speechless. He was summoned as a demon king without any thought of improving his strength. This is in a race where strength is paramount, and in a different world. Strength is paramount. The author also emphasized many times that when I saw the place where Lilia was to be conquered, I didn't see any description of the protagonist practicing to improve his strength. He has always been a waste. The protagonist breaks down, bursts into tears, etc. It may not be written that way, but that's how it feels to people. Another impression of the protagonist's character is this (there is such a plot in the book): the protagonist captures the brave man, and during the interrogation the two of them do not understand each other. The brave man speaks English and is a middle school student. The brave man directly speaks a long paragraph in English at the beginning (the content is not important and the protagonist cannot understand it anyway). After hearing this, the protagonist holds his head and wails, rolling on the ground, and the demonic sound penetrates his brain. The author's explanation is that the protagonist has a shadow on English learning... The plot design in the book also makes people feel unspeakably uncomfortable. First of all, there is no plot where the protagonist wants to improve his strength. Second, the book gives the impression that the demons summoned the protagonist and gave him a girl and a throne. As a result, the protagonist is a complete loser. He needs strength but no ability, and he has no character. Third, the protagonist is unprepared for the captured brave man, so you believe her when she says she surrenders? You may ask why, she is a brave man and you are the devil, you can accept the surrender, it is always right to be more careful and careful. The protagonist also trusts the lords and maids around him too much, giving the impression that the trust level is 100.