Onmyoji of Uchiha

I once thought that people who watch Naruto should be older and more sensible, but I didn't expect that the result is still as childish as a few years ago. In the early years when Weasel became popular, I told him that his core values ​​were not up to par and he couldn't brag about them every day. Now, Tenten Black Itachi, I wonder if you are honorary Uchihas? It's like killing you. Don't you look at people and things from both sides? Everyone is old enough to see that Naruto's work itself has huge flaws. Itachi obviously loved the village, but he only left his younger brother behind, not the younger baby. This was my favorite point about Itachi in the first place. After that, he threatened his existence for the sake of his younger brother, which caused the character's style to drop again and again. But does such an extremely inconsistent person really exist? In addition, every character in the film is extremely contradictory. The reason for all this is that the time span of the work is too long. If Itachi really killed the entire clan for the sake of the village, I can understand that this person is a person who loves the collective, but killing the entire clan is too much. The failure was that he actually transformed into a younger brother in the later stage? As for whether Uchiha can be guilty, I think so Because Uchiha's arrogance comes from blood, isn't the reality reflected by racial discrimination? The essence of reality is class struggle. But Uchiha is not. It is a purely racial struggle. Uchiha will not intermarry with foreigners, and Uchiha are naturally more cheating than others, which will inevitably form populism. This can be seen from the patriarch's attitude how deep Uchiha's populism is (of course I don't think ab thought of this, after all, Country M was still a "free and equal" country at that time) Is it right to exterminate the nation? Wrong! Big mistake! Genocide is also undoubtedly racial persecution, which is absolutely untrue. From my basic knowledge, there is only one way out for Uchiha, either to become a purely populist country (I think this book will disappear) or to let the new blood leave the family and reduce the sense of belonging to the family. Finally, let me comment on Weasel. He should be the kind of person who wanted to change the country during the Republic of China but led the wolf into the house (I did not imply certain people). The idea is good, but the method is wrong. It is right to be reviled by history, but we should learn something from them.

Anyway, I think the most inhuman characters of Naruto are Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Obito. These two are really not things. It's my personal opinion.

Bookworm Shen Nong's Guide to Poison Testing: The writing quality of this book is basically the same as that of Naruto, which has about 40,000 recommendation votes, but it is estimated that due to the secondary design and recommendation, the results are not ideal. The logic of this book is acceptable, the characters basically match the original character, the plot is quite novel, but it contains a lot of secondary settings (which can be brought back), and the world view is integrated with Onmyoji, but even those who have never played Onmyoji can read it. In general, it is suitable for casual book lovers, but not for serious book lovers. Friends who are particularly obsessed with the original Naruto setting may find it uncomfortable. The protagonist has a relatively Buddhist character, with no bitterness or hatred. The style of this book has nothing to do with darkness. It is not suitable for book lovers who like dark and behind-the-scenes stories, but is suitable for book lovers who like to relax and relax. This book has an original female protagonist, and I personally think that there are too many emotional descriptions. I personally like books that have no emotional drama at all.

There is something about the author's detailed description of the characters. Every smile, every word and every action can be said to make them come alive. The characters in the book, especially the portrayal of the protagonist, give people a sense of "same kind" intimacy. For example, Sasuke who arrived in the monster territory is like his nephew in reality; for example, Yuan is like his girlfriend when he was a student or even his wife in his first marriage. The author does not break away from the "people" in reality to create, but subtly combines his "creative consciousness" with "social existence". I think this is the most rare thing. The protagonists of some Naruto novels are either playful and ruthless, or cold-blooded and ruthless. These are indeed refreshing at first glance, but the novelty cannot last long. Furthermore, this book rarely breaks out of the category of "ninja" and looks at the ninja world from the perspective of Onmyoji. It further expands what can be shown to readers and greatly enriches the way the main plot progresses. Looking at my short novel reading experience, from the beginning, I longed for the novelty of the bizarre fantasy world, to now I enjoy the recognition of three views in Shu Chang's writing. I personally think that the protagonist can always retain a touch of human kindness in the complicated world, whether it is for all living beings or the love of a small family, it is extremely touching. The words of one family are ridiculous.

I really don't understand why so many people just call poisonous without even looking at the background setting clearly written in the introduction. I think the setting of poisonousness is at least right. The feeling of seeing this is like a bunch of comments asking why terms can be moved in some short videos about solving linear equations in elementary schools. Personally, I think that on the basis that Kishimoto's original work will not be backstabbed (no Boruto plz), the author's second setting is self-consistent (the era of Uchiha Jiri's activities belongs to the legacy of the animation conflict, leaving aside the issues left over from the animation conflict), and the characterization of the characters is at least in line with me who has come from animation shooting. According to the understanding of more than ten years of fans who have been following the story until the end, the first few chapters of meeting Sasuke did have language descriptions that were laid out too quickly, and the image of the protagonist has not yet begun. It seems a bit embarrassing, but after seeing that it actually fits the character, I feel that the main reason is that the pace of the dialogue is a little faster (only at the beginning). Generally speaking, as an old reader who has been reading Naruto fanfics for more than ten years, the quality of this book is very high. Of course, there are also reasons why fans of the second setting who were backstabbed by the original version read too much when it was updated before the end of Naruto. Even everyone thought Orochimaru was the final BOSS), the plot is also very compact, and there are some signs of transitioning to the behind-the-scenes style in the follow-up, but it can be seen that the author should have a main outline, and if he has the motivation to write it down, it can be completed normally. The monthly vote has been voted (I think I have already voted, I forgot x after writing the comment).

Dancing King Uchiha Madara

Sasuke's character has a very high intention, and the core is revenge. Generally, revenge-oriented characters can refer to anime characters such as Lelouch. However, in order to forcefully wash away the character of Itachi, the author of Naruto made Sasuke's revenge a joke, which in turn made Sasuke's character a joke. He was nicknamed the two pillars. Later, Sasuke even became Itachi's appearance, and the character completely collapsed.

One less

The writing is great The characters are very restored and even more brilliant Naruto is a work full of loopholes. It is really not excellent in terms of setting and plot, but the author's second setting has closed many loopholes The plot development is also very natural, not Cheesy, not embarrassing The only thing that makes me feel a little uncomfortable is the heroine. She was fine at first, but then every time I would jump over her. I didn't want to see her inexplicable coquettishness and a love story that wasn't sweet or touching at all. Just a real-life love brain is disgusting.

The first chapter of this novel persuades me to quit. The author said that the protagonist is a native, and then he did not know that his family was exterminated for five years, and that the fourth Hokage died for twelve years. . . . Are these real aborigines who were just dug up from being buried in the soil?

Good guy, as the direct bloodline of the ancestor of Chakra, there is no Chakra, so you might as well start with a stranger. In the past, when writing about Naruto and Pirates, they all liked to add domestic Qi, internal strength, etc., But now they all like to overturn the original settings.

I would like to make a suggestion. Fan readers are all about the plot. The original plot should fit the world view of the original work. The author involves too much personal life. Although the original work does not have the demon clan, Onmyoji, etc., It is not unacceptable. But what we want to look at is the interaction between the protagonist and the original plot, which is new. The butterfly effect that things have on the original world, no matter what the consequences are, good or bad, justice or evil, it doesn't matter. Now you are writing about the demon clan which takes up a lot of space. A small supporting character has to write a memoir. This is not interesting and not many people will read it.

As far as the Hyuga family's eye opening rate and the Byakugan's success rate are concerned, there is no caged bird. The Byakugan should become a hard currency in the black market... Unlike the Sharingan, which has a low eye opening rate, but opening it means cheating, the Byakugan opening rate is too high. Basically, the Hyuga family can open it, which is a qualitative improvement to the real side. , But there is no qualitative leap, and although there is the possibility of evolution, it lacks the stable medium shape of the Kaleidoscope and the Eternal Kaleidoscope. Without the ability to evolve into the reincarnation eye, the upper limit is too low... If there is no caged bird, Asuma's price tag will not be tens of millions, but a few white eyes...

Male Mom

On a whim, I typed some words while squatting. (Mainly written for new friends who have not read the article.) 1. Because many people have left messages asking about the identity of the protagonist, I would like to explain here that the protagonist of this book is not a time traveler, but an aborigine. (Please don't ask me what kind of indigenous people are the characters who don't appear in the original work. Can you treat it as a parallel world?) 2. Based on the settings of the original work, this book mixes in some other content, such as monsters, onmyoji, etc., And also provides alternative interpretations of some events and characters. It seems that there will be plots related to the original work, but they will be less compared to other works. (The author who followed the plot of the original work has also read too much and wants to write some ideas of his own. If you are a friend who can't accept it, I can only say that you and I are not meant to be together) 3. Regarding the question of uncle or uncle, many readers will think that the author is a person without common sense after reading the first chapter. I don't want to be labeled as having no common sense, so I'd better try to explain it. When the article was originally written, the author originally wrote about his uncle. During the process of coding, an idea suddenly came to the author's mind, that is, how to say uncle in Japanese? I checked online for a long time, um... It seems they are all called uncle? So he quickly changed it to uncle. Later, I found that this had become a point for everyone to complain about, and then I came to my senses. This is an Internet article, but there is nothing wrong with writing about an uncle! ! Maybe everyone will get used to it. It's just that Wen had already signed the contract at that time, and the title of the book said uncle. Think about it, it's very troublesome to change it, so I just ignored it in the end. …… (Use this point to attract more complaints from everyone, and the author can also see more comments.) The above should be the points that people complain about more. If new friends can't accept it, then please go find your favorite book to read. (Can you just walk away silently and don't scold me?)

To be honest, even the elderly and children were not spared. Konoha did survive, and the death of the third generation in the original work was also a tacit understanding between the Ninja clan and the Hokage lineage. The original third generation died without the help of the Ninja clan, because the Ninja clan no longer trusted the third generation, whether it was Hatake or Aburame Hinata, and the third generation himself wanted to die with all the darkness of Konoha, leaving a clean Konoha to the fifth generation. I also give an explanation to the Ninja clan. The political methods of the Three Generations are really high.

This Naruto fanfic is written with new ideas, especially the setting of Onmyoji monsters and gods on Omyoki's invasion of Naruto's Earth is good. It's much better than many other Naruto fanfics that fall into tragic plots of revenge and can't get out of the plot. I hope I can finish it!

Don't mention it, the third generation of black men is the current mainstream. I feel that he is evil and did not take care of Naruto, his son, his wife, and himself who were not sacrificed for his wood industry. A politician must think about the problem from the overall perspective. No one is perfect, and there are always people who sacrifice part of it. Now a lot of people are complaining about Liu Bei.

After reading a third of it, I felt that although there were still some minor issues with the setting, it was still a good Naruto fanfic overall, so I just clicked and fully subscribed. I didn't expect that it would suddenly become more complicated later on. What a mistake.

Cherry

What is the origin of Uchiha Li? You have to explain this, right?

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It's really well written, and the second setting is also very reasonable.

The content is okay and the story is pretty good but the writing of the final battle is terrible. Whether it's Kaguya's battle or the cruel battle, the writing is really horrible and embarrassing to watch There's no sense of passion at all. I wanted to write about the feeling of everyone gathering together to fight the boss, but it didn't happen at all. It was all about the protagonist crushing him all the way. To be honest, this is a big failure. Is the protagonist trying to crush the flow or is the crowd united to resist the flow? The two are mixed and look neither fish nor fowl, leaving only a lot of embarrassment in the end 😅

The first 200 chapters are very good, but the rest is emmmm

Too bland and lacking in drama

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The writing is good, why isn't it popular? The subject of Onmyoji is too niche🐴?

Is this a eunuch? I spent ten points to subscribe to ask! ! !

I'm just asking if it's a harem. I don't care if Naruto is a harem, but if it's Mugen-ryu, I prefer a harem. After all, there are some characters I like.